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Post by otto789 on Jun 14, 2004 8:43:08 GMT
Well let the delightful be in your story anyway
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Post by otto789 on Jun 14, 2004 8:44:01 GMT
Well let the delightful be in your story anyway
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Post by otto789 on Jun 14, 2004 8:44:28 GMT
sorry about that
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Post by knd861724 on Jun 14, 2004 17:33:08 GMT
lol, that's kay. But they have a button where u can modify or delete posts. WoW  ... I got 10 reviews in 1 night...  **Katie is excited** |
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Post by otto789 on Jun 14, 2004 22:10:04 GMT
Luckey you i never get any
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Post by otto789 on Jun 15, 2004 11:18:52 GMT
how it going
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Post by knd861724 on Jun 15, 2004 19:55:23 GMT
Gimmie a link and I will read urs!
It's going awesome. I'm about 1/2 way done with Chappie 4. I'll post it at the forum, then wait about a wekk untill I post it at FF.net. I should be done before tonight.
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Post by knd861724 on Jun 16, 2004 1:22:35 GMT
Here it is, Chappie 4!!!
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“PMS? Mushi...please explain...”
Numbuh 5 came over and grabbed Mushi by the wrist. “No, no, no, no. She won’t have the time. We were just getting ready to have a sleepover.”
Numbuh 5 began to lead Mushi to her room. But Mushi managed to free her wrist.
“But I thought that u couldn’t stand-“
Numbuh 5 was getting frustrated. Both 3 and 5 knew that Mushi could, under NO circumstances, be left alone with the guys.
“Forget what I said. Now just head into Numbuh 5’s room!”
Mushi grinned. “Streamers?”
She knew that she had the upper hand here. Her wish was their command. Numbuh 5 cringed and replied through gritted teeth.
“SuRe… AnYtHiNg… U… wAnT.”
Mushi smiled and bounced happily into Numbuh 5’s room.
Numbuhs 1, 2 and 4 all exchanged confused expressions.
Numbuh 3 giggled uneasily, and then skipped into 5’s room without any words of wisdom to our favorite boys.
“Whot ah they talking about?”
Numbuh 2 thought. “I have NO clue.”
Numbuh 1 rubbed his chin and continued to rest in deep thought.
“Maybe ‘PMS’ is some sort of code for something…? Numbuh 2, get out the L.U.N.C.H.B.O.C.K.S.!”
Numbuh 2 had the weirdest expression plastered on his face.
“Nuh-uh! I am NOT gunna go through this again! The last time that the girls were up to something, and we snuck into their homes and stuff… I got in trouble with… Cree!!!”
Numbuh 1 was dumbfounded.
“What do you mean by THAT? She is a TEENAGER! Need I to spell that out for you??? T-e-e-n-a-g-e-r!!!”
Numbuh 4 watched their little ‘conversation’.
“Whot did ah miss?”
Numbuh 1 and Numbuh 2 realized that they hadn’t told him about when they had found Cree’s bras.
“Well, when you and Numbuh 3 were gone for the day, you know… when Numbuh 5 was sick?”
Numbuh 4 nodded and Numbuh 1 continued.
“Well, we were guarding the door to Numbuh 5’s room, when we kept hearing about a ‘Training Bra’.”
Numbuh 4 cocked an eyebrow.
“Ah whot?”
“Well Numbuh 4, Numbuh 2 and I got out the L.U.N.C.H.B.O.C.K.S. And bra actually stands for Battle Ready Armor. We got some of our own… but-”
He sighed.
“But we couldn’t figure out how to get them to work.”
Numbuh 2 took the story from there.
“So Numbuh 1 got his butt kicked! Man, you should have of seen him!! He was all ‘Ahhhhhhh-!’”
Numbuh 2 stopped his little impression of their leader after getting shot the death glare by Numbuh 1.
“Erm… then Numbuh 5 came in and began to explain what a bra was REALLY for, but she wasn’t able to get it out. She seemed kinda embarrassed by the whole thing…”
Numbuh 1 was about to add something to their conversation, when the phone rang.
“I got it!”
He rushed to the phone and picked it up. “Hello? Yes. Oh hi Lizzi! What…now? Uh… okey. I’ll see you soon. Yes, I love you too. Bye!”
