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Post by victor on Nov 6, 2006 1:52:00 GMT
This is a remake of Star Nigel Zero, with new plot, Planets, Characters and else.
Chapter 1: The Adventure Begins..... The Call of Lyka!
The Lyka System. A star system located beyond the reaches of the Earth is on peril. It has been 3 Months since the Delightful Revenge was halted by the Robin Government, the new name of the Government of the Solar System under the rule of Numbuh 362. The Lyka System has been a long peaceful system, with the capital planet, Rayquaza as the main "bread basket". Everything changed for the anthropomorphic animal and humans that lived there, 9 Months ago, the Delightful Children took over the weak and peaceful system, turning the planets into fortresses, prisons, production plants and death camps. It's neighbors, Lylat, Lyko, Draco and Birdka have tried to help the people of Lyka. But all attempts were failed due to the onmipotent Delighful Army and Star Navy. The days passed, the rest of the Delightfuls, Lenny, David, Donald, and Tabitha separated and left Lyka to pursue a free and more quiet lives. Leaving Clarissa, the blond Delightful Girl to rule the system as Empress. Clarissa rules both Inner and Outer Lyka from her palace in Rayquaza City. The people of Lyka had enough of this rule, they have prayed for salvation and freedom. Their prayers were answered when a Phoenix-Class Battlecruiser entered Outer Lyka, the ship was the Headquarters of Star Nigel, the former Sector V of the KND, in search of fame, fortune and their dreams...........
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Post by nathalie on Nov 6, 2006 2:23:50 GMT
cool!
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Post by victor on Nov 7, 2006 2:55:26 GMT
Chapter 2:The Coversation.
On the Planet Rayquaza, the daylight was shining on the planet, the citizens were on their normal activites as always. Meanwhile on Rayquaza City, on the fortified section of the city Clarissa was on her throne, looking at the hovering glass screens that her ships brought . The Throne Room was full of luxuries, it was made of marble, windows to see the outside gardens. The throne was small, there was also a desk were Clarissa will sign and write new orders, laws, and documents for the Delightful Lykan Empire. Clarissa was just sitting there, smiling evilly, thinking of a plan to take over the galaxy. The door opens and a Antropomorphic Charizard comes, he wore a green uniform , blue eyes, a great sense of honor and brutal strength. His name was Jarko, the Supreme Fleet Admiral of the Delightful Fleet. Jarko sat down on one of the chairs and looks at Clarissa right in the eye.
" Empress Clarissa. It seems that a bird-shaped battlecruiser has entered Planet Artikunos. We bellieve its heading to the fleet on the Parlok Region." Jarklo siad as Clarissa just smiled.
"Do you know who the ship belongs to?" Clarissa asked him.
" It belongs to a so called Nigel Kappa Uno......" Jarko said. The name enraged Clarissa , that she hit her desk with a closed fist.
" I want a bounty placed on his head. 89 Billion Kokis. " Clarissa yelled as her echo was heard across the room.
" But Ma'am. They have broken no laws." Jarko said as she saw Clarissa getting angry.
"Right away, Ma'am!" Jarko said as he stood, bowed and left.......
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Post by nathalie on Nov 7, 2006 2:57:44 GMT
very good! you know.... i think you could write some scifi stuff in the future
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Post by victor on Nov 8, 2006 2:57:26 GMT
Chapter 3: Jarko's Estate.
" Nigel. A defecting Delightful Officer has contacted us Five Days ago. He plans to give us information about the latest projects that Clarissa has in mind. He demands that you personally meet him in his Artikunos Estate. Contact us when you're done. Numbuh 5 over and out." Numbuh 5's voice was heard over the radio. Nigel just smiles and steers his SUV to the right, taking this path, a metal gate opens and Nigel drives to the entance. He turns off the motor, opens the door, closes it and leaves the SUV. This SUV was actually a combat vehicle. Nigel then walks up the stairs and knocks the door.
The door is opened by a servant, she was a violet furred vulpine.
