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Post by queennicki on Nov 9, 2006 18:13:20 GMT
KND MEETS THE DEVIL!
chapter 1: issues
sector V of the KND were in school at lunch, and trying to teach numbuh 4 a poem to recite for a test in english.
"Say it slowly! and try to remember it this time!" Hoagie said tiredly.
"I cant be bothered!" Wally said frustrated with himself "I'd rather get an F!"
Abby was also getting frustrated "stop being so over dramatic! and recite it again, and try and think this time!"
"You can do it, numbuh 4!" Kuki said happilly "Just think reeeeeealllly hard!"
Wally blushed and said in a forced angry tone "alright, but you guys have gotta stop annoyin' me!" he drew a breathe "Dear madam, you have seen this play, i never saw it till today, .....er....what is it again?"
"You know the..." Nigel prompted
"You know the details of the plot, but let me tell you, i do not, ...erm.."
"The authour seeks to keep from me...."
"The authour seeks to keeps from me, the murderers identity, but you are not a friend of his,....UGH!" Wally shouted stomping out of he cafateria "Stupid cruddy poetry... who needs it anyway!" he murmers loudly to himself.
"Well...at least we can now talk about tonights mission" Nigel looked around, he couldnt see any non KND members within hearing distance of him, so he continued "i will explain the plan breifly, so you have time to prepare. Numbuh 2 will drop me, Numbuh 5, Numbuh 4 and Numbuh 3 in the playground, Numbuh 5 will go into the basement and turn off all security cameras in the school. Meanwhile Numbuh 4 will look round the school to see if there are any teachers or anyone else on the premissis. I will go to the teachers lounge and look for the teachers evil plot to make us stay at school and learn all night! any questions?"
"what will i be doing?" Kuki asked, unsure wanting to hear the dissapointing answer.
"Well...um...you will stay outside and...keep gaurd!"
Kuki scowled, she had gotten the most boring job again! she stood up and said in a mean voice "fine!" before walking away towards the lockers.
'i cant believe it! i have to "keep gaurd" again?!' Kuki thought to herself 'this is SO unfair! they always get a decent job to do and im left out! i wish there was someway i could prove i'm just as good as them'
"sounds" a dark voice said "like you've got issues..."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ there we go! i'll post the next chapter as soon as i can be bothered!
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Nov 10, 2006 0:39:02 GMT
cool nice cant wight to read more.
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Post by numbuheightbitstar on Nov 10, 2006 1:27:29 GMT
Interesting story so far.
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Post by numbah290 on Nov 10, 2006 4:49:00 GMT
yeah what he said, very interesting *puts on cool professor glasses* post more
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Post by numberunknown on Nov 10, 2006 6:41:31 GMT
nice *gives a thumbs up sign*
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Post by numbah27 on Nov 10, 2006 18:30:30 GMT
Oh, great story so far! Can't wait for more!
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Post by queennicki on Nov 11, 2006 21:52:32 GMT
thanks for your comments! heres the 2nd chapter!
and i would just like to tell you that i do not beleive in the devil, he just makes such a good evil charecter! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
chapter 2: a deal
"huh?" said kuki "i didnt say anythi-" she turned around and came face to face with a tall, pale boy with dark hair and bright green eyes that seemed to hypnotise her.
"hallo" he said in a normal yet frightening voice "im daimian, but please, call me dean" he held his hand out for her to shake it.
"i-im Kuki Sanban" she said shaking his hand and still staring at his deep and eerie eyes.
"i hear your having a few problems with your friends?" he questioned "that they are underestimating you?"
"y-yes" she suddenly saped out her trance "but how did you kno-?"
"what would you say if i could make it all better?" he interupted
"how? "
"well, leave that to me. all you gotta do is sign a contract." he handed you her a piece of paper. she read it though then looked up at him in shock.
"it says that, you get my soul!"
"its my payment, in exchange of what you really want, and how do you know i wont be nice to you. do i might not be such a bad guy." he said deffencively
"i still dont think i will." she said handing the contract back and walking away
"WAIT!" he exclaimed angerilly causing her to turn round and jump in fright "i-i mean, i think i have a solution that will interest you!" dean said trying to calm down.
"what do you mean?" asked Kuki
"well how about i give you not 1, not 2, but 3 escape tricks. if you get to prove your friends wrong and 3 other things happen, i get your soul. but if they dont all happen by this friday you get to keep your soul."
kuki thought for a moment and said "what would those other three things be?"
"well...umm..." dean started thinking "how about your friend, wallabee, he has to get an A+ in his poetry class."
"carry on"
"and your friends Abby and Hoagie have to on on a date by their own will."