He turned to face 2 and 4. They instantly hid their laughter.
“Lizzi will be over in about 5 minutes. She wants to watch a movie.”
The two boys headed to the other room and let Numbuh 1 get the place set up.
5 minutes later, a knock was heard on the door. Everyone ran to the door to greet the visitor.
Mushi came out running.
“Pizza! Pizza’s here!”
Numbuh 2 and Numbuh 4 came from the other room when they heard “Pizza being screamed through out the tree house.
Numbuh 1 came out expecting Lizzi, and Numbuh 3 and Numbuh 5 came out because everyone else was.
The door was opened by Numbuh 1 and Lizzi was on the other side.
“Hi Nigey, are you ready for our movie date?”
Numbuh 1 no longer felt embarrassed when he was called by Lizzi’s little pet name for him.
He remembered a time when he cringed every time he heard it. But not anymore.
“Sure Lizzi. I guess the others ordered Pizza and it should be here any minute.”
She beamed.
“Great! I haven’t had any dinner yet, so that would be great!”
“So what movie do you wanna watch?”
Numbuh 1 put a hand on her back and continued walking into the other room.
Since the others were already gathered into the other room, there was an eerie silence.
It wouldn’t have of ended unless there was a ‘Bang’ on the door.
“Whot was that?”
Numbuh 4 walked up to the door and opened it. He didn’t see anything except a rock outside of the door. He looked down and saw a rather old pizza guy. Numbuh 4 then heard a raspy voice.
“I’m sorry, but I can’t climb the stairs with my back. I’ll need some help…”
Numbuh 4 was hungry, so he quickly climbed down the stairs.
“Put it on the Kids Next Door’s account.”
The elderly man nodded and got ready to hand him the stack of pizzas, but stopped when Numbuh 4 tripped on the last step.
“Gah! Cruddy step on a cruddy night with the cruddy girls and cruddy pizza…”
He was about to get on his feet, but his hand felt something. It was dark and he couldn’t tell what it was. He simply stuffed it in his hoodey pocket and grabbed the pizza.
“Thanks a lot. Cruddy pizza guy…”
He climbed the steps and got inside. Surprisingly, everyone was still standing by the door.
He got up and set the pizza down on a near-by table. He heard a rustling sound from his hoodey pocket and got it out.
Lizzi and Numbuh 1 had entered the room. The sweet aroma of pizza must have of lured them here.
Once everyone was around, Numbuh 4 felt that it was a good time to ask what this thing was.
“Whot is this?”
He lifted up the small package over his head.
The boys studied it with quizzical expressions.
Numbuh 3, Numbuh 5 and Lizzi all gasped.
Mushi just thought for a second.
"Hey Kuki... isn't that your pad?"
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Post by pinkdenim on Jun 16, 2004 16:30:12 GMT
XD I am loving Mushi in this story.
Yay! We've got Lizzie in the fic!
I noticed a few mistakes though:
-You spelled 'you' as 'u' a few times.
-You spelled 'Lizzie' as 'Lizzi'.
But apart from that, loving the story.
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Post by kawaiilildevil on Jun 16, 2004 16:35:51 GMT
Hey! I'm in the story! Wait...it's just a spelling error. Dang it!
Anyway, apart from making it seem I'm in the story, and what Sammeh mentioned, it's still pretty good! ^_^
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Post by otto789 on Jun 16, 2004 16:41:28 GMT
i likeing it so far
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Post by knd861724 on Jun 16, 2004 17:53:13 GMT
**sigh of relief** YAY! ^^
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Post by otto789 on Jun 21, 2004 13:43:15 GMT
well here is the link to my fan factionhttp://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1829309
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Post by NumbuhInfinity on Jun 21, 2004 19:57:32 GMT
I'm likin' this so far, Sam. I love Mushi's lines; poor Numbuhs Three and Five.  well here is the link to my fan factionhttp://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1829309 It's not nice to post and advertise your fic in someone else's own fic thread.  |
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Post by otto789 on Jun 21, 2004 20:45:19 GMT
Sorry i am rude
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... I got 10 reviews in 1 night... 
