|
|
Post by nathalie on May 28, 2006 19:31:26 GMT
ok..... this is oone of the prequels to my little saga.... I dont know what is calleed yet and I didnt know what to call this one....
Ill just start
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~```
Angelia stood at the balcony, looking into the star studded night sky, a gentle wind shifing her long blonde hair
"Mummy?" a small voice interupted her thughts
she turned to see her youngest daughter, Tabitha standing there in her night gown and clutching a stuffed animal, looking up at her, big blue eyes blinking through her thick glasses
"Tabitha, what are you doing here? arent you supposed to be in bed?"
Tabitha looked down and clutched her toy tighter "I had a scary dream....."
Angelia smiled and picked her up "Oh Tabitha.... it was just a dream.... it cant hurt you!"
"b-but it was really scary... it had me and clarry and lenny and daddy looked all scary and_"
angelia stroked her brown curls and hushed her gently "dont worry.... I wont let it happen....."
Tabitha gave a small smile
they heard the fornt door open
"Daddy's home!" Tabitha said happily.
Angelia smiled and set her down "go kiss him good night and go to bed. Hopefully youll dream about cookies this time!"
Tabitha giggled and hugged her than ran downstairs
suddenly, angelia had a quick feeling that something that something horrible was going to happen soon. she shook her head
"No... its impossible.... I got rid of it..."
she went downstairs to greet her husband
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
well, what do you think of the first part?
oh btw.... its a dc fic....
|
|
|
|
Post by Hello, I must be going! on May 29, 2006 18:33:15 GMT
You're fast!!
Wow - i love it! Aspecially the part with the cookies ... Eer... yea..
It's getting pretty interesting. I can't wait to read more ^^
|
|
|
|
Post by nathalie on May 29, 2006 19:21:16 GMT
heres a bit more...
~~~~~~~~~~~~
THE NEXT DAY
"GIVE IT BACK!!!!!!!!!"
"NO!!!!!!!!!!!"
"I SAID GIVE ME BACK MY BOW, LENNY!!!!!"
"MAKE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Angelia pulled her son Lenny and older daugghter Clarissa apart "All right you two, whats all the commotion?"
"Leonard stole my bow!" clarissa said angrily
"Lenny, give it back...."
Lenny scowled and handed clarissa back her pink hair bow "Prissy...."
"Youre just jealos becuase father chose ME to take over the family business!" clarissa said haughtly
Lenny stuck out hi tougue
"Lenny, why dont you invite Henry and Jeremy over?" angelia suggested
Lenny grinned "Can they sleep over?"
"Of course, just as long as its all right with their parents!"
"ALL RIGHT!" Lenny ran inside
"Oh mother..." Clarissa said "Father called! he said he wants to go out to dinner with you tonight"
"Oh does he now?" Angelia smiled "Thank you for Telling me, Clarissa"
"Youre welcome!" Clarissa beamed "Im going to change my dress now. Lenny got dirt all over my current one!" she ran inside
|
|
|
|
Post by 28 on May 30, 2006 0:55:42 GMT
Current one.......^_^ She's like Eleonora and Anne Shirley all mixed into one.
I really love this story. I hope you continue it.
|
|
|
|
Post by nathalie on May 30, 2006 1:15:17 GMT
thak you! *brainstorming next part*
|
|
|
|
Post by nathalie on May 30, 2006 2:08:50 GMT
Tabitha stood watching Angelia as she got ready for that night
":Oh Mummy, you look so pretty!"
"Thank you sweetheart! you know, your father and I havent gone out together since, well, before you were born!"
Tabitha giggled
"Oh tabitha... I have something for you" angelia took out a small box
inside was a beautiful pendant. It was heartshaped and made of some kind of crystal. incribed on it was a strange symbol "Oh Mummy.... its so pretty!!!"
"It was mine when I was a child... Im entrusting it to you now" angelia said as she put it around tabitha's neck
"Mother, Father called again! He is waiting at the restaraunt" Clarissa said as she walked in
"Thank you for telling me." angela stood up "Take care of your sister, and make sure the boys dont get themselves into trouble!"
"oh I promise Mother!"
|
|
|
|
Post by 28 on May 30, 2006 2:09:28 GMT
And for now...........
*dancing*
|
|
|
|
Post by makuta on May 30, 2006 3:37:56 GMT
Well go on, write some more! Hurry! ;D
|
|
|
|
Post by nathalie on May 30, 2006 3:40:47 GMT
allright! *brainstorms*
|
|
|
|
Post by nathalie on May 30, 2006 4:19:37 GMT
Later that night.....
"Thank you for inviting me to dinner...." Angelia said as she kissed her husband Charles
"It was my pleasue, Angelia" charles said warmly
she smiled and walked to the house "The lights are off... the children must be in bed_"
suddenly there was a sharp pain as something hit hrt form behind
"what_" she looked upand saw Charles standing over her, fireball in hand "Charles?" then she realized "No.....
"Thought you got rid of me, didnt you" he said malevolently
"GET OUT OF HIM!!!!!!"
"Too late.... your husband is gone.. and your children will be too!!"
