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Post by 06 on Jan 7, 2006 11:09:01 GMT
WOW!!!! IT'S AMAZING!!!!
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Post by numbuh16 on Jan 7, 2006 18:31:48 GMT
Awesome story!!!! it rox my new fuzzy sox!!!!! ;D ;D great job!!!!! ;D
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Post by 28 on Jan 7, 2006 19:32:43 GMT
Thanks!! YES!!! ANOTHER REVIEWER!!!! I LOVE YOU, NUMBUH 16!! *hugs*
I'll get around to chapter 5....
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Post by 06 on Jan 8, 2006 10:49:41 GMT
YAYZ!!!! CHAP 5!!!! And I have a suspicion that in this fic Nigie's gonna get hurt badly and be in hospital...again...
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Post by 28 on Jan 8, 2006 16:11:06 GMT
For once, no he isn't. That isn't even going to happen in this story, although he does get hurt.
The main focus on this story isn't even defeating the delightful children.......
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Post by 06 on Jan 9, 2006 4:35:35 GMT
You're gonna do it differently...cool!
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Post by 28 on Jan 10, 2006 3:02:13 GMT
It all started with a book I read called 'A Stone in......something or other...Pond'. Hehe, yeah....I can't actually remember the name of the actual POND, but.....it, like the story is about.......ummm......*coughcoughcoughpointstotitlecoughcoughcough*
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Post by victor on Jan 10, 2006 3:17:57 GMT
Good Story. It will even beat my Fan fic Sigma 105.
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Post by 28 on Jan 10, 2006 3:18:47 GMT
*eyes sparkling* YAY! It's not done yet.....NOW I READ YOUR WEAPONRY THINGY!
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Post by 06 on Jan 14, 2006 7:44:58 GMT
YAY! *still likes story*..
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Post by 28 on Jan 14, 2006 16:21:24 GMT
Chaptuh 5!!! OH YEAH!!!!!
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It had started to rain. Nigel was tired. He was cold. He was wet. But there was no way he was giving up. Because the kids next door never give up. And Nigel Uno's devotion to the kids next door was something he was never letting go of. He had tried countless times to get over the fence that kept him from his friends in vain. He was so tired, it felt like he was going to collapse. But he couldn't, because the delightful children were in that house, doing who knows what to his team. He had to try to climb the ladder again. Every few tries, the ladder would do something that violated the laws of physics. In would turn upside-down, or shake voilently, or turn vertical, like the first time he tried. Nigel was afraid something would happen again, but he had to climb that ladder, or his team---his friends---something horrible would happen to them. Nigel put one foot on the ladder, and then the other. No effect. He started climbing, and still nothing happened. He got to the top. He was up. He had made it! Nigel beamed in spite of his victory. He hadn't spoken since he fell of the ladder, to save energy. He hadn't even thought much. But now he was up. Nigel tried to climb over the fence, but realized he was just too weak to do anything like that. Nigel wasn't paying attention to how tired he really was. He looked at the bottom of the ladder. He noticed that there was a dog there, at the bottom, looking at him. He knew that dog, and it wasn't a nice puppy. Nigel looked around. He had to climb over that fence. He just had to. Nigel put one leg over the fence and got up on top of it. Then he got ready to climb down----wait. There was no ladder here. "Great." Nigel said finally. "Well, I guess I'll just have to jump." This, of course, was a stupid idea. But Nigel was tired, cold, and wet. He wasn't thinking right. He closed his eyes and jumped off the fence. The impact was a lot more painful than Nigel had thought. He winced as he hit the ground, and felt tears of pain come to his eyes. He touched his arm. 'It's broken.' He thought angirly. 'I'm so stupid.....' Then Nigel saw the dog. Right in his face. He had jumped off the wrong side of the fence. He cursed his luck as the dog, named 'Brutus', sat on his chest, growling. Nigel slowly took his other, unbroken arm, and moved it towards a stone laying beside him. He thought it might distract Brutus, so he could run up the fence again and find another way over. He raised his hand in the air. The movement was too sudden. Brutus became angry and sunk his teeth into the arm holding the stone. Nigel screamed. The sound startled the dog also, but it caused him to run away, leaving Nigel on the ground, with his eyes shut tight in spite of the pain he was in.
The rest of sector V were sitting around. "When's Numbuh 1 gettin' here? Ahm bored." Abigail Lincoln wondered the same thing as Walabee did. She was worried about her leader. "He's comin', Numbuh 4. He's probably gonna walk into thuh room any minute now." Abigail had been reassuring her teammates, over and over again, that Numbuh 1 was coming to help them. Now she was starting to wonder if he even knew they were gone. Kuki was looking, worried, at the door. She hoped that Numbuh 1 would walk through that door, apologizing for being late. Hoagie was getting angry. "Where is he? He's supposed to help us!" "Numbuh 5 is sure Numbuh 1's got a good reason, Numbuh 2." "Yeah, right. He just doesn't care." Numbuh 2 crossed his arms and sat down. He was detirmined to be angry, but a part of him was still worried. What if Numbuh 1 had died trying to save them? 'But....but that's silly.' He thought. 'I mean, there's no way Numbuh 1 could be dead....maybe....maybe he's just.....' All Numbuh 2 could think about was how Numbuh 1 could've been hurt. He could even be in another cage, somewhere in this mansion, wondering why his team wasn't coming to help him. This thought made Hoagie feel guilty as ever. "Maybe Numbuh 1 jus' got ovuh the fence, an' now 'e's bein' attacked by one of those robots." Walabee said. And, for once, he was right.
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Chapter cinq!!!!! What do ya think?
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Post by Hello, I must be going! on Jan 14, 2006 20:23:49 GMT
OMG! It's awesomee ;D I luv it!
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Post by 28 on Jan 14, 2006 21:35:07 GMT
;D YAY!
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Post by 06 on Jan 15, 2006 10:07:11 GMT
Cool! I had a dog named Brutus...he was a Rottweiler...
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Post by 28 on Jan 15, 2006 16:10:36 GMT
I called him Brutus because Brutus killed Julius Ceasar.....don't even know if I spelled that right......stupid reason, actually, it just popped into my head.....hehe.....
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