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Post by number7 on May 18, 2006 15:45:12 GMT
Chapter 15 ---------------------------------- ''Evil part of you? There is no evil part of you...oh wait you mean the girl whos eyes burn in anger, who screams when being mad, whos skin turnes red when someone doesn't agree with her?'' Kuki noded ''DON'T LIVE ME ALONE!!!!'' Wally shouted in fear cause he knows what happens when you make Kuki angry ''I wasn't going to do that!'' said Kuki and looked in the mirror ''Do I really look so scaery when I'm mad?'' Wally laught ''Yes you do!'' Kuki looked at the image in the mirror. It wasn't scaery at all the image was like a sweet kitten. She looked sadly on the ground ''Are you Ok Kuki?'' Kuki looked at him ''No I'm not! I have to go number 4. Sorry!'' Wally gazed at her ''WHAT YOU CAN'T LIVE!! WHAT IF SHE COMES?  '' Kuki opened the door ''Then you need all the luck that you have! Good luck!'' she closed the door ''NUMBER 3 COME BACK!!!!!!!'' the door opened but it wasn't Kuki. It was Abby ''Oh even better it's you number5!'' Abby smiled ''I'm here to see how your doing!'' She took a bottle and gave it to Wally ''Drink it!'' Wally opened the bottle and took a gulp. Then the door opened ''NUMBER 4 DON'T.....'' Wally didn't hear what Kuki wanted to say but he welt sooo tired at the moment. He closed his eyes. Nothing, he felt nothing anymore, he felt there is no Wally, there is no world. He stoped thinking that moment. He's brain died. And his body with it. Was he dead? ''Cree? What do you mean?'' Hoagie jelled at Tommi ''Mom hired her! But she did horroble things to me!'' He took of his hat. Hoagie was shocked. Tommis head was bleading. |
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Post by Numbuh Googol on May 18, 2006 18:12:25 GMT
Poor Tommy! Cree is sooo evil. This story is really good, Number7!  |
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Post by number7 on May 18, 2006 18:13:51 GMT
aaaaw thanks
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Post by Numbuh Googol on May 18, 2006 18:17:51 GMT
Your welcome!
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Post by number7 on May 30, 2006 6:33:32 GMT
Chapter 16
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''What did she do?'' Shouted hoagie ''I didn't want to go to my room so she made me!'' Tommi puted the hat back ''Thats why your hed is bleeding?'' Tommi noded ''Eh..kinda yeah! She saw me clibing out the winow and then eh....!'' Tommis face was white ''Whats wrong!'' Hoagie asked ''I lost a lot of blood, but it's just a scrach.'' Hoagie was going insane ''JUST A SCRACH?! YOUR BLEEDING TO DEATH TOMMI! Oh noo...we neeed to fix it.'' Tommi looked at Hoagie ''You mean fix my head with a needle?'' Hoagie noded. Tommis eyes went big ''But please don't hurt me!'' Hoagie smiled ''Why should I do something like that?!''
Wally opened his eyes. Everything was bright, his head hurted. He closed his eyes again and opened them ''Number 3? Number 5?'' no anserw. He got up and looked around. He was in his room. But things were different. But he didn't know how. ''Helloo?!'' the door opened. Wally looked behind and.....
Nigel gazed at Lizzie ''I hate you Lizzie!'' Lizzie was angry ''GO AWAY!'' Nigel shouted and she was gone like sha wasn't ever there. ''Err..Lizzie?'' she was gone. Nigel sat down. He took his sun glasses and puted on the ground. He was tired, more tiered that ever ''Nigel?'' A soft voice came in his ear. Not the shouting Lizzies voice but soft and sweet. He looked up and saw a girl sanding in front him. He had never seen her. ''Hi I'm Nigel. Who are you?''
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Post by Numbuh Googol on May 30, 2006 16:42:22 GMT
I'm hooked on this fic... AAAUUUGGGGHHHH! A CLIFFHANGER!! I thought Nigel was very brave standing up to Lizzie like that.