"No.... not my children!"
he laughed evilly and sent another fireball at her, knocking her unconcious
he smirked and headed inside
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
he found Clarissa dozing on the couch
upon hearing him, she woke up "Oh Father, youre home!"
"Clarissa, get your siblings..."
Clarissa smiled "Are they in trouble?"
"yes, now go get them!"
clarissa squeled in joy and ran upstairs
she ran inot lenny's rooom and saw the boys under the sheets with a flashlight
she yanked the sheets off "Father wants to see you. Now!!!"
the boys scvowled and went downstairs. Clarissa ran to Tabitha's room and shook her aawake
Tabitha yawned and fumbled for her glasses and put them on "Clarry! Are Mummy and Daddyy home?"
"Of course... now get downstairs"
~~~~~~~~~~~~
|
|
|
|
Post by makuta on May 30, 2006 4:29:16 GMT
Aww, Tabitha is so adorable! ;D Man, I can see where this is going.  |
|
|
|
Post by nathalie on May 30, 2006 4:59:25 GMT
the children stood downstairs, looking up at their father, who was stanidng with his back to them
Tabtha could sense someting was wrong
"Daddy? whats wrong? Wheres Mummy?"
"....do NOT call me that! I am your father, and henceforth you will refer to me as that!!
Clarissa was grinning broadly
"D-daddy... whats wrong? Why are you like this?" Tabitha said tearfulkly
"Tabitha... thats not dad...." Lenny said warily
"Its time for you to become the proper type of children...'
clarissa became even happier at that
suddenly a dark vortex appeared in the floor. the boys were pulled to it and sucked in.
clarissa stood next to it, looking down, grinniing happily "FINALLY!"
suddenly father appeared behind her and pushed her in
she shrieked and grabbed the side on the vortex
"FATHER!!! YOU PROMISED ME_"
"Im sorry, but you are going with them!"
her grip broke and she fell down
"LEENY!!!! CLARRY!!!!!!!" Tabitha screamed
Father turned to her, his now yellow tinted eyes flashing
Tabitha whimpered fearfully. Suddenly, Angela rushed in and picked tabitha up and ran outsdie
"TABITHA WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE!!!!!"
"MUMMY!!!! WHATS WRONG WITH DADDY?!?!"
"THATS NOT YOUR FATHER ANYMORE TABITHA! HES_"
suddenly a strong force pulled Tabitha out of her arms. Angelia felt the necklace snap off from her neck
"MUMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"TABITHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she fell to the floor, everything turning dark
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Father stood watchng as the 5 children rose out of the vortex
their eyes flew open at the excat same time. all 5 pairs were exactly the same; Icy blue and blank and emotionless
"come my children. Well be going now."
"Yes Father" they said at the exact same time in the same monotous tome
|
|
|
|
Post by Hello, I must be going! on May 30, 2006 18:52:04 GMT
This is getting too interesting! Keep it up!
|
|
|
|
Post by victor on May 31, 2006 0:01:24 GMT
BY your writing style, you could finish the Star Nigel Arc in a day or two.
Great job.
|
|
|
|
Post by nathalie on May 31, 2006 5:45:36 GMT
ANgelia groaned and sat up
she look down at the pendant in her hand "Tabitha...." she whispered, tears rolling down her fair cheeks
"ANGIE!!!!!!" a voice cried
three small fairy sized girls flew up to her "ANGIE!!! ITS BAOUT CHARLES!!!" Magnolia, the inteligent looking one with brown hair with blue highlights cried
Camilia, the peppy looking one with blode and pink hais in ponytails pipied up"REMEBER THAT DEMON THAT GOT INTO HIM WHEN YOU WERE KIDS AND YOU THOUGHT YOU GOT RID OF IT IN HIGH SCHOOL WELL GUESS WHAT IT TURNS OUT YOU DIDNT AND TONIGHT HE PLANNED TO_"
they stopped when they saw the scene
"Lemme guess. It already happened." Fuschia, the gothey looking girl with black hair with purple straks and black wings said thickly
"T-theyre gone....." Angela sobbed "I-i couldnt save them..... Its all my fault...."
"Dont say that Angie! It wasnt your fault!!!!"
"Anyways, we got more news. Remeber Charles mother? well, SHES the dark angel. The gods just didnt want to tell you! "
Angelia look up "What?"
"Thats right" Magnolia said " She was the one who put the demon in charles.... the reason you couldnt tell she was the dark angel was because she masked that presence."
"It gets even worse.... The junioor dark angel is Clarissa! Well that all makes sense, since the junior light angels tabitha and the dark angels your mother in law and stuff!" Camilia said
"wait,,,... what about Tabitha and Clarissa?" angela said
Fushia glared at camilia "You ditz! She doesnt know yet!"
"Oops! Sorry!"
"Angelia, well tell you about that later. But we have good news. You WILL be reunited with Tabitha agian!" Magnolia said
"the problem is, its gonna be like in 5 years!" Faushia said
Angelia sighed sadly
"well, I guess its time to start waiting,...." magnolia said
Angelia nodded and got up
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
OKIDOKI!!!! END OF THIS PREQUEL!!!! the three "mini angels" will be officially introdced in another one of the prequels (Angelia's story) and youll find out what they were talking about with the angels in the official big story!
|
|