" Jarko-san is expecting you." The servant said as Nigel entered and followed her to the living room. The Estate was elegant, the mansion was a combination of Russian, Gothic and Greek Architecture. The hallway was elegnant and gilded. Jarko was sitting on a couch, with a laptop typing. The Laptop had secret information that Nigel could use to defeat Clarissa. The servant and Nigel arrive at the Living Room. Jarko then pauses, stands up and extends his hand. Nigel shakes Jarko's hand. After the greetings, Jarko explains that the laptop has all information he needs, he also is planning to defect to him to help the resistance overthrow Clarissa. A explosion occurs and Delightful Troops enter, searching for Jarko.
" They found out about the plan." Nigel said as he placed the Laptop on his backpack.
Jarko then presses a button on the wall and two rifles came out. The rifles were long, had a scope and had a box magazine on the left side. It had 190 Caseless Plasma Bullets. This was the rifle that the resistance forces used on their fight. Jarko had secret production plants in Lyka that made weapons for Resistance Forces. Nigel and Jarko grab the rifles and a few magazines.
" You ready?" Nigel asked as he aimed the rifle at the door.
" You bet." Jarko said as he aimed the rifle at the door.
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Post by nathalie on Nov 8, 2006 3:24:56 GMT
cool! kinda short thouhj
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Post by victor on Nov 9, 2006 3:37:08 GMT
Chapter 4: The Escape
"Arrrgh!!!" A Delightful Troop yelled as he died.
" Orrggg!" Another troop got hit and died. Jarko and Nigel leave the living room. The hallway was quiet.
"The troops are StormWolves. They carry special operations against resistance movements. They carry Scorpio Rifles with silencers and other equipment to ensure success in the missions." Jarko said as they advanced downstairs. The Delightful Troops then came out of the roof with a submachine gun, with pistol grip, magazine of 560 Plasma Bullets which fitted on the left, a long range barrel and a MP5-style stock. This was the Delightful Dragonbreath Submachine Gun. Its called Dragonbreath since the muzzle flash looks like the breath of a Dragon. The Troops came down in ropes, Nigel aims and fires at a troop, killing it. The troop falls. Nigel and Jarko go down the stairs. The door was destoryed and Nigel and Jarko go out. Suddenly, Delightful Troops surround the Charizard and the human. They point their Dragonbreath Guns and are about to pull the trigger. Nigel and Jarko close their eyes, accepting their fate.
RATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATAT TATATATATATATATATATATATATATAT!!!!
There was gunshots from a Dragonbreath Submachine Gun. Nigel and Jarko open their eyes. From a distance, Jarko saw a kid, he was Greek, ten years old with gold eyes, six katanas, brown hair and a green jumpsuit. He was the one who killed the Delightful Troops. He had a Dragonbreath Submachine gun. From the sky, a Trinagular Ship came, it was a Hyko Class Assault Ship. It was trinagular with straight wings and Turbo-Plasma Cannons located in various points of the ship.
" The resistance came here to pick us up." Jarko said as he decided to enter the ship, a door opened, Jarko entered and Nigel followed. Vic also enters. The door closes and the Hyko-Class Assault Ship launches to space.
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Post by victor on Nov 10, 2006 22:36:26 GMT
Chapter 5: Gemixia
Planet Gemexia, a Planet in Inner Lyka. Gemixia was also the biggest exporter of gems of the Milky Way, making it the richest planet in the galaxy. But to this day, the Delightful Army uses it as a source to power the ships Guunka Units. Gemixia is also the biggest Exporter of Guunka to both Milky Way and Andromeda Galaxy. The skies are cerulean and the planet is rich on Diamonds, Guunka Crystals, Sapphires, Onyx, Rubies, Emeralds, Opaque Diamonds and the rare and extremely valuable Phoenix Plasma Crystal. The Grand Phoenix was on the sky. Navigating slowly and keeping a look out for Delightful Warships on the sky. On the bridge, Numbuh 5 was sitting on the captains throne. Numbuh 4 was in his bedroom, typing something on the Laptop that every bedroom has. Numbuh 2 was ensuring Navigation and keep the cannons on full alert. On the ground, a mysterious portal opens. A figure came out. A girl wearing regular clothes but had something else. In her hand she had somthing that looked like big key. A KeyBlade was the weapon. It looks like a key, only the size of a arming sword from the Crusades, it had a platinum blade, two knucklebows both left and right. Her name was Lina also known as Numbuh 335 of the KND. Lina was traveling the universe fighting the forces of Darkness. Her quest took her here, to Planet Gemixia. What Lina didn't know is that she was on one of the forests where the Delightful Troops were hiding deep on the ground. She decides to walk a bit to explore the region.
