60/362 Thread III

[delitelia]

Cool, it's pretty intersting and it'll be great to see Hoagie using his skills as a detective to help Patton.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Yeah, I kind of added the Hoagie part at the last minute. But regardless, I think it'll work.

Again, this is a story that I may never write. But once again, you never do know just when your creativity tells you to pick up that pen and start to write.

[delitelia]

You're right; creativity hits you when you less expect it. Hope it does hit you; it's a very interesting plot.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Thanks Deli. Since I'm waiting for either Goldie or Numbuh 1362 to come back before we start our next topic discussion, how's about a new story concept.

This is based on a little sub plot that went on in Sailor Moon R, for those of you curious.

In this story, Father has discovered that he has now gained two new powers, one that can invade peoples dreams, and another which can send people into a trance like sleep. Deciding to use these new found powers to his advantage, he continuously enters Pattons' subconcious, filling his head with premonitions telling him that if he stays anywhere near Rachel, she will be killed as a result of fate.

Worried for his love, Patton begins to act coldly towards Rachel in an attempt to distance himself from her. This causes Rachel to become heart broken, for she is unsure as to why he's acting this way, and causes Patton himself to be rather depressed, for he misses her greatly.

But one night, Rachel goes on a mission with Sector V and Fanny to the Delightful Manor to get her mind off the situation. Only to be facing Father, who reveals to her the reason why Patton has been avoiding her. Using his other new power on her, Rachel begins to fall into a deep slumber, and if she is not awakened by sunrise, she will sleep for all eternity.

As Sector V and Fanny scramble to find a cure, Nigel goes to Patton's house to tell him of the situation and convince him to help. At first Patton says no, but with a little convincing from Nigel, as well as what his heart is telling him to do, he and Nigel rush back to the scene.

Upon reaching their destination, Patton takes his beloved in his arms and kisses her, causing Rachel to awaken before the sun rises. Afterwards, the two make up, bringing momentary peace to their relationship once again.

[numbuh1362]

AWW!! i love your story idea! it made my heart melt...

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Thanks Numbuh 1362.

I guess with you back here I might as well start a brand new topic discussion. Here it goes.

We all know that when two people love each other so much that they want to spend the rest of their lives together, they usually get married. However, some have known to skip the wedding, becoming life partners as a result. That said, here's the question.

Would Rachel and Patton become life partners, or man and wife?

I personally see them getting married and having a child named Teresa. But on the other hand I also see them as being ones to skip the wedding. My reason being on the second one that I don't really think Rachel's overly romantic, but I do think that she just might want a wedding. I guess it all depends.

What do you guys think?

[delitelia]

I'd say they would live sometime together just like that so they could see how it would work out; it would all depend on the results if they decide to marry or not: If they think marriage would bring them closer and really make them feel conected then they would do it without a second thought; on the other hand, if they think compromise is only going to make them nervous around each other then they would skip marriage. I don't think they're afraid of compromise though.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

True. Rachel and Patton are almost fearless, so I agree with you about them not being afraid of compromise Deli.

[delitelia]

Yeah; I mean Rachel did have her moment during IT but she realized that being the KND leader is something she was meant to be; she's a great leader and she surely knows how to do the job.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Defenitly. Rachel is an amazing leader, for she has confidence in herself and in others, and she never gives up. A trait I have come to love about her. I'm also sure it would be a reason as to why Patton would be attracted to her as well.

[numbuh1362]

i would say life-partners because of their jobs,{cuz they would probley make it into the AND}

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Probably. Rachel and Patton are the type for adventure, but you never know.

Oh, I just want you guys to know that I'll be posting the first few part of the 'Guardian Angel' songfic this weekend. So now I'm sure that I've given you guys something to look forward to for this weekend.

[delitelia]

Cool! It'll be great to finally read it Prettywitch! Even if it's only a part of it.

[numbuh1362]

i agree with dei! ^_^ can't wait!

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Thanks guy! I'll have to PM Goldie about this too, seeing's as how she hasn't been here for awhile.

Anyway, here is the first part of my new fic( as well as my first attempt at a songfic and POV fic).

Guardian Angel

By Prettywitchiusaka
Story Concept by Delitelia
Song by Red Jumpsuit Apparatus

As a Drilovsky, I Patton have come from a long line of war heros, heros that have fought long and hard to protect the innocent. Inheriting their strength and passion for justice, I entered an organization known as the KND at an early age, graduating from the academy when I was seven. It has led me to the greatest experiences of my life, but it has alos led me to what I consider most precious to me. That, is my beautiful angel, my true love, my Supreme Leader, Rachel McKenzie, Numbuh 362.

