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Post by otto789 on Jun 22, 2004 13:55:00 GMT
so how the story getting on
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Post by knd861724 on Jun 23, 2004 5:26:13 GMT
Done w/ the next chappie. *I added in the Delightfuls, just 4 u!!!!! ^_~
Numbuh 3, Numbuh 5 and Lizzie all gasped.
Mushi just thought for a second.
"Hey Kuki... isn't that your pad?"
She cringed. Heck, every girl around her cringed. She was about strangle Mushi for the umpteenth time of that night. Numbuh 3 looked at her younger sister. Mushi held a slight smile and an amused expression on her face. She enjoyed doing this, no doubts about it.
Numbuh 4 cocked an eyebrow, not that you could tell beyond the forest that we call bangs.
“Ah whot? You girls are getting weirder and weirder every day! Now, you betta’ stop keeping secrets!!!”
Numbuh 1 looked over at Lizzie. She was now graced with a misty blush that was spread elegantly across her face. He stepped towards her.
“Lizzie, I-” He stopped dead in his sentence. His voice had squeaked, gone up in pitch.
“I was about to speak to you… but I guess that all the shouting from our last mission has exhausted my voice. I’ll go get some hot chocolate. Excuse me.”
Numbuh 4 was still standing on top of the table, holding the maxi high above his head. The ground beneath him started to rumble beneath his feet. He just assumed that it was Numbuh 1 was going down the stairs. But then he felt it again, much stronger.
“Ah… something isn’t roight…”
Sure enough, the ceiling above them was torn from above their heads. The sweet fragrance of night filled all of their lungs. And the chills of the evening soon glazed over their skin.
A mechanical sound was let out, and they heard a M.O.N.O.T.O.N.E. voice from above.
“Good evening Kids Next Done-For! We hope to not be disturbing any plans you might be having for tonight.”
Numbuh 2 spoke up 1st.
“Aren’t you guys supposed to be in bed by 7 o’clock?”
The Delightful Children from down the Lane shook their heads solemnly.
“Father said that we could stay out this once to destroy you and-”
The two Delightful Girls caught sight of the maxi that was still held high above Numbuh 4’s head. They stopped talking in unison with their brothers and threw them off. The three brothers were surprised when they had stopped. The two girls continued speaking, just the two of them.
“What do you think your doing!?! What are you doing holding it up like that!?!?”
Numbuh 4 was startled and couldn’t speak. I mean, they all knew that The Delightful Children *could* speak out of unison, but he had never imagined them doing it so suddenly…
“Well? Are you going to say anything? What are you doing with it!?!”
Numbuh 4 regained his composure and began to attempt his answer.
“Whot is it with all of you girls!?! I mean, first of all… Numbuh 3 and 5 were all snappy at me, THEN some ‘period’ thing keeps me all wondering, and NOW they won’t tell me what a cruddy pad is!!!”
He was yelling. The girls were blushing. ALL of the girls. Numbuh 3, Numbuh 5, Lizzie and the two Delightful girls. And they all had goofy expressions all over their face.
Lizzie’s thoughts
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‘Awwww man! He did NOT just say that… oh no, oh no…’
Abby’s thoughts
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‘WoW… the Delightfull Dorks are agreeing with us. They prolly’ feeling embaressed too. Numbuh 5 is sooooo gunna kill ‘em. He’ll be breathing through a tube when I’m done with em….’
Kuki’s thoughts
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‘Uh-oh… Numbuh 4 is soooo confused…’
Delightful Girls thoughts
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‘What sort of crazy boy is he!?! Saying ‘period’ and ‘pad’ SOOO loud… It must be hard living with him…’
The boys thoughts
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‘…?’
Mushi’s thoughts
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‘I am good.’
Numbuh 1 was coming down the stairs, a mug of hot cocoa in hand. He hadn’t even noticed the entire scene that had passed by only moments before.
“I’m sorry team, I’m not really sure what’s up with my voice…”
It was still squeaking, apparently the cocoa had no affect. He entered the doorway, and the mug dropped from his hands. The crash was the only sound for a few minutes.
“What’s going on here!?!”
He looked up and saw the Delightful Children just standing there. He looked and saw his team, just standing there. He was REALLY getting confused…
“Will someone PLEASE tell me what’s going on here!?!”
Numbuh 1 coughed, trying to cover the squeaky voice that he called his own.
Numbuh 2 spoke up, but VERY hesitantly…
“Uh… Numbuh 4 was wondering what a ‘pad’ was, and he was asking the girls. Then they got all quiet. Then they came.”
He made a small gesture towards the Delightfuls.
“And then the girls saw 4, and got all freaked out. Then they were yelling t him, and he was yelling all of the questions that he’s been thinking about, then it got all quiet, then you came in and dropped your glass, and then you asked me what was going on, and I said that Numbuh 4-“
He was cut-off by Numbuh 1 waving his hand in a dismissal fashion.
