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Post by number7 on Apr 17, 2006 16:27:32 GMT
YEY I'M BACK!!! here is- Chapter 8 --------------------------------- Kuki looked what she had done and started crying ''I didn't mean to do it!!!'' she started runing and then... she jumped out the window. Abby and Hoagie looked out side and she was gone.. ''What was that?'' Hoagie looked at Abby and then at Lizzies body. Abby sat on the ground and started singing ''Are you OK number 5??'' Hoagie asked but she didn't anserw, her eyes were blank. She only sang the song. Murder, murder in the house sneeky like a little mouse When you don't look out well you'll make a nice coat
Blood here blood there blood is every where Look out little girl or you will die for sure
Hoagie my little friend It is the end We have had fun But now just RUN!!!!!!
Hoagie looked behind him and saw Kuki with a gun. Abby looked at him blankly and screamed ''RUN HOAGIE!!!!!''
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Post by 28 on Apr 17, 2006 17:03:31 GMT
*screaming, running around in circles*
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Post by 06 on Apr 18, 2006 14:14:44 GMT
*does same as 28*
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Post by Numbuh Googol on Apr 18, 2006 15:30:28 GMT
*joins Numbuh 28 and Numbuh 6*
Ooh... exciting!!
Now where was I...?
Oh yeah... "AAAAAAAUUUUUUGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!"
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Post by number7 on Apr 20, 2006 4:33:02 GMT
Chapter 9 -------------------------- Kuki gazed at Hoagie and said ''It is your time to go Hoagie!'' Hoagie stepped back a little, his eyes were filled with fear. ''What is wrong with you? You have been evil and all!'' Kuki started laughing and said ''Can't you see it's the world what has gone crazy, I'm normal but you can't see that!'' Behind Hoagie was a wall '' You and normal??? What do you know about normal at the moment??? Your some kinda killer, your not a human right now and you talking about not normal!!!!'' Hoagie grabbed a piece of wood on the ground and hited Kuki so hard. You could hear how she took her breath and then fell on the ground. Her face was all covered with blood. ''I'm so sorry Kuki but you made me do this!'' At the corner was Abby ,her eyes were still blank. Hoagie went there and Abby hugged him and said with a sad voice ''Can't you see Hoagie dear it's killing us. It first makes us crazy and then we die. Find it Hoagie and let us free.'' Abby leted go and walked few steppes back. Her feet went weak and she fell on the ground. Hoagie grabbed her and carried her to bed. But when he went back to pick up Kuki ,she was gone again. Hoagie looked around and saw a little blood on the ground where she lied. Wally opened his eyes it was dark in the room. He looked around and saw someone in front of him, it was Kuki. ''What are you doing here monster???'' Kuki started crying ''I didn't mean to do it! The darkness is clever and killing us all.'' Wally recognized the old Kuki. He stud up and putted his arms around her. But the second later he felt pain in his back. He turned over and couldn't believe it.
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Post by 28 on Apr 21, 2006 1:25:40 GMT
There were some grammar mistakes in there.
But it was still AMAZING! AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING!
I'm so stinkin' tense.......MUST HAVE NEXT CHAPTEEERRRRR!!!!!!
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Post by number7 on Apr 21, 2006 5:15:44 GMT
Oh woooops.....well I modified few mistakes what I found duh need to control what I write
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Post by 28 on Apr 22, 2006 2:02:16 GMT
Mostly it's verb conjugation. (Don't know if I spelled that right.) Past tense verbs have always been one of the main troubles with grammar. Don't worry about it too much.
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Post by 06 on Apr 23, 2006 19:26:19 GMT
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NOT WALLYKINS! =(
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Post by number7 on Apr 24, 2006 10:22:11 GMT
well let's go on with the story.... Chapter 10 ------------------------------------ Where did she go? Then suddenly Hoagie felt that someone was behind him. He turned around and saw Abby. She was dressed in a white dress. In her black hair was a big white rose. ''Number 5 is everything OK?'' She didn't answer. ''Helloooooo, number 5?'' She smiled a little , turned around and opened the window. Red light came to the room. ''What's this?'' hoagie asked and saw the moon was red ''It's the night of evil!'' Abby said looking out the window ''What do you mean? Why is the moon red? What is going on?'' Hoagie didn't understand he walked next to Abby and looked at the sky. ''No thing will be the same Hoagie dear! Evil wants us to die so it could rule the world. It takes over a pure mind.'' Hoagie looked at her and said ''Thats Kuki!'' Abby nodded ''Yes Hoagie dear it's Kuki! You have to save her cause your still normal.'' she looked down and a tear rolled over her cheek. ''Please save us Hoagie dear!'' She looked in to Hoagies eyes and kissed him on the cheek ''Go brave night!'' and believe it or not she was gone.
Nigel opened his eyes. It was very dark. His face was in pain. He stud up and saw something in front him. It was Wally. ''NUMBER 4!!'' he shouted and helped him up on a empty bed. ''Are you OK number 4?'' he asked. Wally opened his eyes and said ''Dead...she's dead.'' Nigel looked at Wally's hand, there was a knife ''WHO DID YOU KILL WALLABEE? WHO???'' but Wally didn't listen to him. He felt so cold and how he was gone. Gone from the pain and from his body. Wally was dead. Nigel looked at the body what used to be Wallabee Beatles. He took a sheet and covered him with it. Who was he talking about? Who was dead? And what was that knife doing in he's hand? What was going on?
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Post by 06 on Apr 24, 2006 17:02:47 GMT
HEY! 2/5 AND AN UNINTENDED 1/4 MOMENT!!!!
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Post by Numbuh Googol on Apr 24, 2006 17:25:18 GMT
Wow... exciting!!
P.S. Loved the 2/5!
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Post by 28 on Apr 24, 2006 22:58:07 GMT
2222222222222222////////////555555555555!!!!!!
I'll give you a present if you put just one TEENSY bit of 1/28!
^_^I hadda say it.
IT'S SO GOOOOD!!!! I CANNOT READ ON, YET I CANNOT TURN AWAYYYY!!!!
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Post by squirrelmonkey57 on Apr 25, 2006 1:25:39 GMT
I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!! ITS SO EXCITING!!!!!! MY EYES WERE SERIOUSLY POPPING OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by number7 on Apr 25, 2006 4:29:42 GMT
Chapter 11 -------------------------------------- Hoagie stud in a empty hall. It was very cold there. Only the spot where Abby kissed him felt warm. Why was he the one to be normal? Hoagie looked around and saw nothing but emptiness. He walked on. There was a door in front of him. He opened the door. The room was empty too only a little chair and on that chair- Hoagies freezed looking at it. He had never felt so much fear at once. It was Kuki. Hoagie could not see her face cause Kukis hair covered it. Kukis skin was white as snow and she was wearing a white nightgown. She stud up and was coming towards him. Hoagie would have run but he was too scared. Finally Kuki was in front him and she grabbed Hoagies hand. How could you describe the pain. Hoagie closed his eyes and when he opened them he was back in that hall. He looked at his hand. It was normal. He had just imagined it. He opened the door. No chair and no Kuki. He turned over and decided to go see how Nigel and Wally were doing.´But before he go there he heard a scream.
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