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[Prettywitchiusaka]

Hopefully you can convert him. The more KND fans we convert, the bigger the community is. And if not, he can probably just enjoy a really awesome fight scene.

Now as for the concept, it takes place in the aftermath of the TREATY incident( not following the twist ending with Chad saying the SplinterCell doesn't exist), as well as the scene I invented in which Patton saves Rachel from falling to her death. Rachel decides that she wants to get over her fear of heights, in case something like that should ever happen again.

Originally she wanted to ask Nigel, as he uses his jet boots more often. But since he's rather busy, she opts for Patton, who decides to take a break from his busy work schedule in order to help her. Getting her her own jet pack, he goes through with her the basics, and on how the backpack's functions work.

Things start to go smoothly, as Rachel begins to enjoy flying. However, the backpack malfunctions, leading Patton to save her. But after crashing into a local ice cream vendor, the two can't help but laugh at the situation. Rachel then tells Patton that if she had done this with anyone else, she might have been a little more scared. But since he was there with her, she felt that he gave her more courage. This statement causes Patton blush.

Taking her home later for the night, the two seal the day with a kiss, with Rachel thanking Patton one more time.

[fangirl4315]

Yeah. But if he doesn't mind the couples, I don't know what he wants XD.

Ooh, that's an interesting one. Falling on an ice cream vendor, a classic comedy. And the seal *cough...cough...kiss...cough*, that's so adorable!

[Prettywitchiusaka]

True enough. Maybe ask him what couples he likes and see if he shows any signs or hints of liking the Desk Jockeys.

Thanks for the comment. I thought it would be cute, as well as intersting for them to have a little accident, and then laugh at it instead of Rachel being upset by the accident. And of course I have to seal it with a kiss, they are boyfriend and girlfriend in this story after all.

[fangirl4315]

Yeah. All I know is, he's into Cherries and Panda Warriors, but I'll let him spill about the Desk Jockeys.

No problemo. Really, the story is cute.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

I see. Not that I mind if he's a Cherry Lover or Panda Warrior. Hopefully you can crack him and see if he is a Desk Jockey or not. If you can, then he'll defenitly be one of the only male Desk Jockey fans I've ever heard of.

Thanks, the concept is pretty cute. Speaking of concepts, I also have a brand new idea that I haven't completely elaborated on.

In it, Rachel and Patton have gotten into a fight, causing them to ignore each other on end for days. However, both still accept the invitation they both received to Sector V's Christmas party. Both arrive at the party, but never once aknowledge each other. Sector V notices this, and ask Fanny about it.

She explains the situation that Rachel told her about, which prompts the Sector V crew to get the two to stop fighting. But they're not sure how to do this until Kuki devises a plan. So the boys lead Patton into the hallway with an excuse about a villain attacking, and the girls lead Rachel into the hallway with an excuse that they need her opinion on something in one of their rooms. After leaving them, Rachel and Paatton meet up.

The two begin to argue again, or at least until they see Mistltoe hanging above them. Surprised, they turn away from each other, finally coming to the conclusion that even if they're fighting they still love each other. With that in mind, they turn to face each other, and Rachel lunges into Patton. The two then embrace into a passionate kiss.

That's all I've got so far.

[fangirl4315]

OOOOOH! Sounds like one of my concepts for a Christmas Party. It's adorable! At least they got together, and I bet that is their Christmas miracle.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Really? If sounds like I'm copying off you Jam, I'm not. This concept came to me from an old Christmas comic I did for the couple last X-Mas. But I am curious, what was your concept like?

Thanks though. It is a cute concept. And I agree with you, getting them to stop fighting and just be together is without question a Christmas miracle.

[fangirl4315]

Nah, you aren't. My concept is kinda like, Santa giving one wish to one KND operative. Sector V chose to give the wish to Wally. Wally will sorta wish Kuki would like him back. But then his little brother was sick. He had to choose, and he wished Joey is cured. As the miracle goes, he gets his brother well, and Kuki gives him a little gift. That's the main plot, but some aren't mentioned like a dance and some more stuff.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

I see. That's an interesting concept Jam, not to mention that it's very sweet. If you plan to write it, I think this would be one of the best examples of Wally truly having a good heart.

Out of pure curiosity, does the dance take place on MoonBase, or on Earth somewhere?

[fangirl4315]

Thanks. I will write it, but like the title says, it's for Christmas, so it'll take a long time before I write it.

And the dance takes place in the Moonbase, and I'll be adding some interesting characters, like Numbuh 515.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

I had a feeling you'd hold it off until Christmas season. Don't worry, I'm making you guys wait that long for something, so I'm sure I can wait a few months. BTW, who's Numbuh 515? Is he/she a fan character of yours?

I know it's early, but speaking of Christmas, what do you think Rachel and Patton would get each other?

I personally think that Patton would get Rachel an inexpensive, but lovely flowered hairpin for her hair. Rachel I think would get Patton something like a scarf or a new pair of gloves for down at Arctic Base.

[fangirl4315]

Numbuh 515 is my other OC. She's leader of Sector JJ in California. Besides the leader, she plays a mean guitar solo. She's great at music, she's a whiz kid, and a bit of an inventor. She's Penny's childhood best friend. She'll be seen in both the Valentine's one and Christmas. In the Valentine's, Penny'll tell her to play with her band (other members of Sector JJ) in the moonbase for a Valentine's Dance. The same goes for the Christmas, but she'll really play, without Penny telling her to.

Hmm... I'd think Patton'll give her, like what you said, a hairpin. Also maybe a headband or a clip or others, but your idea is great. And yes, I agree Rachel will give Patton a scarf or a new pair of gloves for Christmas, gotta keep warm.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

True. Plus he's always at Arctic Base, so that helps if he's ever really cold.

I see, so Numbuh 515 is another one of your OC's. She sounds pretty cool.

[fangirl4315]

Yeah. I can't handle really cold places.

Yes. She is? Thanks. She's just another excuse for a guitar-playing operative. But now, I think she'll be just as important as Penny.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

I have no doubt that she'll be interesting Jam.

You think you can't handle really cold places? Try living in Canada with really harsh winters.

BTW, I was just watching the Empire of Dreams( a documentary on the making of the first three Star Wars movies), and I just realized that the relationship between Han Solo and Princess Leia sort of reminds me of Rachel and Patton. Or at least it reminds me of how I think their relationship would work, with them being very flirtish, yet serious. Plus Leia and Han end up falling in love so there's an added bonus.

But it's not just in the relationship, it's also in the character's presonalities. Rachel is very strong, feisty, smart, beautiful, and leads an organization, much like Leia. And Patton is very brave, adventerous, and devious, much like Han Solo.