Post by rhaz on Aug 7, 2006 6:40:52 GMT
Ok, This is a first draft of my story. And my first ever fan fic, I couldnt post in on Fanfiction.net because Im still a newbie, I hope you enjoi.
Chapter 1
Somewere in antartica, a transport vechicle is traveling at a high speed across the snowy plains. Inside the vechicle 3 teenagers were staring out of the front window. A chubbier looking boy sat down and said " This is were.....it...happend..."
Then a dark skinned girl whispered to him" Don't talk about that!"
Sitting down she pressed a few buttons and said," Were approaching the target, we will arive in 30 minutes." Then the third teen stepped out of the darkness and smirked," It's time to eliminate the last of them..." She pushed a button and the vechicle stopped. Then she mumbled. " Were stoping here, so we can get them by surprise, let the others go ahead, abbie give the orders." Abbie turned towards the screen and pressed the button to turn it on. She then commanded. "This is abigal lincon, and Master Cree has said for you all to attack directly, while we stay behind to surprise them later, godspeed." There were a few, yes commander, but after that she turned off the mic. Then abbie said "Hoagie this place sure is different from this point of view." Then hoagie sighed." Your telling me..." Shortly after that Cree slapped both of them and told them to stop talking about the past, and that they were teens now and needed to start acting like it. Then cree brushed back her hair and laughed," Do you think I stayed young by whining about the past! NO, I stayed young looking by beating down half the KND singlehandedly, you guys are lucky, I even offered to let you join me..." Then Abbie and hoagie both said," Sorry, Master..."
Meanwhile, inside the Artic Training base, a young kid called numbah 123, comes running up to the leader of the base, numbah 273 and gasps" Numbah 273, we are under attack by the teens on all sides, we expect them to arrive in 5 minutes!"
273 sighed," Now? Of all times, I was hoping we would atleast have 1 more month before they attacked us...Although, its intresting that, this is happing like this just like it did 10 years ago..." Numbah 123 asked " What what are you talking about, how can you be so calm!, there are over 100 teens out there, and we only have like 30 opperatives, and half of them are in training!" Numbah 273 slapped him and said" Get a hold of yourself, we have the time Ill tell you a legend, about the great sector V!" She sat down in the chair and turned on the mic and yelled" All operatives, get ready for battle!" Then she turned of the mic and smiled and looked at 123, then she breathed." The story goes like this...
About 10 years ago, there was a massive battle between kids and teens. It was the battle that started this war that we fight so hard in today. The artic training base was found by the teens and was under attack by a army of over 100 teens. The teens though that if they could destory this base, that there would be no more new opperatives. Well, that battle raged on and the KND were losing, when the legendary sector V landed in the docking bay, the famous 5 ran out to help the fight when, Chad had taken the base leader hostage, and was holding him over a pit that led strait though antartica and into the ocean...
Well, sector V, engaged in battle with Chad's army while chad looked for a way to sink the base. Numbah 1 got away from the fight and chased after chad. When numbah 1 found chad, they fought an intense battle until, Numbah 1, decided to sacrafice himself to defeat the teens greatest leader. He grabed chad and jumped in to the pit, they were instanly frozen and dropped to the bottom of the ocean....
No, one knows what happend to the other members of sector V, some say they all spilt up because of that...
End Chapter 1.
I plan on tying up some but not, all of the loose ends in chapter 2.
Please post your thoughts, dont worry, you wont hurt my feelings.
Chapter 1
Somewere in antartica, a transport vechicle is traveling at a high speed across the snowy plains. Inside the vechicle 3 teenagers were staring out of the front window. A chubbier looking boy sat down and said " This is were.....it...happend..."
Then a dark skinned girl whispered to him" Don't talk about that!"
Sitting down she pressed a few buttons and said," Were approaching the target, we will arive in 30 minutes." Then the third teen stepped out of the darkness and smirked," It's time to eliminate the last of them..." She pushed a button and the vechicle stopped. Then she mumbled. " Were stoping here, so we can get them by surprise, let the others go ahead, abbie give the orders." Abbie turned towards the screen and pressed the button to turn it on. She then commanded. "This is abigal lincon, and Master Cree has said for you all to attack directly, while we stay behind to surprise them later, godspeed." There were a few, yes commander, but after that she turned off the mic. Then abbie said "Hoagie this place sure is different from this point of view." Then hoagie sighed." Your telling me..." Shortly after that Cree slapped both of them and told them to stop talking about the past, and that they were teens now and needed to start acting like it. Then cree brushed back her hair and laughed," Do you think I stayed young by whining about the past! NO, I stayed young looking by beating down half the KND singlehandedly, you guys are lucky, I even offered to let you join me..." Then Abbie and hoagie both said," Sorry, Master..."
Meanwhile, inside the Artic Training base, a young kid called numbah 123, comes running up to the leader of the base, numbah 273 and gasps" Numbah 273, we are under attack by the teens on all sides, we expect them to arrive in 5 minutes!"
273 sighed," Now? Of all times, I was hoping we would atleast have 1 more month before they attacked us...Although, its intresting that, this is happing like this just like it did 10 years ago..." Numbah 123 asked " What what are you talking about, how can you be so calm!, there are over 100 teens out there, and we only have like 30 opperatives, and half of them are in training!" Numbah 273 slapped him and said" Get a hold of yourself, we have the time Ill tell you a legend, about the great sector V!" She sat down in the chair and turned on the mic and yelled" All operatives, get ready for battle!" Then she turned of the mic and smiled and looked at 123, then she breathed." The story goes like this...
About 10 years ago, there was a massive battle between kids and teens. It was the battle that started this war that we fight so hard in today. The artic training base was found by the teens and was under attack by a army of over 100 teens. The teens though that if they could destory this base, that there would be no more new opperatives. Well, that battle raged on and the KND were losing, when the legendary sector V landed in the docking bay, the famous 5 ran out to help the fight when, Chad had taken the base leader hostage, and was holding him over a pit that led strait though antartica and into the ocean...
Well, sector V, engaged in battle with Chad's army while chad looked for a way to sink the base. Numbah 1 got away from the fight and chased after chad. When numbah 1 found chad, they fought an intense battle until, Numbah 1, decided to sacrafice himself to defeat the teens greatest leader. He grabed chad and jumped in to the pit, they were instanly frozen and dropped to the bottom of the ocean....
No, one knows what happend to the other members of sector V, some say they all spilt up because of that...
End Chapter 1.
I plan on tying up some but not, all of the loose ends in chapter 2.
Please post your thoughts, dont worry, you wont hurt my feelings.