“And then De-ja-vu. And yes, I have been wondering what this ‘pad’ thing is used for.”
No one moved. No one wanted to explain to the boys what it was used for, or the uncomfortable ‘biology-lesson’ leading up to it.
“Well…?”
No one moved… again.
Suddenly, a large mechanical movement was heard. Each metal gear shifting pierced the silence. A M.O.N.O.T.O.N.E. voice was heard.
“Uh… we’ll be leaving now. Good luck getting out of this one!”
Lizzie, Numbuh 3 and Numbuh 5 all glared at the moving machine. How lucky… to be able to escape, unlike them…
Numbuh 1 let out a squeaky sigh. None of the girls were going to speak. That’s that.
“I guess that’s all. I’ll be walking Lizzie home now.”
He went to his room to grab a jacket. The night’s cool breeze alerted him to how chilly it was out. Numbuh 4 stuffed the maxi into his hoodey pocket, and headed into his room, unhappy about the fact that none of his questions were answered.
“Good noight…”
Numbuh 2 laughed un-easily and muttered a good-night, before heading into his own room.
Numbuh 3 and Numbuh 5 walked towards Lizzie.
“Numbuh 5 thinks that Numbuh 1 is gunna quiz ya. Put pressure on ya to tell ‘em about periods an’ stuff. I don’t like this…”
Numbuh 1 walked back into the main room and gently took Lizzie by the hand.
“Let’s go!”
Lizzie giggled about how silly his voice sounded, all high and squeaky. But inside, her gut was wrenching about the upcoming interrogation with the one she loved most…
like!?!?
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Post by NumbuhInfinity on Jun 23, 2004 5:57:33 GMT
I like! I almost laughed out loud at some parts, particularly Mushi's thoughts. She seemed to have disappeared mysteriously after that, though (there's no more mention of her). And I think I might know why Nigel's voice is "squeaky" but I won't say anything yet.  By the way, because proboards automatically converts triple question marks into a smilie, you should probably just use one or two question marks instead, at least in here. |
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Post by otto789 on Jun 23, 2004 9:04:28 GMT
Yes your story is getting better everytime i read a new chapter.
like the part when the delightfuls came but maybe it about time someone told the boys what a period is.
Maybe Mushi could give a bit of infro and let the boy learn the rest from someone else also if Numbuh 3 and Numbuh 4 are close friends maybe she should get over her shyness and tell him.
Just a thought
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Post by knd861724 on Jun 23, 2004 18:07:38 GMT
Ur right ^_~
Don't worry! I *finally* have a plot line in my head! ^^ Remember, Numbuh 4 stuffed the maxi into his pocket... So he STILL has it >=)
And don't worry, I plan on having the boyz find out before the end of the story. And I have a few plot-twists that include Numbuh 86 and nicks.
Yeah...
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Post by Nella (Numbuh 310) on Jun 23, 2004 19:57:16 GMT
Great chapter! Boys can be so....oblivious. XD
Mushi is still great (I love all her thoughts.)
As for Numbuh 1: <insert evil cackling here> ;D
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Post by pinkdenim on Jun 23, 2004 20:29:57 GMT
Aaawww! Numbuh One! *Glomps Nigel* My baby is gowing up so fast!
Nigel: ?!
Anyway, I'm glad you added something to do with male puburty, I don't know why but it just seems to.... Work.
I don't think the boys should find out just yet, I like seeing them confused >: ).
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Jun 23, 2004 20:36:34 GMT
Hehe, I love how they're so clueless.
Haha! *Hugs Nigie*
I love this story, even though it's about this topic. *giggleblush*
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Post by Nella (Numbuh 310) on Jun 23, 2004 20:46:13 GMT
Anyway, I'm glad you added something to do with male puburty, I don't know why but it just seems to.... Work. My thoughts exactly. XD |
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Post by pinkdenim on Jun 23, 2004 20:47:35 GMT
Hehehe  |
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Post by otto789 on Jun 23, 2004 22:38:31 GMT
i can't wait to see the next chapter
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Post by knd861724 on Jun 24, 2004 3:16:06 GMT
Awwwww!!! Thx for all of the kind reviews!!! everyone has been SOOOO kind ^^ I should have the next chappie up in about a week! ^^
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Post by pinkdenim on Jun 24, 2004 7:37:25 GMT
Awwwww!!! Thx for all of the kind reviews!!! everyone has been SOOOO kind ^^ I should have the next chappie up in about a week! ^^ I'll be looking forward to it ^^. |
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Post by knd861724 on Jul 7, 2004 18:52:32 GMT
Numbuh 1 and Lizzie walked down the side walk. A cool breeze lifted their hair and sent it into elegant spirals behind them. Uh I mean … behind LIZZIE. Numbuh 1 doesn’t have hair… remember? Good.
Lizzie was biting her lower lip the entire way home. She knew that he would start quizzing her any second now… but the moment never came. Much to Lizzie’s liking.
They stopped at Lizzie’s house. She let out a sigh of relief.
