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Post by 28 on Jul 7, 2006 16:02:42 GMT
TEH SAD CHAPTER?
I'm so excited......yet..........so......SCARED!
JUST DO IT ALREADY!
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Post by 06 on Jul 7, 2006 16:08:19 GMT
OKAY!!!! ^^ ___________________________________________________________________________
Numbuh 6 put down the weapon and turned to Numbuh 3. “Take care of Numbuh 1 for me Numbuh 3. I have to help Numbuh 28.”
“What about food?” asked Hoagie. “Ours got burnt in the crash, and Chad probably destroyed your supply.”
Numbuh 27 went to check. “Yup, he’s right!” she called from inside.
“Fine then. I’ll go look for food with Eleonora and Abigail while Noah, Hoagie, and Wallabee go look for materials we can use to build shelter. Mary-Ann can go look for water with Rose and Fredrick can look for firewood. Everyone have something to do?”
Ben was jumping up and down. “I don’t! I DON’T!” He walked over to Numbuh 3. “...But on the other hand, now I can spend some time with this sweet thang!” He stroked her cheek causing her to blush.
“No...way. You’re coming with us so we can keep an eye on you!” Numbuh 6 wasn’t gonna let him cause any trouble here.
As the other groups started on their assignments by going in their own direction, things quietened down considerably at camp. Or whatever camp’s supposed to be before you have proper shelter and food.
“Finally some peace and-...” Numbuh 3 was making sure Nigel was comfortable when she noticed Numbuh 25 still standing there, a blank expression on his face. “...Hello...you’re supposed to GO!”
Fredrick snapped back into reality and frowned. “I know that! I’m just figuring out which way to go!”
Numbuh 3 rolled her eyes. “Whatever.” Even though she was the most naïve of the group, she could tell when someone had other problems on their mind.
Fredrick walked off, far away from everyone. Then he started running. After a while he stopped and sat down on a flat rock, trying to slow his mind down enough to process what was going on. “What’s happened to me...?” He stood up and walked over to a tree. “...Why couldn’t I just shoot both of them and move on?!” He punched the tree trunk as hard as he could. “Why did I just freeze...unable to think or move?!” He looked at his fist. His hand was bleeding. Then he found himself crying tears of anger. “Why did she have to be there that day...? Why’d I have to be so impatient...WHY – DO – I – CARE?!” He started hacking at the tree trunks, chopping the wood down just to keep his mind off everything. But frustration to such an extent can easily lead to a horrible tragedy.
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I know it's short but yeah.
SUSPENSE!!!!
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Post by 28 on Jul 7, 2006 16:17:15 GMT
IT'S SUSPENSEFUL!
DEAR PANTS..............WRITE MORE!
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Post by 06 on Jul 7, 2006 16:19:33 GMT
I LOVE IT WHEN YOU SAY THAT!!!! And I already did. XD I just want 151 to review first.
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Post by 28 on Jul 7, 2006 16:22:09 GMT
SERIOUSLY!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by 06 on Jul 7, 2006 16:24:30 GMT
WILL DO!!!!
This chapter's slightly long...but it's my favourite. ^^
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Surprisingly, the second group to get back was Roxanne’s. Each of the girls had an armful of some kind of fruit and Ben carried the fish.
“This is gross! Why’d I get the dead fish?!” He complained.
“Quit moaning! You’re almost as bad as Numbuh 26!” Numbuh 6 said laughing at the thought of Roselia having to carry dead fish.
“THANK GOODNESS! A BUCKET!” Ben dumped the fish in it and wiped his hands on his shirt frantically.
“Shouldn’t Numbuh 25 be done by now?” Numbuh 6 noticed the lack of firewood to cook the fish.
“I dunno...BUT LOOK! I found bottles of water!” Mary-Ann was happily pointing to the pile she made.
“Eleonora...is Fredrick prone to acting out frustration?” Numbuh 6 was worried he might’ve done something horribly stupid.