POP!!!
Delightful Troops popped out of the ground and surround Lina, they point their Scorpio Rifles. The Delightful Troops were three humans and seven anthropomorphic wolves.
" Who are you?" A Delightful Troop asked. Lina didn't respond.
"Answer the question. Who the heck are and what do you want?" Another Troop asked.
" Heh! If she can't talk. Let her feel pain." The Delightful Captain said. He was a anthropomorphic wolf, his name was Keku.
Lina took her KeyBlade and hits Keku. The Delightful Troops lower their weapons and see how their captain goes down to the ground.......
"She hit the Captain." A wolf Troop said.
"Get!Get her!!" Another Wolf Troop said as he aimed the Plasma Assault Rifle at her head. Little portals oppen and thousands of black dots come out of it. They scatter around the forest and posses every Delightful Troop in range. The Delightful Troops became Dark Troopers. Dark Troopers are way different to other Delightful Troops. They have no emotions, no feelings, no heart to feel the emotions, their eyes changed to blue, green and finally white, like if their soul was taken away. The right arm changed from a hand to a sharp, curved blade, while the left hand remained the same. The left hand wielded the Scorpio Rilfes.
"Not them again." Lina said as she ran t a tree and took cover. The Dark Troopers opened fire, Ionized Projectiles flew everywhere, hitting random trees, crystals and leaves.
From a distance, Resistance Forces were scouting the area.
" Plasma Projectiles. I hear Plasma Projectiles coming from Scorpios . Range 3/4 of a mile." A anthropomorphic vulpine said to his friend. The two scouts wore green uniforms and wielded Dragonbreaths. The two scouts run to the battle area. Lina was waiting for the Dark Troops to stop shooting. The Heartless, the creatures that took over the Delightful Troops had no control of the body they just took over. The Resistance Scouts come and open fire on the Dark Troops, killing them. Lina comes out of the tree she took cover.
"Thanks." She said to the Resistance Forces. But then, the Dark Troopers came and surrounded the three. They were marching closer and closer. Lina, with swift speed, hits one of the Dark Troops. The two scouts open fire. The Plasma Projectiles flew to their targets while the Bullet Cases were ejected. Lina kept on slashing the Dark Troops while the Scouts kept on firing.
Three hours later, the bodies of the Troopers were on the ground, lyind dead and bleeding black blood.
"It was lucky that you we were here." The second scout said.
" But who are they? I mean the soldiers." Lina asked.
" These are Empress Clarissa's Troops. They are called the Delightful Forces. They have a goal. Thier goal is to take over the Galaxy and possibly the Universe. We're the resistance figting for our freedom and the freedom of our star system from Clarissa's Rule." The first scout said. Lina understood what they were saying. After the explanation a portal opened.
'Well, thanks for everything." Lina said as she runned to the portal with her new friends waving goodbye..
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Post by victor on Nov 12, 2006 21:26:30 GMT
Chapter 6: The Attack on Rayquaza City: The Liberation!!
The Hyko-Class Battleship meet with the Resistance Fleet in the Sector N Nebula. On the Bridge, Nigel and Vic were sitting down, manning a few components of the ship while Jarko was giving a speech to the Resistance Fleet. This is what Jarko's Speech said.
" All Lykans listen up. We have suffred a horrible reign of terror by Empress Clarissa and her forces. We cannot let this happen to our beloved system. We are going to capture Planet Rayquaza by attacking the capital city. To lose Rayquaza means that the point of the enemy sword will be pointed at our throats. You must fight for Lyka and your homeworlds. I believe that all of us can win back our homes. Do it for Lyka!" Jarko's speech inginted the Resistance Forces. The Thousands of Hyko Ships then left the nebula by using WarpSpace. It was going to be nighttime in Rayquaza. The ships then arrive at Rayquaza, unwarping and heading down the atmosphere. The city was calm and peaceful, people slept quietly until a noise shattered the peace like a vase that broke.
