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Post by numbuh1362 on Apr 14, 2008 8:12:36 GMT
hummm true...
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 14, 2008 12:50:55 GMT
I like your idea of Rachel becoming a lawyer Goldie. It fits well with her stern personality, as well as her relentlessness.
And now for the next part of my new one shot!
At least twenty minutes had passed since we began our journey, the storm had died down, but it became colder as we ventured farther into the continent. I didn't mind much because I was used to the Arctic Climate. But I took one look at Rachel, and my eyes shawn with concern at her condition. Her soft hands were now chapped, and she was shivering like crazy. I knew if we stayed out here any longer she'd run the risk of becoming serverely ill, and I couldn't let that happen.
N60: Listen, why don't we just head back to the base? We can continue searching later when it warms up and the storm has died down completely.
N362: No! Not until we find the Code Module.
N60: But if we don't, you'll-
N362: I don't care! Finding the Code Module is more important than my condition right now!
She turned back to the footpath and I sighed annoyingly. Even thought her relentlessness was a trait of her's I admired, it was also a trait of her's that irritated me to no extent, especially when it concerned her own health or safety. If we were going to continue, I knew I couldn't just let her freze to death like this. Looking at my coat gave me an idea, and I quickly took my backpack off, quickly pulling out an emerald green wind breaker from the side pocket. Taking my jacket off, I put the wind breaker and my backpack on. I ran up to Rachel, draping the coat over her, something she was surprised by.
N60: You're going to need something warmer to wear if you want to continue.
N362: But a wind breaker isn't warm enough. You might-
N60: I don't care. You're more important to me than my own health.
I could see a hint of blush on her cheeks as she stared at me, only to turn her beautiful face away from me as she put the coat on. I had expected a thank you, but she never gave me one. Not that I minded, for I knew that she was grateful for my recent gesture. After she put the coat on properly, we began to walk back into the now less blizzardy continent.
Seasons are changing
And waves are crashing
And stars are falling, all for us
Days grow longer and night grow shorter
I can show you I'll be the one
Five minutes had passed since the storm had died down, five minutes since either one of us had spoken. Since I was never one for awkward silences, I opened my mouth in an attempt to start a conversation. But before I could, I heard the beautiful angel like voice that belonged to the girl next to me speak up.
N362: Um...I know I didn't say this before but...thanks for the jacket.
N60: Ah, don't mention it. Besides, I had to do the same thing for Jeff once. Her forgot his jacket at home so I had to lend him mine for the day. (chuckles) He can be such an idiot.
N362: And yet you're good friends with him.
N60: Well, I like him for his good natured ness. Besides, he can be pretty smart on ocasion. I've probably known him almost as long as I've known you.
N362: Yeah...it really has been five years, hasn't it?
N60: Since what?
N362:Since we started working together...and since we stopped being rivals and became friends.
N60: Oh yeah...it really has been.
My heart began to beat faster and I could feel blush creepnig onto my cheeks as she said the word friends. The indication of this could only mean one thing, it was getting harder and harder for me to keep my feelings in.
I will never let you fall
I'll stand up with you forever
I'll be there for you through it all
Even if saving you sends me to heaven
N362: Patton.
N60: Yes Rachel.
N362: You know that thing that you wanted to tell me after the mission?
N60: Yeah, why?
N362: Well... I've been thinking about it. And...there's something I'd like to tell you as well.
N60: Okay...wait a minute, my incompetence as a Drill Sergeant hasn't pissed you off again, has it?
N362: No, nothing like that.
N60: Oh, then what is it?
N362: Well...it's just that...well...I-
Off-Screen: Well look who decided to show up.
To be continued...
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Post by delitelia on Apr 14, 2008 21:31:18 GMT
Nice cliffhanger; this is going pretty well and thanks for following my suggestion: now the difference between normal writing and lyrics is palpable
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 14, 2008 23:30:58 GMT
Thanks for the cliffhangar comment Deli. And you're very welcome with taking your suggestion. I must admit that it does make the lyrics stand out more.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 14, 2008 23:48:49 GMT
Heheh, it's just something from one author to another, no biggie.
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Post by numbuh1362 on Apr 15, 2008 1:00:58 GMT
OH! a cliffhanger! i love it!
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 15, 2008 1:32:57 GMT
Thanks Numbuh 1362. I've noticed you've changed your icon, does this mean you've given up your crush on Patton?
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Post by numbuh1362 on Apr 15, 2008 3:25:34 GMT
no problem!
and no i haven't prettywitch, i changed it because golde made me an advtar and i love it!
but i will always love patton! ^_^
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Post by delitelia on Apr 15, 2008 3:43:36 GMT
That's good to know #1362.
New topic; after a similar topic in the Nizzie thread I was wondering; what do you think would happen if a new boy/girl appeared and actually happened to like one of these two lovebirds?
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Post by numbuh1362 on Apr 15, 2008 3:44:50 GMT
thank you deli,
and with 60 and 362 i have no idea...
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 15, 2008 12:16:22 GMT
Oh, alright then. It is a nice sig Numbuh 1362.
In terms of the question. With Patton, I think he would become incredibly jealous of whoever had their eyes set on his girl, to the point that the two become rivals for her affection. But regardless, the only person in Rachel's heart is Patton.
With Rachel, I think that she would be rather jealous of whoever had their eyes set on Patton, but wouldn't really do anything thing about it because she knows that Patton only has eyes for her. Now if this rival tried to pursue her efforts more just to steal Patton away, then I think Rachel would allow her defenses to go up.
Speaking of topic discussions, expect a new one from me sometime in the next few days. Also expect the fourth part of the Guardian Angel oneshot sometime tomorrow. I'd type it up now, but I'm still kind of tired.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 15, 2008 18:10:28 GMT
Cool!
I think that with Numbuh 362; she would only try to keep Patton away from the other girl in a subtle way as not to start a fight or let the others know she's jealous. Rachel would always call Patton even if ti's to pick up a pencil and show the other girl she's still over her when it comes to the DS.
And I think I agree with you in the way Patton would react.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 16, 2008 0:18:06 GMT
Yeah, Patton to me seems like the type to become jealous of anyone who shows interest in his love interest. Primarily because he's the protective type, so he wouldn't really want anyone to take anything that's important to him.
Oh, BTW, has anyone heard the song 'Hello' by Lionel Richie? I personally think that lyrics match Patton's feelings of what he would consider a hopeless love between him and Rachel.
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Post by numbuh1362 on Apr 16, 2008 0:31:04 GMT
i agree pretty, but it would be funny if rachel got a boyfriend! patton would get so mad! ^_^
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 16, 2008 0:37:58 GMT
Oh yeah, totally!
He'd be so mad that steam would probably be coming out from his ears. Somehow I think that Kuki would make an innocent comment about that if she were there.
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