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Post by 28 on Jul 9, 2006 5:41:57 GMT
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
-_-; That wedding lasted 8 hours.....I WAITED 8 HOURS TO READ THIIISSS!!!!
But it was worth the wait.......THIS CHAPTER IS AMAZING!
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 9:04:42 GMT
Thanks guys! That means a lot to me! ^^
Next is the chapter that DEFINES THE BEAUTY OF 25/6!!!!
...Or not.
I feel drunk...even though I only had hot chocolate this morning.
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Post by queennicki on Jul 9, 2006 10:43:57 GMT
YAY! *claps* that was excellent! now see what you done? YOU'VE MADE ME GO CRAZY! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 10:49:20 GMT
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! THANKS SO MUCH!!!! ^^
AND YOU'RE IN LUCK!!!!
I present to you, the next chapter of my story. It's short but I luv it all the same. ^^
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Once they had gotten to the room Numbuh 6 was in, they couldn’t actually get to her seeing as she was crowded by KND scientists, who claimed to be on the verge of discovering what happened to her.
“ARE YOU PEOPLE MAD?!” Kuki was the least expected to shout out like this. “If you crowd around her too much and don’t let her rest, she’ll never get better!” But if you think about it, since she’s been trained in medical care she knew what she was talking about.
“We just wanna make sure it isn’t contagious or any-”
“OF COURSE SHE ISN’T! IF SHE WAS THEN YOU’D BE SICK TOO! NOW GET OUT!” She pointed at the door angrily with fierce eyes that looked like they were on fire.
“But-” They were shaking slightly clutching their clipboards to their chests.
“NOOOOOOOOW!” They ran out as fast as they could, as well as most of her team-mates. The only one who stayed behind was Numbuh 25, hardly noticing Numbuh 3’s anger. “Not you guys!” She chased them down the hallway as the door swung shut.
Fredrick was all alone with Roxanne once again. He went and sat on a chair next to her bed, watching her sleep. She looked more peaceful now than when the others were there before. It seemed as if just his presence had made her happy, because when he took her hand in his, she smiled, just like when he had held her in his arms that night in the forest. With the touch of her hand he felt as if all the questions to life were finally answered, even though there was no need for them any more. He just wanted to stay there forever, holding her hand and watching her. But he could hear the others about to come back, so he bent over her, kissed her cheek and whispered in her ear. “I love you.”
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This is where I give you permission to stop reading for a minute and let out whatever fangirlness you've built up inside.
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Okay now back to the story.
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By the time everyone had come in, he was standing by the window looking at the sunset. The others all came around and watched her, slightly worried. Kuki felt her cheek. “She’s very warm...I wonder why?”
“I hope she hasn’t got a fever...” Numbuh 17 sat next to her sister looking sad.
“Yes well, I saw a very cute boy doctor I’d like to go chat with instead of hanging around a sleeping sick person.” Roselia had gotten very bored.
But this comment annoyed Fredrick. He wanted Rose to take back what she said. He made her head ache horribly which impaired her walking. And when she spoke it was hard to understand what she was saying. But Eleonora spoke to him in his mind again. “Fredrick, please.” He hated it when Numbuh 28 got in his head. But he stopped his power all the same, walking out of the room. The amount of people around Numbuh 6 made him feel uncomfortable. Maybe even a little a little jealous.
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Not my greatest work but I got bored.
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 14:53:40 GMT
XD Don't worry. She'll be awake in the next chapter. X3
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 14:58:00 GMT
XD Yeah lol.
The next chapter is my fave...and I haven't even written it yet.
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 16:48:58 GMT
I'm waiting for 28...
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Post by 28 on Jul 9, 2006 17:51:23 GMT
*bursts in* I'M HERE! I'M HERE! Sorry I'm late, Shadow was---never mind. Anyway THIS THING IS AMAZING!!!!!! W0000000000000T!
Thanks for letting out my fangirlism.......I needed to do that. You think of everything.
