Post by Numbuh 65 on Jul 15, 2006 2:37:02 GMT
This story I'm making is a fictional piece with the plot of "Con Air" but with the KND characters. With one exception, it is after the era of the KND of this story is held.
I also figured that maybe a cameo appearance by members of this forum and the other KND characters would suffice.
Here's a preview of what I got.
Operation: C.O.N.-A.I.R.
Convicted
Operatives
Nail
Airplane with
Intention to
Regain freedom
Writing Operative: Numbuh 65 (a.k.a. Luis Ernesto Fisher Gonzalez)
Prologue
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The Kids Next Door have a proud history. Since the year 2000, the Kids Next Door have led the way in every major kid-vs.-adult confrontation the world has been involved. You kids are a fine heritage, and I'm sorry to see you go, but you served kiddom well and displayed the ability tho fight on the Kids Next Door's objective and complete its mission: never leaving behind a fallen comrade, no matter what the odds or the enemy. I thank you, the world thanks you and I wish you luck wherever you go. And remember, the Kids Next Door lead the way.
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That little speech remained a memory for me. I was once a number. I was once a number which is my favourite number which is five, multiplied by a certain unlucky number.
I flew my fighter jet from the moonbase back to Earth. As I was flying, I began to think about my life after the Kids Next Door. I began to think about my future. I also began to think about how I am going to spend it with my girlfriend, Carly McKillip. I took a photo of her from my glove compartment. She's as beautiful as a bunch of roses. Her hair is as bright as the golden sun. Her stature is the same as mine: medium build and 71" in height.
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Place: Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
Date: April 13th, 2006
Time: 7:00 PM PT (10:00 PM ET)
I landed my plane near a home in Vancouver. I walked downtown to a local bar. It was there that I saw Carly. She eyed me. We both ran to each other, hugged each other and kissed each other.
"Hey, Carly." I said,
"Wow." she replied, "Look at you. A Kids Next Door honoree!"
A few boys were watching Carly. One said, "I take a beating half my life to get a piece of that girl!"
Carly and I were still talking. I told her that I earned a bunch of awards from the Kids Next Door. She was indeed proud of me. Then...
...the boys walk over. Actually, only one of them. The one wearing a hat in particular. He went up to Carly and said, "Carly McKillip! You little angel, you! How about joining me and the boys for a cold one, huh, darling?"
"No, thank you." Carly replied
The boy laughs. "Who's your Captain Canada here?"
"You know this gentleman?" I asked
"He's a regular." Carly replied
"Yeah. I'm a regular." The hat boy said, "Regular hound dog." He laughs.
"Excuse me." I said, nicely "This is a special occasion. If you don't mind, I would like to spend it dancing with my girlfriend."
"Tell ya what, Soldier Geek." the boy said and tossed a wad of cash at me. "Why don't you buy me and the boys a couple of rounds? When you get back, we'll talk about letting me play some night vaseball with your little blond pretty kitty here!"
I got a bit upset. "Calm down, Luis." Carly said, "Let's not make trouble. It's not worth it."
I chilled for a little bit. The hatted boy said, "Aw, chickenpoop! Because of freaks like you, we lost Vietnam!"
"For a moment there, you were that kid again." Carly said, concerned
"I know it." I responded
"I thought your life at the Kids Next Door would make him grow up." Carly says.
"Oh." I said, "He has." We both cooed each other, kissed each other and danced to the slow beat of Lifehouse's song, "Everything".
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Time: 10:00 PM PT (1:00 AM ET)
It was raining outside in Vancouver. Rain is dropping like bombs, only bigger. We both ran in the streets. Little did we know that we're being followed...
Two blocks later, it happened.
The boys from the bar surrounded us, but they are surrounding me. Carly cried, "Luis! Walk away! We don't want any trouble!"
The boys taunted me. Carly begged them to stop, but they didn't listen. Soon, they ripped off my Kids Next Door badge and attacked me!
I got up and struck back with my fists and feet. I threw a boy over my body. I threw one against the wall, kicked him and threw him on the ground again.
A boy took out a knife. He cried, "Take this, you little brat!" I lunged for a punch... SLASH! I slashed the boy's face and neck! I watched in horror as he died slowly.
I cried, "Carly!"
The other boys retreated. A big burly young man, formerly known as Numbuh 8 watched the fight and ran to the scene. He looked at the fallen man and said, "Oh no. This guy is dead."
I cried in tears. I knew and I regret what I did. I knew I didn't deserve this, but I was too stubborn to think.
A few hours later, I was arrested by Vancouver police.
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In a courthouse in Vancouver, I was talking to a lawyer named Beckie. She said, "Admit to the facts, enter a plea bargain."
"I told you," I began, "I'm not pleading guilty."
Beckie insisted, "You could get a year. Admit to the facts, you could get 6 months. Serve, maybe 4 months."
Later in the courtroom, the judge gave this speech.
"Luis Gonzalez, you have pleaded guilty to manslaughter in the first degree. With your military and special operations skills, you are a deadly weapon and are not subject to the same laws as other people are provoked because you can respond with deadly force. It is the order of this court that you be remanded to a federal penitentiary where you shall remain incarcerated for a term not less than 8 months to a year."
The judge bangs his gavel. The entire McKillip family began to cry.
