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Post by GoldenFlither on Apr 23, 2008 22:59:50 GMT
For goodness' sake, Prettywitch. Do you ever cease to entertain us with your fics? Your consistency is awesome.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 23, 2008 23:06:49 GMT
Your ideas sound pretty interesting Prettywitch, they really do. Hope you get the time to write them.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 23, 2008 23:42:04 GMT
Thanks. And the asnwer is no. I really have come to love writing as a pass time. Besides, if my dream to become a succesful voice actress goes down the drain, at least I have something to fall back on.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 23, 2008 23:44:38 GMT
Cool! I'd like to be a voice actress too but, if not, I like to write as well. Anyway, your stories are always inetresting so taking them up to a higher level might work just fine for you.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 24, 2008 21:40:17 GMT
Wow. That's pretty interesting to see that we have the same dream set in mind. Hopefully, we'll both be able to accomplish our dream in whatever way we can.
Before I sign off, I've decided to go more in depth about the two stories I plan to write.
In the first one, Rachel continues to fight Patton, trying to convince him back to his normal state of mind. After seemingly failing, once she asks him if would ever really hurt her, Patton starts to switch back and forth between his two state of minds. As Rachel watches in shock, three other citizombie's come up from out of nowhere. She intends to fight them off, but Patton comes back to his senses and beats up his 'allies'. Afterwards, the two begin to have a conversation, him telling her that he's so sorry he couldn't protect her. But before he can tell her he loves her, he goes back to his citizombie senses, then zombifying his beloved.
And in the other one, Patton has just remembered what happened between him and Rachel. Horrified by what he's done, he rushes off to find her, only to discover her slightly harmed and talking with Nigel. After she finishes her discussion with him, Patton goes over to her and embraces her in his arms. Although rather taken aback by this, she accepts the hug. After having a small conversation, Rachel then leaves to check up on the other operatives, leaving Patton to drown in his guilt.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 24, 2008 21:48:45 GMT
Aww, both are cute but sad at the same time; poor Patton: he'll be the one who will be suffering the most in all that.
BTW, I hope we can acomplish our dreams too.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 25, 2008 1:51:10 GMT
Thanks. I hope we can accomplish them as well.
And yes, Patton is really the one who suffers in terms of what happened between him and Rachel during ZERO. He would never do anything to hurt the woman he loves, and yet he was forced against his own will to do so. Even though I have Rachel forgive him, Pattton cannot easily let go of the incident. He never wanted to hurt his beloved, and he considers doing so a sin.
Oh, I noticed you put the proud fan of thing at the bottom of your boxes Deli. Just so you know, we have named 60/362 the Desk Jockeys.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 25, 2008 1:57:59 GMT
Thank you, I'll change it right away.
And no-one would ever want to hurt the person they love; but doing it against your will and remember it all must be one of the worst feelings in the world considering you're telling yourself you could have helped it and still you didn't.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 25, 2008 2:18:05 GMT
Exactly. Patton truly feels that what he did was sinful. He always thought that his love for Rachel was stronger than any other feeling he felt. And yet, it still wasn't enough for him to stop himself. Instead, he held out his zombified hand, laughing at her defeat, something he would never do.
And you're very welcome for the name change BTW.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 25, 2008 2:43:11 GMT
And tell me anyone; about Pretywitch's plot how do you think Patton would try to make it up to her even if she already forgave him?
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Post by numbuh1362 on Apr 25, 2008 8:24:32 GMT
delitelia, i really don't know, but i think he would be really mad himself and i think that rachel would notice that he was upset and talk to him....
but i don't know, but my idea sounds really silly....
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Post by delitelia on Apr 25, 2008 16:31:21 GMT
No actually; I can see Rachel noticing it by herself and talk to him about it, and who knows? Maybe something really good would happen after that.
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Post by GoldenFlither on Apr 25, 2008 20:28:19 GMT
And tell me anyone; about Pretywitch's plot how do you think Patton would try to make it up to her even if she already forgave him? Candy and flowers. ^^ |
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Apr 25, 2008 20:56:33 GMT
Actually, I like your idea Numbuh 1362. Since we believe that Rachel and Patton have known each other for a long time, it would only make sense that Rachel would be able to tell that something was bothering her friend.
And I like the idea of him giving Rachel flowers and candy to make up for what happened. Perhaps maybe roses would do the trick.
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Post by delitelia on Apr 25, 2008 21:08:20 GMT
You know? I would like him to give her this flower:  It's called Scarlet Pimpernel (blue variety) and, even though it's pretty small, it reminds me of Numbuh 362 ^^. |
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