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 18:20:06 GMT
I had to myself so yeah. XD
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Post by flora on Jul 9, 2006 19:34:17 GMT
thats soo cute! (wait a minute .... I DONT SAY CUTE) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *runs away* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH ...................................... *comes back* all better now.. YYA YY u did it in .... ummmmm i dunno BUT I HAD TO BACK A PAGE SINCE I DIDNT READ THE CHAPTER BEFORE THIS ONE  |
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Post by queennicki on Jul 9, 2006 19:49:41 GMT
YAY! that chapter was ADORABLE! *jumps around everywhere* Gone insane...be back soon.....OH and write more! please! ikts the only thing that will stop me from going perminantly crazy!
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Post by flora on Jul 9, 2006 19:53:43 GMT
still frustrated from not reading this everyday
JEEZE
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 20:02:00 GMT
I've done the next chapter now...and...yeah. Not that great in my opinion but it's what you guys think that matters more...so...whatever.
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Numbuh 80 was flirting with the nurses across the hallway while Fredrick was sitting in the lobby. He would’ve done something horrible to Ben just to get him to shut up if he hadn’t seen all the others leaving for ice-cream. He grabbed his chance and went into Numbuh 6’s room. She was standing by the window gazing at the stars. Her hair was down and the moonlight shone against it, making her look even more beautiful than usual. He was so taken aback by this sight he stood there for a few minutes before he remembered what he was doing. He moved a bit closer to her. “Shouldn’t you be resting?”
She was slightly startled and spun around. But when she saw who it was she was quite relieved. “I couldn’t help myself...” She faced the window again. “...It’s just so beautiful tonight.”
He moved next to her. “Yes it is.” But he wasn’t looking at the sky. He was looking at her eyes. They twinkled with admiration as she gazed into the night, lost in its splendour. Then all of a sudden she turned to him.
“Numbuh 28 told me about what you did today...”
“Oh...uh...well...” He thought she wouldn’t have been too happy about his power.
“...Quite impressive I must say.” She was looking at him as a friend, which slightly tore him a bit. He didn’t want to be friends. He wanted more than that. But if that’s all that was going to happen between them, he would learn to live with it, just to keep her happy.
“I’ve been meaning to ask you...why didn’t you tell me you had powers?”
“Well, at first I wasn’t expecting you to want to talk to me at all...especially after what happened at your Sector last month...” The memory was painful. He had tried to forget what had happened that day, but he just couldn’t. That was the day that he started feeling for her...and he had been messing up horribly ever since. “...But then...after that night...I’ve been too caught up in what’s going on...” She blushed and smiled at him.
She was smiling at him differently this time, her eyes shining with happiness. He almost got lost in them. “Then...why didn’t you use them before?”
She sat down on the window sill and Fredrick did the same. “I can only access them through extreme emotion...like anger...or sadness...or l...l...” She was struggling to even say the word. It was too painful for her.
Fredrick felt heartbroken at the idea that she wouldn’t allow herself to even say the word, never mind feel the emotion. “...Love?”
“...Yes...” She felt so ashamed of herself for starting to get trapped in this again. But every time she looked at him she couldn’t help but want to throw her arms around him...and for him to hold her lovingly...
“But you were saying very strange things...like you were speaking a language of your own.”
“I was. I actually have my own language.” She felt very strange all of a sudden. She could feel that they were sitting very close together...but she liked it.
“But why?” He saw she was blushing and then noticed what she had. But the sight of her looking like she wanted it made him feel a lot better.
“To help me change my anger into something better...” She playfully nudged him. “You need something for that too...”
He took her hand in his and faced her. “I already do.”
She finally gave up fighting it. She didn’t care what happened to her long ago. All she cared about was that she found someone who genuinely cared about her, and was going to love her forever. She grabbed his shirt and pulled him close to her, finally doing what should’ve been done long before.
And there they were, sitting on the window sill, fingers entwined, kissing like there would be no tomorrow.
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No comment.
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Post by flora on Jul 9, 2006 20:49:46 GMT
AHH
WHERE DID U COME FROM!?!?
.........sry
i was reading the thread over agian and i didnt think you would be on........
anyway
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OMGOMGOMGOMG
THAT CHAPTER IS EXACTLY LIKE ONE OF MANY VERSIONS OF MY STORY!!!
(is she reading my mind)
nah
...GOOODY GOOD
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 21:19:21 GMT
I'm glad you like it. It left me like, literally numb...so I just sat and watched T.V. XD
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