Transmission Interrupted
Well... what do you think?
I also figured that maybe a cameo appearance by members of this forum and the other KND characters would suffice.
Here's a preview of what I got.
Operation: C.O.N.-A.I.R.
Convicted
Operatives
Nail
Airplane with
Intention to
Regain freedom
Writing Operative: Numbuh 65 (a.k.a. Luis Ernesto Fisher Gonzalez)
Prologue
------------------------------------------------------------------
The Kids Next Door have a proud history. Since the year 2000, the Kids Next Door have led the way in every major kid-vs.-adult confrontation the world has been involved. You kids are a fine heritage, and I'm sorry to see you go, but you served kiddom well and displayed the ability tho fight on the Kids Next Door's objective and complete its mission: never leaving behind a fallen comrade, no matter what the odds or the enemy. I thank you, the world thanks you and I wish you luck wherever you go. And remember, the Kids Next Door lead the way.
------------------------------------------------------------------
That little speech remained a memory for me. I was once a number. I was once a number which is my favourite number which is five, multiplied by a certain unlucky number.
I flew my fighter jet from the moonbase back to Earth. As I was flying, I began to think about my life after the Kids Next Door. I began to think about my future. I also began to think about how I am going to spend it with my girlfriend, Carly McKillip. I took a photo of her from my glove compartment. She's as beautiful as a bunch of roses. Her hair is as bright as the golden sun. Her stature is the same as mine: medium build and 71" in height.
------------------------------------------------------------------
Place: Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
Date: April 13th, 2006
Time: 7:00 PM PT (10:00 PM ET)
I landed my plane near a home in Vancouver. I walked downtown to a local bar. It was there that I saw Carly. She eyed me. We both ran to each other, hugged each other and kissed each other.
"Hey, Carly." I said,
"Wow." she replied, "Look at you. A Kids Next Door honoree!"
A few boys were watching Carly. One said, "I take a beating half my life to get a piece of that girl!"
Carly and I were still talking. I told her that I earned a bunch of awards from the Kids Next Door. She was indeed proud of me. Then...
...the boys walk over. Actually, only one of them. The one wearing a hat in particular. He went up to Carly and said, "Carly McKillip! You little angel, you! How about joining me and the boys for a cold one, huh, darling?"
"No, thank you." Carly replied
The boy laughs. "Who's your Captain Canada here?"
"You know this gentleman?" I asked
"He's a regular." Carly replied
"Yeah. I'm a regular." The hat boy said, "Regular hound dog." He laughs.
"Excuse me." I said, nicely "This is a special occasion. If you don't mind, I would like to spend it dancing with my girlfriend."
"Tell ya what, Soldier Geek." the boy said and tossed a wad of cash at me. "Why don't you buy me and the boys a couple of rounds? When you get back, we'll talk about letting me play some night vaseball with your little blond pretty kitty here!"
I got a bit upset. "Calm down, Luis." Carly said, "Let's not make trouble. It's not worth it."
I chilled for a little bit. The hatted boy said, "Aw, chickenpoop! Because of freaks like you, we lost Vietnam!"
"For a moment there, you were that kid again." Carly said, concerned
"I know it." I responded
"I thought your life at the Kids Next Door would make him grow up." Carly says.
"Oh." I said, "He has." We both cooed each other, kissed each other and danced to the slow beat of Lifehouse's song, "Everything".
------------------------------------------------------------------
Time: 10:00 PM PT (1:00 AM ET)
It was raining outside in Vancouver. Rain is dropping like bombs, only bigger. We both ran in the streets. Little did we know that we're being followed...
Two blocks later, it happened.
The boys from the bar surrounded us, but they are surrounding me. Carly cried, "Luis! Walk away! We don't want any trouble!"
The boys taunted me. Carly begged them to stop, but they didn't listen. Soon, they ripped off my Kids Next Door badge and attacked me!
I got up and struck back with my fists and feet. I threw a boy over my body. I threw one against the wall, kicked him and threw him on the ground again.
A boy took out a knife. He cried, "Take this, you little brat!" I lunged for a punch... SLASH! I slashed the boy's face and neck! I watched in horror as he died slowly.
I cried, "Carly!"
The other boys retreated. A big burly young man, formerly known as Numbuh 8 watched the fight and ran to the scene. He looked at the fallen man and said, "Oh no. This guy is dead."
I cried in tears. I knew and I regret what I did. I knew I didn't deserve this, but I was too stubborn to think.
A few hours later, I was arrested by Vancouver police.
------------------------------------------------------------------
In a courthouse in Vancouver, I was talking to a lawyer named Beckie. She said, "Admit to the facts, enter a plea bargain."
"I told you," I began, "I'm not pleading guilty."
Beckie insisted, "You could get a year. Admit to the facts, you could get 6 months. Serve, maybe 4 months."
Later in the courtroom, the judge gave this speech.
"Luis Gonzalez, you have pleaded guilty to manslaughter in the first degree. With your military and special operations skills, you are a deadly weapon and are not subject to the same laws as other people are provoked because you can respond with deadly force. It is the order of this court that you be remanded to a federal penitentiary where you shall remain incarcerated for a term not less than 8 months to a year."
The judge bangs his gavel. The entire McKillip family began to cry.
Transmission Interrupted
Well... what do you think?