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Post by 06 on Jul 5, 2006 16:24:23 GMT
THEN WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! D:
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Post by flora on Jul 8, 2006 3:00:55 GMT
OO OO REMEMBER 28
DO IT DO IT!! *turns to mom in a sweet inocent voice*
nothing!
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Post by 28 on Jul 8, 2006 3:44:01 GMT
LOL THAT WAS HILARIOUS!
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Post by 06 on Jul 8, 2006 8:58:21 GMT
...
Huh?
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Post by flora on Jul 8, 2006 17:13:08 GMT
well ok
ahem*
(MWHAHAHAHAHA BAD GRAMMER)
28 and ME
were at her car after school right?
well i wanted to do somthing but i dunno wat it was
and she said she would do it later
so i got mad and yelled
'DO IT, DO IT NOW!!'
and my mom walked past and asked
'what r u doing?'
and i said
in an inocent voice
'nothing'
then we laughed REALLY REALLY hard!
^-^
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 9:35:06 GMT
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!! I feel so drunk... ...OFF MY FANFIC!!!!  |
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Post by flora on Jul 9, 2006 19:45:47 GMT
ya i saw that
im frustrated
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 20:15:20 GMT
Your fanfic?
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Post by flora on Jul 9, 2006 20:51:32 GMT
mm ya...>.<
its just that
1 i dunno wat to call it IF i do it
2 its hard to put it in words..
>.<
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Post by 06 on Jul 9, 2006 21:22:24 GMT
I used to have that problem when I was like...10. But because I read a lot I got a lot of words I could use to write...
Wait...that problem only lasted like, 6 months...the why the hell didn't I write after that?! I'M GOOD AT IT! XD
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Post by 28 on Jul 10, 2006 17:28:37 GMT
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Okay, I'm gonna write chapter whatever number it is now. (I'm too lazy to check. Dun judge me.)
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Kenji Aisu was struck to the ground, his cheek bleeding. He shakily pushed himself up. He felt the shadow of his father loom over him. Ingou Aisu was never the one to treat his family with respect. Among his many rules, the most prominent was 'do what I say, not what I do.' Ingou picked his son up by the scruff of his neck and looked him straight in the eye. Kenji tried to hide the fear from his eyes. If there was one thing his father hated, it was knowing his son was a baby. "TELL ME AGAIN WHY YOU LEFT THE HOUSE WITHOUT MY PERMISSION?" Kenji gulped. "I....I....I saw...." "Oh, so you SAW, then. Well, if seeing is causing trouble.....I'll have to help out a little." Ingou reached out and took the glasses off Kenji's face. Without them, everything was blurry and shaking. The small boy saw an out of focus image of his father breaking something......most likely his glasses. He put a hand on his head, which was aching horribly. Ingou pushed Kenji's head down onto the cold stoned floor and walked away.
Kochou, Kenji's 6 year old sister, was hiding in her room. She had been there ever since her father had given her a permanent scar on the left side of her face. It still hurt, even after a week, and ever since then she had been afraid to come close to her father. The little girl turned around and looked at a picture by her bed. It showed a tall, beautiful lady in a plain kimono. This lady was Kochou's mother, Samishii Aisu. She had left home long ago because of the torture she suffered at her husband's hands. She had tried to take Kochou and Kenji with her, but Ingou wouldn't allow it. The last sentence to her children was, 'Anata wa sou tokubetsu, waga kodomo, soshite watashi wa koko tsuneni,' which meant, 'You are so special, my children, and I am here always.' Kochou didn't remember this day, as she was only three years old, but Kenji had told her about it almost every day.
Kenji moaned on the ground. Before his father had scratched his face, many more injuries were issued to him. At times like this, the only one to help him was Kochou, but she was often too afraid to come out. This time, Kenji hoped his sister could be brave. Kochou did indeed see her brother on the ground, but she didnt' know if Ingou was close by. She put her foot out of her room, slowly and carefully. Then she started walking toward the place where her brother lay. Shortly after, she ran, grabbed him by the arms, and dragged him into her room. She slammed the door behind her with tears of fear in her eyes. She nudged Kenji gently.
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NOTE: KOCHOU DOES NOT SPEAK ENGLISH, NOR DOES INGOU, BUT YOU PROBABLY DON'T SPEAK JAPANESE. QUITE FRANKLY, I SPEAK SO LITTLE IT ISN'T EVEN FUNNY. SO, ALL OF THESE CONVERSATIONS ARE JAPANESE, BUT I'VE TRANSLATED THEM INTO ENGLISH. MAKE SENSE? OKAY.
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"Are you awake, big brother? ......please say you are." Kenji's eyes opened and he struggled to sit up. Kochou supported him until he could get onto the bed. "Big brother, I am worried about what you are doing. Every time you go out of the house, father gets so very angry. Soon he will follow you and find out where you go......where DO you go?" Kenji sighed. "Well, the day I went to the park....as I usually do and get back before father notices, I met someone.....a girl........" Kochou gasped. She clapped a hand to her mouth. "BIG BROTHER, THIS GIRL IS DOOMED IF FATHER FINDS OUT! YOU KNOW FALLING IN LOVE IS FORBIDDEN!" Kenji shut his eyes as tight as he could. "I......I know, Kochou......but........she is everything I have ever wanted. This girl changed my life! And she loves me! I thought I could get past this without father knowing, but.......she is a kids next door operative." Kochou's eyes got wider than they did when her father made her scar. "YOU ARE A FOOL, BIG BROTHER!" Kenji clenched his fists. "I KNOW, Kochou, I KNOW I am a fool........and I am so sorry......but there is no way I could have known......and I really DO love her. I love her more than anything....." Kochou looked into Kenji's eyes and saw a pain beyond anything physical. It was the kind of pain that hurt forever, even after death. The pain that never left. "Don't worry, big brother. I will help you. You will have love, I promise."
"Oh, I do not think that will happen." Kochou recodnized the voice and screamed. She darted behind Kenji and clenched her tiny fists around him. "MAKE HIM GO AWAYYY!" Kenji looked up at the figure of his father. What kind of family did he live in where children were afraid of the ones they were supposed to love more than anything? "So there's a girl, is there?" Kenji breathed heavily. "N---no, father....there is no one...." "DON'T LIE TO ME, BOY! There IS a girl in your life, I know it. And Kochou.....thought you could help, did you? How cute......" Kenji's headache got worse, and it became much harder to see. But he almost wanted to go blind as he saw the blurry figure of his father pick up his little sister and carry her away, leaving her trapped with her own nightmares.....and to go along with that, Kenji knew Kochou wasn't the only one to suffer at the hands of his father.......
Kuki would have a price to pay as well.
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Post by 06 on Jul 10, 2006 17:52:08 GMT
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by 28 on Jul 10, 2006 17:56:09 GMT
KOCHOUU CHAAAAANNNN!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by 06 on Jul 10, 2006 18:23:25 GMT
ACK
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Post by 28 on Jul 10, 2006 18:25:13 GMT
Ack?
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