" Send all Troops down." Jarko said as his ship and others landed and doors opened and the Resistance Troops came out armed with Dragonbreath Submachine Guns and the Chariazcus Rifle. The Resistance Troops march. Vic and Nigel came out. On the sky, the battleships were destroying buildings and important Delightful strongholds. The Delightful Army came with trucks and deployed their troops on the streets of Rayquaza City and thus a battle begin in the ground. Plasma Bullets were flying everywhere in the city. Clarissa then woke up, she was on her bedroom, she then leaves bed and gets dresses in her favorite sailor dress and puts on her pink bow.
BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG!
The Turbo-Plasma Batteries went as they hit the palace walls, pieces were falling of. Clarissa then leaves her bedroom. On the City Streets, Delightful and Resistance Troops were dying, Nigel and Vic took cover behind a piece of rubble. Vic then pokes out and sees the Delightful Troops running towards them. Vic pulls the trigger and opens fire on the Delightful Troops, the Caseless Plasma Bullets flew rapidly and hit the troops right in various parts of the body.
" Nigel, we have to go the main plaza and capture it so that this Planet can be liberated. Jarko and the others will provide Air Support. But we need our fighters to get there." Vic said.
" You have it all figured out." Nigel said.
Two beams of Light hit the ground and two Nightfires came, the Harrier-Type and the Delta Type. The Harrier Type had the body of the Harrier Jetfighter with six wings. The Delta Type was triangular and had two wings with crensent moons at the end. The two decide to board their respective starfightes and fly to the main plaza. The sky was empty since no Vulpine Fighters were on sight.
" This is gonna get fun." Nigel said as he steered straight with Vic following, the City was on flames and chaos exploded. After ten minutes of flying they arrive at the plaza. The Resistance Troops were surrounded by Delightful Army Trucks. Nigel and Vic steet their Nightfires and dive down, firing their Turbo- Plamsa Cannons on the Trucks.
BOOOOM!!!
BOOOOOM!!!
BOOOOM!!
BOOOOM!!!!
The Delightful Trucks were destroyed and the leftover Resistance Troops head to the main building and capture the main plaza. On the sky, a Hulo- Class Star Shuttle escaped. It was Clarissa who escaped the capital of Lyka. The Shuttle leaves the Planet and heads to her Fleet on the Artikunos Space.
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Post by victor on Nov 13, 2006 0:31:22 GMT
Chapter 7: Phoenix Strike.
On the Artikunos Space, the shuttle that Clarissa was on heads to her personal warship. The Delightful Warships were known to the Milky Way as Sun Crushers. They are called this beacuse of the weapons. Another reason is because they are marvels of size and technology, they look that if they were made from a technology unborn of the Milky Way. They strike fear into the hearts of people, its bad luck if a Sun Crusher heads to a planet. Since it means that the Delightful Empire will conquer the planet with little or no resistance at all. Sun Crushers have a triangular fuselage, long body that connects the bridge to the engines. Clarissa then arrives on the bridge and sits on her throne. She viewed the stars and saw how the Sun Crusher Fleet was in orbit around Artikunos, she ordered that all the fleets come to Artikunos
Back on Rayquaza.....
The Sun rose and it was a hard battle for the resistance. Rayquza and a few planets are free. The only hope was to destroy Clarissa's Sun Crusher and the Delightful Empire would end before it could expand into the Galaxy. If Clarissa lives, she could bring terror and death to the Galaxy. Jarko and the resistance leaders from several planets in Inner and Outer Lyka had come to plan a attack on the entire Delightful Fleet on Planet Artikunos. The days passed and Clarissa was eager to wait to crush those who oppose her. On the 21th of Kritos of the Rayquazan Calendar, the resistance warships and the Grand Phoenix leave the planets and head to Artikunos to end the Delightful Empire once and for all.
The hours passed and both fleets faced each other, the new Lykan Confedaration, the name of the resistance came.
" Empress. It seems that the resistance is ready to battle." A voice of a Delightul Officer said. Clarissa just smiled.
