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Post by nathalie on Feb 17, 2006 2:36:29 GMT
ok, well, this is a fic ive been brainstorming for a long time and I will write is now and, crap, now that Im here, my minds blank. Im gonna rebrainstorm, in the meantime, give me a hoot to continue....
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Post by 28 on Feb 17, 2006 3:37:12 GMT
woot.
That woot would have been more enthusiastic, but I get so few people reviewing my fanfics I quite don't know how to compliment those others make. *hint hint*
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Post by nathalie on Feb 17, 2006 4:27:44 GMT
ok, I remeber some now.
just so you know, this is a dc fic. on howq they became that way. lets begin.
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This is the top secret historical journal of our top secret project , which we call "Project Delight" The file is classified and should only be read by authorized personel. If you not one, and are reading this, youre fired.
Entry 1.
Project delightful is a top secret project run by adults, and was started by Charles Wilston. Its purpose? To create the perfect children. Our four test subejects, 3 young boys and a little girl, are doing well and are in deep hybernation. Special data is inserted into them daily. We still have a long way to go.
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The scientist walked into the lab, looking up from her clipboard
"Hows she doing?" she asked anothe scientist
"pretty good" he said as they looked into the tank
there, suspended in an unnamable liquid, was a little girl. Although she was rather plump, she looked pale and sickly, blank expression with a hint of deep adness was etched on her face. Her curly brown hair floated behind her. She wore only her undergarments and several wires were attached to her.
In several tanks nearby, there were some young boy, all of which also looked ale and sickly and had wires attached.
"have they had their dose of data yet?" the first scientist asked. the second one nodded
"good. hings are progressing well."
Entry 2
An interesting photo was found today. Its a picture of Mr Wilston and his family. Apparently, 2 of the test subjects were his children. Their names were Tabitha and Lenny. According to resources, Mr. Wilton's wife Angela has dissapeared a few days before the project started. Also, though we havent met her yet, he has another daughter........
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Post by 28 on Feb 17, 2006 4:49:08 GMT
kore......MEPPOU YOROSHII!!!!!!!
YOROSHII KINMU, NATHALIECHAN!
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Post by nathalie on Feb 17, 2006 4:55:52 GMT
what did hat mean?
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Post by delightfuliza on Feb 17, 2006 5:42:58 GMT
wow! sounds like a cool fic. can't wait to hear the rest.
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Post by nathalie on Feb 17, 2006 5:45:22 GMT
thanks!
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Post by delightfuliza on Feb 17, 2006 5:51:29 GMT
your welcome.
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Post by 28 on Feb 21, 2006 3:03:44 GMT
ME WANTIE FICCIE!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by makuta on Feb 22, 2006 1:33:19 GMT
Yay, a depressing Delightful Children story! I think they became all stuck together and stuff because of a certain purple dinosaur and some cheap shampoo, but keep going. You're doing good.
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Post by nathalie on Feb 23, 2006 4:57:19 GMT
ok~! finally chapter 2! I call it 'the volunteer" XD
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Post by nathalie on Feb 23, 2006 5:29:05 GMT
Entry 2
We have a new segment on our project. the 'volunteer' segment. A child will be volunteer to be delightfulised (as we call it) and will bve reawakened on a certain date. as it turns out, the volunteer is Mr Wilston's other daughter, Clarissa.
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"now, are you sure you want to do this? Im not forcing you...." mr wilston said
Clarissa, a pretty girl around 8 years old with ice blue eyes annd long blonde hair that always bore her favorite pink bow, nodded "yes Father. Im sure."
"you do know that when you are in that state, youll be treated no differently then the rest of them... and you will have no free will"
"I understand, but Im willing to take that risk. You know I think that doing this will keep my perfectionn until Im ready to act grown up on my own!"
he smiled "Im proud of you clarissa. Now go. theyre ready foor you"
after getting undressed clarissa climbed into the tank. She winced as the scientists inserted the wires ino her. then they gave her the tranquilizers. as the liquid bubbled around her, clarissa fell asleep with a small smil on her lips
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Post by caoimhechan on Feb 23, 2006 19:09:46 GMT
WHOA!
Really great story!
Kinda creepy... but still, so far, I'm loving it!
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Post by makuta on Feb 23, 2006 21:09:12 GMT
That part needs to be longer. The suspense is killing me.
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Post by 28 on Feb 23, 2006 22:32:18 GMT
AHHHH! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
I love the creepy, but still amazing writing style you have......
YOU'RE SO AWESOME!!!
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