“Very much so...” she said kneeling by Nigel and making sure he was okay.
“Oh no...” Roxanne knew how dangerous anger can be. “Numbuh 3 did you see which way he went?”
Kuki pointed to an area with lots of trees. “That way!”
Mary-Ann noticed Numbuh 6 gathering up water, cloth and bandages. “Want me to come with?”
“I’d rather you stay here and supervise when the boys get back to build shelter. Numbuh 4’s a bit of a danger to himself sometimes.”
She walked in the direction Numbuh 3 pointed to, hoping that she wasn’t too late. She started walking faster until she found a small puddle of blood about 10 minutes later. She walked even faster, mind and heart racing. Then she found a pile of chopped wood, a discarded machete and a little further, Fredrick unconscious and losing lots of blood. She acted as fast as she could, checking if he had a chance of surviving but then discovered a very long gash along his head. She cleaned away as much blood as she could and bandaged up his head. She then bandaged up the wound on his hand, hoping he hadn’t injured himself badly anywhere else because she had run out of bandages. Worry seemed to have overtaken because she gave up holding back the tears and cried it all out. After all, one of the things she feared most was not being able to stop someone from dying. She rinsed off her hands with water and put her hand on his chest, feeling his heartbeat. It was going slightly stronger but only by a little. She hated herself for not letting anyone go with him but he could’ve hurt them a lot more than he hurt himself. She couldn’t stop herself. She cried into his shirt. “Please don’t die...” She suddenly heard his heartbeat slowly returning to normal. She would have jumped up with relief if she wasn’t feeling so weak.
His eyes flickered open. Once they had focused he managed to sit up a bit more and steady himself. “What...why...?”
She put her hand back on his chest feeling his heartbeat again. “Don’t talk...you’ll waste your energy.” She was about to see if anything was broken but what she discovered instead made her heart jump. Her hand was covered in blood...not her own though. She looked at Fredrick. His chest was now bleeding. She took her jacket off, wrapped it around the wound and secured it. Too tired to talk or even support herself, she lay down on the ground and immediately fell asleep.
All Fredrick did was watch Numbuh 6 get the rest she needed. He felt strangely calm again and couldn’t tear his eyes away from her peaceful face. Her clothes were stained with his blood. “Why would she do this for me...?” he thought. “Why would she come all the way out here just to save my life...? After the way I treated her...?” And even though he knew he’d hate himself for this later, he moved over next to her and sat her up against his shoulder, feeling warmer by the second. She rested her head against his, and smiled slightly in her sleep. He suddenly felt as if the emptiness that was inside him his whole life was gone...he finally felt complete.
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*crying* It's so beautiful. ('3
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Post by 28 on Jul 7, 2006 16:30:35 GMT
IT'S SO BEAAAUUUTTTIIFFFUULLLL!!!!!!!!
Which means I have to think of something 1/28ish to keep it from becoming my favourite couple.
Ohmmmmmmm.............................
2 hours later
Okay, now I'm ready.
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Post by 06 on Jul 7, 2006 16:32:41 GMT
I TOLD YOU!!!! It's infected my braaaaiiiinnnn.
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Post by 06 on Jul 7, 2006 16:34:17 GMT
Sorry I forgot you were squeemish...or however it's spelled. -_-
They just make it all more beautiful. ^^
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Post by 28 on Jul 7, 2006 16:39:47 GMT
Mary-Ann doesn't like blood either.........which isn't a good quality in the head of medical tactics.......-_-;
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Post by 06 on Jul 7, 2006 16:46:31 GMT
Exactly. XD
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Post by 28 on Jul 7, 2006 16:47:39 GMT
CHAPTERRRRR!
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Post by 28 on Jul 7, 2006 17:03:47 GMT
Me neither..........XP
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Post by 06 on Jul 7, 2006 17:15:22 GMT
ME...uh...threether? XD
I'm bust wiff teh next chapter.
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Post by 28 on Jul 7, 2006 19:06:06 GMT
WHEEEEEEEE!
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