" Open fire." Clarissa said calmy and the Sun Crushers deploy their Plasma Cannons from the belly and left and right sides of the ship. The cannons aim and fire at the Hyko-Class Battleships. 5 Hyko-Class ships took damage. The Confedarate Ships line in rows just like muskateers and aim their Turbo-Plasma Batteries. The Grand Phoenix was also in the first row. Victor was now a member of Star Nigel. Everyone was sitting on their respective chairs and panels. Numbuh 5 was making sure that the cannons were ready to fire.
" 1st Row! FIRE!!!" Nigel said as the Grand Phoenix and the Hyko-Class Battleships opened fire. The Green Plasma Beams were leaving the cannon, hitting a few Sun Crushers in their range of sight. The Sun Crushers returned fire, sending Red Plasma beams at the Confedaration Ships.
" Okay! The Battleships are commencing their heavy cannon fire. Lets board our Nightfires." Nigel said. A android came to man the ship, his name was Beto-45, the android that takes control of the Grand Phoenix. Nigel and the others leave the bridge, head to the hangar. They run and board their Nightfires. The hangar racks open and the Nightfires launch...
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Post by victor on Nov 14, 2006 2:31:54 GMT
The Nightfires launched and flew to the Sun Crusher Fleet. The Lykan Confederacy also launched their own fighters, the Dragonen Fighter. The Dragonen was a single seat fighter that looked like a Jet Fighter but with a chin mounted six chambered Mini gun. The fighters head to the Sun Crushers.
" Empress Clarissa. It seems that enemy fighters have launched and are headed towards us. Shall we launch the Vulpine Fighters?" The Voice of a Delightful Officer said.
" No!" Clarissa yelled.
The Confederate Fighters and Star Nigel head to the left and decide to open fire on the Sun Crushers. The Sun Crushers open fire. A Dragonen got destroyed by a plasma beam.
" He's down!" A Jigglypuff morph said, her name was Kavie. She was a new enlisted pilot to the Lykan Forces. Kavie steers her Fighter to the a Sun Crusher and opens fire to the middle of the ship. It took heavy damage, Nigel then steered his Nightfire, locked on to the middle and fired a missile. The missile flew and hit the ship. The Sun Crusher exploded in two and went down in flames. The stars were now a immense battlefield. The Sun Crushers were returning fire and fired Plasma Shells. The shells exploded in space.
" Watch the Plasma Shells.." Victor barked as he steered left and right to avoid the exploding projectiles. Numbuh 3 fired a missile and steered her Nightfire inside, she was now inside a Sun Crusher. Kuki fires a Torpedo and blows the Guunka Unit. Kuki then U-Turns and leaves the exploding ship.
" Order all Ships to head to the Sector A Nebula." Clarissa said. The Sun Crushers turn tail and flee.
" All ships and fighters, follow the Sun Crushers." Jarko said as his Flagship steered and started to follow, the rest of the Lykan Confedarete ships steered West to follow them, including the fighters.
This is Chapter 8: Loud Move
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Post by victor on Nov 16, 2006 2:23:32 GMT
Chapter 9: King Nigel
The Sun Crushers were fleeing at full speed as the Confedaracy followed, the path was long as they headed to the Sector A Nebula in Outer Lyka. As the fleets entered the dangerous nebula, its very dangerous to enter here. There are legends of Ghost Ships that either tried to enter or leave Lyka.
" All ships! We must not let Clarissa get to the other side of the nebula, there is another star system that can not fall into Clarissa's Rule again. OPEN FIRE AT THE SUN CRUSHERS!" Jarko said as his fleet opened fire on the Sun Crushers. The Green Plasma Beams hit the weak spots of the Sun Crushers, their engines.
Back on Outer Lykan Space........
"Guys! This is the last fight with the Delightfuls. I'll do it alone, go and cover the Confedaracy Fleet." Nigel said as he steered his Nightfire west. The other 5 Nightfires steered east to head to the Grand Phoenix. Nigel then charges the Guunka Unit in the Nightfire and it charges to maximum velocity and leaves.
" Clarissa! This is our final encounter." Nigel said as his Nightfire automatically as he entered in the nebula......