"not likely, but carry on"
dean thought for a moment, and then a sly grin crept on his face "your friend, wallabee, has to admit he loves you by his own free will"
Kuki was silent. thats what she wanted most in the world, and now she was betting against it! mind you, she didnt know if he liked her, let alone LOVED her. and why on earth would he keep it a secret for so long and then suddenly say it now. "okay, youve got a deal."
Dean grinned and handed her a new contract and a Quill., she signed her name at the bottom of the page and gave it to him. "pleasure doing business with you" he uttered smiling darkly before walking away.
kuki was looking down at he floor, still unsure about what she just did when a back cat ran past her in the direction in which Dean had walked "hey, i thought you wernt allowed pets in schoo-" she said looking up at where she thought Dean was, but i fact, he was gone.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *scary theme music* OOOOOOOOOOOOO! bad move kuki! please R&R!
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Nov 11, 2006 21:54:07 GMT
coool I WHAT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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Post by numbah27 on Nov 11, 2006 23:05:39 GMT
Oh, dear. Kuki's gone and made a bet with the Devil. What a bad move. Well, I can't wait to see what happens next! This story just keeps getting better.
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Post by numbah290 on Nov 11, 2006 23:38:36 GMT
yeah keep it coming this is awesome
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Nov 12, 2006 1:21:32 GMT
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Post by queennicki on Nov 19, 2006 21:31:14 GMT
here ya go! chapter 3! thanks again for the comments! sorry it took so long! (blame school) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
chapter 3: The mission
That day after school, sector V met in the main room of the treehouse to prepare for tonights mission, they were all ready and ready to go.
"so, you all know the plan?" numbuh 1 asked the rest of them
"no, ya neva told me" numbuh 4 replied
"oh yes, well just follow me, numbuh 5 and numbuh 3 until we get in the school. once were in look around for any teachers or intruders, if you do find anyone just-"
"beat 'em up?"
"yes, fine, whatever" said numbuh 1 rolling his eyes "right, ready? kids next door, BATTLESTATIONS!"
They all ran into the K.o.o.l .B.u.s and sat at their stations preparing for their arrivel. When they landed numbuh 2 stayed behind so they could make a quick escape if needed. Numbuh 5 quickly dodged the serurity cameras and entered the basement through a low window and turned off the secruity cameras. Numbuhs 1 and 4 enterd the school and Numbuh 3 stayed outside to keep watch.
She sighed and sat on the floor, worring about the deal she made that afternoon. who was he? she thought and how did he know my name? what does he want with my soul? how did he know my friends? what is he planning?
Suddenly she heard a fearce russling in the bushes, "hallo?" she asked in a small voice "is anyone there?" she stood up abruptly. Someone was slowly walking out. there were many of them. they looked strong. soon enough, numbuh 3 saw the faint outline of Cree and the teen ninjas.
"hallo there little brat," cree said in a playful, mocking voice. she was walking towards numbuh 3. "you should have stayed at home, dont wanna get that sweet little face all messed up." Cree smirked. numbuh 3 jumped a tried to kick her, but Cree dodged her and kicked her hard in the stomach instead. while kuki was weak, the teen ninjas pined her down on the ground. Cree stood over her with a large looking gun in her hand, she laughed loudly and held the gun up a little higher.
"do you know what this is?" she asked numbuh 3 who only continued to struggle "obviosly not, this is a shocking ray. one blast by this and you could be in a frozen state of shock for at least a month." Cree aimed the weapon at the small girl struggling on the floor, kuki tenced her herself for the guns cold ray...but nothing happened. Cree looked at the gun and shook it "UGH! WHATS WRONG WITH IT?!" she opened it to look inside, but nothing was wrong, it just wasnt working "I TESTED IT THIS MORNING! AND WAS WORKING FINE! WHATS WRONG?!" threw it and it "accindently" hit one one of the teen ninjas who was holding down numbuh 3. Kuki punched the other teen ninja who immediatly let go of her, she jumped up and grabbed the shocking ray and aimed it at the teen ninjas surrounding her, she fired the gun at them and it worked! she took out all of the teen ninjas, including cree! after, she sat panting with a bad headache she was so dizzy. She closed her eyes, and lost consciousness.
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dont worry people! kuki will be fine, just kinda...freaked out! in the next chaptershe finds out she made a BIG mistake!
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Nov 20, 2006 2:31:53 GMT
OOO COOL ...I CNT WAIT TO SEE WAY SHE WELL GET IN TROUPLE
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Post by 6issocool on Nov 20, 2006 16:33:55 GMT
will she lose out on the deal with the devil and have her soul removed or something!!!!
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Post by queennicki on Nov 20, 2006 18:07:43 GMT
EEEEWWWW! too gorey for me! P.S. little hint for ya, i dont believe in unhappy endings!
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