60/362 Thread III

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Go ahead and concentrate, but hopefully you can sneak in the computer. With Goldie busy, Numbuh 1362 and Deli having both vanished, I won't really have anyone to talk to for the week.

Sweet! Now I've got something to look forward to.

Oh, in case you're on here later, do you mind if I post a new story concept?

[fangirl4315]

Yeah. But still, I can sneak in even for a few minutes so don't worry. And what happened to Deli? and Numbuh 1362? I barely see them here anymore.

Sure, no problem.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Oh, that's good. To be honest, I'm not sure where they are either. Numbuh 1362 I haven't heard from on this forum in awhile, but I've heard nothing or seen nothing from Deli in the last few weeks. I'm beginning to think that something might have happened to her, or she's back in school and is really busy. I sure hope it's option B.

Anyway, in the story concept, Rachel is thinking hard about the last mission she had with Patton, in which he became injured in an effort to protect her. As she thinks about this, she is interrupted by Kuki, Abby, and Alex( fan character), who are on break from a mission they just got back from and are hanging around the Global Command cafeteria.

Noticing that Rachel's glum, they ask her what's wrong. She pours out her feelings to them, telling them that she feels guilty for Patton getting injured on their recent mission, feeling that she brings him nothing but pain. Rachel tells them that she wishes she knew how to help, but she isn't quite sure as to how to help. The girls however, tell her that all she needs to do is smile and he'll be happy.

At first, Rachel does not believe them. But when Patton shows up, something funny happens and the two begin to laugh. He stops to watch her smile, making Rachel finally realize that the girls were right. Aftrewards, she apologizes for what happened on the mission, but he tells her it's alright, telling her that as long as she's safe and happy, that's all that matters to him.

[fangirl4315]

Yeah, I hope it's option B too.

Wow! Such an adorable concept! Shucks, thoughts of nervousness and guilt, that's some intake. But still, a happy ending is a happy thing.

And I might be posting a one-shot of mine in DeviantArt today. It may not be 60/362, but I sure want someone to read it.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Hopefully it is option B. Although mind you, I'm just a complete worrywart, so I may be over reacting again.

Thanks. I always thought it would be just a cute little idea that I sort of had lying around. But I do think that Patton loves to see her smile, since A) He thinks her smile is beautiful, and B) It proves to him that she's happy.

Really? Sure, I'll read it.

[fangirl4315]

Yeah. I'm also a worrywart at times.

Yeah. Relationships need smiles and a lotta love ^^.

Oh, thanks!

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Really? Glad to know I'm not the only one.

Anyway, I really liked the story. I simple, but meaningful chat between Abby and Nigel in the aftermath of the ZERO incident. Looking back on it, they should have had some closer between the two. I mean really, Abby sacrificed herself so that her team could get out of there. Although I'm still rather pissed off that they made her go first!

Overall though, the story is really good, and very heart wraming. I liked it.

Speaking of ZERO, didn't it burn your eyes to see the characters like that. Poor Patton! He lost his hair! And Abby and Rachel, their beauty! Their beautiful faces! Gone! Diminished! Reduced to nothing! Why!? WHY!? Sorry, I went a little crazy there.

[fangirl4315]

Yeah, me too. Or else I might think I have a sort of illness or something.

Yeah. Thanks, glad you like it. And yeah, they shouldn't've made her go first! But at least that's another proof for my 1/5 proofs list. I got a ton of proofs. I got an eye for these little things.

Yeah! But really, first I played the game at CN.com. I WAS SHOCKED TO SEE NIGEL TURN LIKE THAT WHEN I LOST!!! AND WHEN I SAW ABBY, AAAAAAAAAH! MY EYES WERE SHOCKED! AND THE OTHERS, WAAAAAAAAA! It's so weird.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Trust me, I'm such a worrywart that half the time I'm acting like the sky is falling.

You're very welcome. I'm also happy that you agree with me, Abby had no right to go first in my opinion.

I never played the game on the CN site, but I do recall watching my brother play it a few times. Oh, poor Rachel! Why must GF have bad taste in appearance for his minions!?

You know what's sort of funny is that my next topic discussion sort of comes back to ZERO. I can post it later, or tomorrow if you want or are on here. I hope that Deli comes back, I'd really like to hear her opinion on this next one.

[fangirl4315]

He has bad taste because he IS a bad taste XD.

Well, you can post it now. I'll try to sneak again.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Very true. Although you got to admit that GF has a pretty cool design, as well as an awesome voice.

Anyway, I suppose I can get that topic discussion up as of now.

While the citizombie's are rather disgusting creatures, to me they are also rather intersting creatures to explore and experiment with. While it is true that they have no mind set other than what GF tells them to do, to me it seems that with that state of mind they're almost of an extension of GF himself. What I mean is is that when you become a citizombie, it's not that you really become evil, but more so that the darkness in your heart overtakes you, which leaves the possessed's personality, but not their heart. That said, here is the question.

Would it be possible for the Citizombie Patton has feelings for Rachel?

To me, the answer is both yes and no. On the yes side( if Patton were in love with Rachel) it would make sense. Seeing's as how when Kuki and Wally became citizombie's, their feelings for each other remained in tacked. On the other hand I say no. My reason for this is because I feel that the citizombies are seperate enteties from the ones who become them( such as how the Astral Drops are seperate entities from the Guardians that they're created from). So to put it bluntly, if the real Patton's true love is the real Rachel, then the citizombie Patton's true love is the citizombie Rachel.


What do you guys think?

[fangirl4315]

Yeah, sure. He possibly could. I mean, even if they're under Grandfather's control, that doesn't mean that their whole obligation is to serve him. They also have feelings, except twisted, because they've gone to the dark side. I think yes because, if he has feelings for her, what could stop him? Responsibility? That's not right.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

True. The citizombie's do have feelings, but I will agree with you that their feelings are rather twisted.

If I may ask Jam, what do you mean by that's not right?

[fangirl4315]

It's not right if responsibility gets in the way of true love. That I'll be showing in GND vs. BND. Oh, and I have made a starting piece of 60/362 in GND vs. BND. Not to spoil but:

SPOILER: Click to show

While Nigel and Abby walked to their room, Patton Drilovsky looked for the blonde trainee of his, Robert. But he doesn’t know Robert is actually a Rachel. He just walked and walked towards the next hallway, and bumped into someone.

“Hey, watch it, buddy,” the person he bumped into said.

“Sorry dude,” Patton said.

He faced his fellow BND operative and saw Robert.

“Hey… uh, I don’t recall seeing your face around here, not that I accuse you of being a girl or anything, if that’s what you’re thinking that I’m thinking, well, uh…”

“Umm… dude, advice; calm down!” Rachel told him.

“Sorry. Hey, you’re Robert, right?” Patton asked.

“Yeah, so?” Rachel asked.

“Well, Sir Samuel told me that I will train you and we’ll be roommates and junk, so, come on,” Patton said.

“Really? Fine,” Rachel said, in a sarcastic tone.

She felt that she met Patton, but she felt it is sort of a bad start, with his nervous stammers and all.

It's a bad start, but don't worry. It'll prevail.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Oh, that's what you meant. Very true. Poor Patton, I've always felt that even if Rachel forgave him for that whole fiasco, he always had guilt lingering him about allowing mind control to overcome his feelings for his leader.

I liked the little piece, it's a cute way to start off what will become lovers by the time the story ends. I wonder if Patton will tease 'Robert' or not. And if so, will Robert/Rachel respond back with one of her usual sarcastic remarks?