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Post by number7 on May 30, 2006 18:06:26 GMT
Chapter 17 ----------------------------- Hoagie was fixing Tommi ''Aught!'' Hoagie took the needle out ''I can't fix you if you don't stay still!'' Tommi looked down ''Sorry Hoagie but the pain is so big!'' Hoagie looked for more scraches and took the needle again ''Maybe you should think about something you like?'' Tommi looked at Hoagie ''Like what?!'' Hoagie smiled ''Like icecream, none adult places, TV, Candy, no rules, number fiv...'' Hoagies face turned red. Tommi laught '' Hoagie and Abby sitting on the tree K.I.S.S.I.N.G. '' Hoagie looked down.. Wally turned over it was Kuki ''I said not to drink it!'' She looked at wally ''What is going on?!'' Wally shouted ''The drink, it was poison. Now your traped in your mind!'' Wally looked around ''THIS IS MY MIND??!!'' A quick smile was on Kukis face ''Yeah..'' Wally now knew how dumb he had been. ''Err...yeah..'' he sat on his bed and closed his eyes ''Your not going to wake up like this. You have to go out of your mind for that!'' Wally smiled ''I'm thinking so can you please go away?'' Kuki noded ''I'll be back soon!''Wally noded and fell asleep The girl had short black hair. In there was a pink flower. She was wearing a green shirt and dark green pants. ''Who are you?'' Nigel asked. The girl smiled ''My name is Elanora but you can call me number 28 too if you want.'' Nigel stud up and took his glasses ''So how long have you been in this treehouse?'' ------------------------------------------- Ok 28 like you wanted- your in the story  |
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Post by lillyfan123 on Sept 21, 2006 1:28:47 GMT
Ya know.....you should write scary movies.Your good at it!You got that,I WANA LOOK AWAY BUT CANT!!!thing going for ya!!Are you gona write more?Will you PM me if you do?Oh please.
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Post by number7 on Sept 22, 2006 16:51:18 GMT
Thanks  Yeah I'm gonna write more when I get the chance! |
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Post by number7 on Oct 1, 2006 15:30:27 GMT
Chapter 18 ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Wally opend his eyes ''OH CRAP! I'm still not awake!'' He stud up and started walking in circkles. Then he stoped. ''I WANT TO BE IN MY ROOM!'' he shouted and there it was a door to his room. ''YES!'' he shouted and opened the door.... ''OK now your heds OK!'' he looked at Tommys head ''Yeah allmost the same!'' he said ''WHAT? ALLMOST? WHATS WRONG WITH IT? ?'' Tommy was really upset ''You...your face is a little....messie!'' Tommy didn't understand! ''WHAT DO YOU MEAN? A LITTLE MESSIE? ?''' Hoagie noded ''The wounds will heal for time and it will be normall. At the time I should sugest you to wear a mask or something!'' Tommy was really angry ''CREE WILL GET IT!!!!'' he started runing ''WAIT TOMMY COME BACK! IT'S NOT SAFE!!! TOMMY!!'' but he was gone. ''Oh nooo.Tommy....'' He herd the scream he herd him fall but didn't do anything...What did happen? He didn't understand... And didn't want to know. He started walking but in to the other way then where the scream came from. ''What are you doing Hoagie? Your brother is still alive but you have to save him or he will die!'' Hoagie turned around ''Number 5?'' but none was there. He started runing thowards where the screame came from ''TOMMY??'' There was something lying on the ground ''TOMMY!!!'' he looked at his lil brother. ''TOMMY WHAT HAPPEN?'' Tommy opened his eyes ''Somethings wrong!'' he said and fainted. On that moment Hoagie felt something painful and fell down. Nigel looked at Elanora ''What are you doing here?'' She smiled ''I found out that sector V was in trouble...well really all the sectors are in trouble cause from all the sectors one member has turned insene... None knows how to stop it.. Even the DC heve the same situatsion!'' Nigel didn't understand ''What the DC? Who?'' Elanora looked down ''The funny thing is that it happens only to girls so it's the blond girl.'' Nigel looked at her ''But what about your sector?'' Elanora steped closer to Nigel ''It's me!'' |
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'' Kuki opened the door ''Then you need all the luck that you have! Good luck!'' she closed the door ''NUMBER 3 COME BACK!!!!!!!'' the door opened but it wasn't Kuki. It was Abby ''Oh even better it's you number5!'' Abby smiled ''I'm here to see how your doing!'' She took a bottle and gave it to Wally ''Drink it!'' Wally opened the bottle and took a gulp. Then the door opened ''NUMBER 4 DON'T.....'' Wally didn't hear what Kuki wanted to say but he welt sooo tired at the moment. He closed his eyes. Nothing, he felt nothing anymore, he felt there is no Wally, there is no world. He stoped thinking that moment. He's brain died. And his body with it. Was he dead?
Yeah I'm gonna write more when I get the chance!