" Computer! Scan the nebula for the shortest way to get to the main flagship." Nigel seriously said as the Nigel's Nightfire, the Omega Bulldog hovered.
" Scan complete. The most secure path is if you take the west side. There is concentrated plasma fire at the north, south, and east sides of the nebula." The computer instructed. Nigel took the east path of the nebula.
" Numbuh 1! Can you hear us?" Numbuh 5 asked.
" I can hear you." Nigel said.
" Its gonna be a dangerous path to get to the main flagship, we've also detected Delightful Mushi-Class Gunships scattring around the nebula, it must be that they are either escaping Lyka or creating escort lines for the flagship.We'll keep you informed from the Grand Phoenix. Good Luck!" Numbuh 5 told Nigel from the Grand Phoenix.
Nigel steered east. The Nightfire was flying straight into the vast colorful space cloud. Nigel flew straight until radar picked something coming from the right.
" Go left." Numbuh 5 instructed and Nigel steered his Starfighter left, as he kept on flying, he saw damaged Mushi-Class Gunships leaving the area, they were heading toward him. Nigel presses both trigger buttons on both control stick on the left and right of the Nightfire, the control sticks stick out from the left and right portion of the cockpit, not on the floor. Nigel just sat and saw how his blue plasma bolts hit the fleeing gunships got hit and flee like cowards, the gunships ignore the Nightfire and leave.
After taking left, right, left, left, right and finally left. The Nightfire flies straight towards the Sun Crusher.
" I see it." Nigel said as he boosted his Nightfire and headed towards it.
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Post by victor on Nov 17, 2006 2:50:03 GMT
Chapter 10: King Me.
The Omega Bulldog flew straight to the Sun Crusher and avoided enemy fire. The Omega Bulldog flown by Nigel fired its Turbo-Plasma Cannons at the ship, trying to damage it. But it was useless, the armor was to thick to be breached by a regular plasma bolt from a fighter. Clarissa just sat on her throne and kept on smiling, thinking of a new system to conquer.
"A new system to conquer Beyond this nebula." Clarissa just said as she looked and at the red nebula ans smiled. Nigel opened fire and tried to breach the armor but it was useless. Nigel then got an idea, he's gonna fly to the bridge and destroy the glass in the throne room. Nigel steers and braves the Plasma Fire.
" This is your end." Nigel said as he steered left and right repeatedly to avoid the plasma. After braving the plasma, he finally arrives at the bridge, he was hovering in fron to of the glass that separated him and Clarissa.
" Open fire! Shoot him down at once." Clarissa barked..
" Lady!! There's not enough energy in the plasma generators." The Delightful Officer said. Nigel opens fire, the blue plasma bolts crack the glass little by little until it breaks, the vaccuum of space starts to pull everything. A few Delightful Officers are sucked and instantly die in the vacuumm of space, Clarissa grabs on her throne to avoid being pulled.
"Good-bye Clarissa!!!!" Nigel yelled as he presses the Missile Launcher button on the left control stick and a missile launched and hits the throne room. Clarissa then releases her hand from her throne and dies in the merciless space.
" Its over. The Delightful Children From Down The Lane are done." Nigel said happily as he steered the Omega Bulldog west as the Sun Crusher exploded, the Delightful Empire was now gone, and its military power never to be recovered again.
Days Later......
The Delightful Forces were wiped out , only 3 Sun Crushers escaped and left Lyka forever, never to return. On the Lykan Edge, Jarko's Ship and the Grand Phoenix were hovering in the middle of space , saying their final good-byes..
" Thank you for bringing hope for those who need it. Your valiant deeds will always be remebered here in the Lyka System." Jarko said as a few tears came out of his eyes.
"It was our pleasure and thanks for the gold bars. I hope that our paths one day cross again." Nigel said...
Jarko's Ship steered and returned to Outer Lyka to govern the System just like their ancestors did. The Grand Phoenix kept on flying straight, Nigel saw the Hologram of the Lyka System, which was really 16 Planets , 8 planets make Inner Lyka and the other 8 make Outer Lyka with two giant stars as their suns. The Grand Phoenix was now outside Lykan Space....
The End
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