When we first met, I thought that she was the most beautiful creature I had ever laid my eyes on, but at first we didn't really get along. Mainly because I thought she was a pompous snob, and she thought I was an over confident bully. But after one training simulation together, we realized we had been wrong about each other, and became friends from that point on. As our friendship grew, I began to wonder why it was that I always became flustered whenever she would smile or do something nice for me, it always made me wonder why I'd stare at her dreamily as she would become stern and not let anyone step all over her, and it certainly made me wonder as I began to put my life on the line for her. It wasn't until our graduation day that I had come to relaize, that I had fallen in love with her.

As we went through our KND careers, I became the head Drill Sergeant of Arctic Base while she became the top KND espionage, later becoming Supreme Leader after the former one betrayed us. As those years began to pass, my love for her only increased and deepened. It got to the point where now I've fallen so deeply in love with her, that I would do anything she desires, I would even go as far as to die, all for her sake.

When I see your smile
Tears roll down my face, I can't replace
And now that I'm strong I have figured out
How this world turns cold and breaks through my soul
And I know, I'll find, deep inside me, I can be the one

The day started out warm and sunny as we headed towards Arctic Base in the S.C.A.M.P.E.R. for some research we had to do. Herbie, or Numbuh 65.3 drove the vehicle, while Pete and Peter, or Numbuhs 44A and 44B looked over the computer system. Rachel sat in the center chair of the vehicle while I sat in the chair just to the left of her, watching the usual stern look present upon that beautiful face of her's.

N362: Numbuh 44B, give me a coordinates update.

N44B: Arctic Base is near. We should be there in about 10 minutes.

N362: Has the Code Module been delivered yet?

N44B: The Code Module is being delivered as we speak.

N362: Good. Thanks you Numbuh 44B.

N44B: You're welcome sir.

N44A: Aww! How come she never calls on me?

N44B: Because I'm smarter.

N44A: Are not!

N44B: Are too!

N44A: Are not!

N44B: Are too!

N362: Stop it! Both of you!

N44A & B: Yes sir.

I chuckled slightly as the two twins began to cower in fear. It always amused me how Rachel was able to make people cower in fear, just from her becoming angry or losing her patience. Her assertiveness is just one of the many traits that made me fall in love with her. Suddenly, I shook my head as I realized that I was acting like a dazed fool. Snapping out my trance, I sighed heavily and looked to the ground somewhat annoyed.

You're probably wondering that if I love her, why have I not told her how I feel. Well, the thing is is that I would, but I'm pretty sure I know how she feels. I believe that Rachel only views us as close friends, and I'd rather not burden her with my feelings. Lately though, the urge to tell her how I truly feel has become stronger, I guess it mainly proves how deeply I've fallen in love with her, but regardless, I know I can't tell her how I feel. Still, my heart is telling me that it is the right thing to do. It was then that I made my decision, no matter what her reaction will be, I will tell her how I truly feel. That no matter what, she is someone precious to me.

Off-Screen: Is something wrong?

Upon making my decision, I looked up to see a pair of innocent chocolate brown eyes staring at me. Those eyes belonging to none other than the object of my thoughts and affection, Rachel herself. This made me blush a light shade of pink, for I hadn't expected her to come up so suddenly.

N60: N-No, nothing's wrong. Why are you asking?

N362: Well, you just looked sort of troubled.

N60: Well, I sort of was until just recently.

N362: Oh, well that's nice to know you sorted things out. I don't mean to pry but, what was it that was troubling you?

N60: Well...there's something I've been wanting to tell you for a long time, but I kept my feelings in about the situation because I wasn't sure as to how you would react if I told you. But now I've decided that no matter what your reaction is, I'm going to tell you what I've been meaning to say for so long.

N362: Alright then. So...what is it you want to tell me?

N60: Well...it's kind of private, so is it alright if I tell you later, like maybe, after the mission?

N362: Sure, I can wait. Just don't forget.

N60: Oh, terribly sorry, but not everyone can have a photographic memory like you.

N362:( laughs) Sorry, I couldn't resist. But anyway, I'm sure I'll have a favorable reaction to whatever it is you want to tell me.

N60: Somehow...I think you will too.

I will never let you fall
I'll stand up with you forever
I'll be there for you through it all
Even if saving you sends me to heaven

To be continued...