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Post by delitelia on Apr 12, 2008 15:03:19 GMT
It's a pretty nice start; and the view of their background together gave it something special. Thanks for the credit, I just wanted to give you a suggestion; could you write the lyrics in italics; it'll look btter.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 12, 2008 17:55:17 GMT
Thanks Deli, and you're welcome for the credit.
Sure, I can do that. I just hope I can find the italics button.
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Post by GoldenFlither on Apr 12, 2008 18:31:38 GMT
Sorry I haven't posted here for a while. It's been a mighty busy week for me. Prettywitch, I loved that. I love the detail and the dialogue. You're such a great writer. Can't wait for more. ^^  Does anybody remember this? XD |
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Post by delitelia on Apr 12, 2008 18:36:09 GMT
... No really ^^;, sorry.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 12, 2008 18:39:33 GMT
Oh yeah, I remember that sig. We wanted one that looked like a tender moment between them, if I remember correctly.
It's nice to see you back Goldie! And I'm glad to know you like the story so far. You can expect a little bit more for tomorrow.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 12, 2008 18:40:49 GMT
Tomorrow? Cool!
And it's a nice sig.
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Post by GoldenFlither on Apr 12, 2008 18:48:53 GMT
I can't wait, Prettywitch. Finally. Something to look forward to.  *laughs* Apparently, that's the only tender moment between them in the show. |
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Post by delitelia on Apr 12, 2008 18:53:40 GMT
Well there aren't much, I'm guessing we're fans of the couple for the way we see each one of them and how would they work out together.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 12, 2008 20:35:58 GMT
You've pretty much hit the nail on the head Deli. While it's true that there isn't much of 60/ 362 together, it doen't mean that we can't make something out of it.
Now since Goldie's back today, I've decided to put up a new topic discussion for today. Love for someone else is usually a trait that other people who are observing usually don't catch onto until they begin to see hints of that love being shown, a common theme used in many fictions and shows. That said, here's the question.
How would you reveal Rachel and Patton's love for each other?
For Patton, I would start it out with him always being very obidient of her every command. Then I'd gradually begin to show him being willing to risk his life for her sake. Then finally, I'd have him out on a balconey, going on a somewhat guilt trip about a recent situation in which he couldn't protect her. He is then confronted by a few people( Nigel and Abby), who are concerned about him. He then ends up pouring out his heart, revealing to them that he is in love with Rachel.
For Rachel, I would start it out by having her constantly worry about him, blaming herself when he becomes hurt from trying to protect her. This would be done to clearly show the audience that Rachel does in fact love him, she just doesn't realize it herself. Then eventually I'd have her thinking about him constantly, her being unsure as to why this is happening. Only to realize her feelings as she begins to analyze their relationship together, and what she feels for Patton.
What do you guys think?
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Post by delitelia on Apr 12, 2008 21:51:21 GMT
From Patton's part I'd say he would try to make things better than anyone else and be in every single mission Rachel is in. Also trying to be there for her being as he would be able to tell when she's upset or sad. Later on she would ask why he's always nice to her and there he goes telling her how special she's for him.
From Rachel's part; I think she would always try to ask him for advise and calling constantly to the Artic base 'to make sure everything is ok'. Try to have him close to her during missions and also bringing him up someway or another to the conversations. After that some operative would ask her why she's always talking about Numbuh 60 and that's when Numbuh 362 realizes her feelings for him are deeper than she ever thought.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 12, 2008 22:22:54 GMT
Oh yeah. I totally forgot about him always being the one one to comfort her when she's sad, and him always showing his sweetness around her. These are ideas I have also thought of myself Deli. But regardless, I do enjoy your suggestions.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 12, 2008 23:54:28 GMT
Thanks, yours are nice too. Let's see what the others think about this topic.
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Post by GoldenFlither on Apr 13, 2008 1:11:16 GMT
I agree with Delitelia on both aspects. Although we don't know much about Patton, through a fan's perpective, it's just like Patton to do such a thing for Rachel.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 13, 2008 2:52:51 GMT
Very true.
To me, Patton would be the type to allow his sensetive side to surface more around Rachel, mainly because she brings out his true heart whenever she's around him.
And since I really do think that Rachel and Patton really do care about each other, it would only make sense that when either one is sad, they will comfort the other.( I hope what I just typed there makes sense).
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Post by GoldenFlither on Apr 13, 2008 3:00:31 GMT
It makes perfect sense. Gosh, that was deep. ^^
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