‘Home free…’
He stopped and looked her in the eyes, and she turned to face him.
‘I thought too soon…’
He cleared his throat.
“Listen, I know that you don’t really wanna talk to me about this… Heck, none of the girls do.” He stopped for a moment to try and re-collect his ever-squeaky voice. “But it would help me out a lot if you would just explain to me what’s going on. We’ve never had secrets in our relationship. Now seems to be an odd time to start.”
She let him finish before she tried to persuade him to just drop it. This gave her the much-needed time to think of what she would say…
“But Nigey… I can’t tell you…!”
He took hold of her shoulders and gave her a gentle shake.
“But why not!?!”
She had several answers to that question. But she wouldn’t say any of them because it might make him a little TOO curious… or that might sound rather harsh.
Suddenly… she had an idea. She was going all about this all the wrong way. FLATTEREY!!!!!
“Listen Nigey… You’re smart, I’m sure you’ll find some way of figuring it out.”
She gave him a peck on the cheek and headed for her house. He stood in that same spot and reached a hand up to his cheek and protected the kiss from the gentle wind.
By the time he realized that he still hadn’t found the answer to his questions, he sighed and headed back to the tree house. Lizzie smiled from behind her window as she watched him leave.
‘NOW I’m home free…’
Numbuh 1 kicked a stone as he walked. He didn’t like being this confused. Maybe she was right? Who’s stopping me from figuring this out?
“I can do this!!!”
He stopped dead in his tracks as soon as he heard his ever-so-annoying squeak that he has come to call his own voice. He decided not to talk anymore, and to just stick to thinking… this was beginning to scare him.
‘But I can’t do it alone. I need Numbuh 2 and Numbuh 4 help.’
With that thought in his mind, he quickened his pace and headed to the tree house.
He climbed up the ladder and quickly and rushed through the doorway. He found Numbuh 2 beating Numbuh 4 in a videogame. Before they could greet him and ask him any questions, he dashed into his room and murmured for them to hold on a sec.
He came out a few seconds later with 3 pieces of paper. Each page had a list of words on it. Numbuh 1 walked around and passed them out to the 1 and 4.
They paused the game and looked over the list.
Period
Maxi
PMS
Bra
Pad
“Whot’s all this about?”
Numbuh 4 cocked his head in the most adorable way.
Numbuh 1 looked at the hole in the ceiling caused by The Delightfulls.
“Lizzie gave me an idea. If the girls are hiding something, and they won’t tell us… then who’s stopping us from figuring it out ourselves?”
He was beginning to get used to the squeak...
His two companions looked at each other, and then slowly nodded. Numbuh 1 grinned.
“Numbuh 4, you look these words up in the dictionary. Numbuh 2, you look it up on the L.U.N.C.H.B.O.C.K.S., and if you don’t have any success, then go ahead and use the Super Cool Name-Inator Program.”
Numbuh 1 shook his head gravley. This is just getting annoying...
They nodded fully understanding what was going on, and excited about FINALLY getting to the bottom of this. Numbuh 2 stopped and turned around to face Numbuh 1.
“Hey, what are you gunna do?”
Numbuh 1 smiled. “I’m just gunna contact the KND Moon Base and see if they have these same issues going on in different sectors, and perhaps they have some answers."
Once again... the voice getting extremley annoying...
Numbuh 2 smiled and headed into the other room. But then stopped and faced Numbuh 1… again.
“Where are the girls anyway?”
Numbuh 1 stopped and scratched his head really quick.
“Hmmmm, I’m… I’m not sure…”
They suddenly heard 3 girls laughter from behind Numbuh 3’s door.
“Well, that explains it.”
They both laughed as they headed their own directions.
Numbuh 1 stepped to his computer and punched in the code for the KND headquarters.
A pudgy boy with braces and a pocket protector appeared on the screen.
“Numbuh 1, what is it? Is there an emergency?”
Numbuh 1 shook his head.
“Negative."
The other boy quirked an eyebrow at hearing Numbuh 1's voice. Numbuh 1 quickley continued. "I was wondering if I could have a word with Numbuh 362.”
The boy on the other screen shook his head.
“I’m sorry, but she’s on a mission right now. But Numbuh 86 is here. 1 second, let me get her for you.”
Numbuh 1 was about to protest, but before he had the chance, the Irish red-head that we all know and love appeared on the screen before his very eyes.
“What is it? Something you stupid boys couldn’t handle!?!”
He gulped. This was not going to be easy…
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~ if you can manage… can you PLEASE make an acronym for these words:
Period
Maxi
PMS
Pad
Numbuh 2 is going to use the Super Cool Name-Inator Program to try and figure out what they mean. So yeah, all help will be most- appreciated. Thank you for reading, it means lots and lots.
Example: Bra = Battle Ready Armor
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Post by Numbuh 5™ on Jul 7, 2004 19:05:53 GMT
Do they have to be relevant or stupid? (the acronyms)
BTW, cool chapter!
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