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Post by makuta on Feb 22, 2006 1:58:36 GMT
Operation: C.H.A.N.T.A.L.
Creeps/coolios Have A New Twerp Apple! Lemon! ******************* [shadow=red,left,300] Introduction [/shadow]
When you watch the Delightful Children on television, you aren't seeing all of them. You see, there used to be a sixth one. There was also a Mother, not just a Father. The other Delightful's name was Chantal (Shawn-tall). Like the others, she had big, blue eyes. Actually, hers were more of a blueish-green, but they were still pretty big. Okay, so they weren't that big.... Unfortunately, Mother went to the big Delightfuls' mansion in the sky when Chantal was just a newborn. All six of them were too much for Father to handle, so he built a machine to make all the Delightful Children act as one person. It worked on five of them, but not on little Chantal. Father later created a boarding school for Delightful Children, and that's where she was sent at just the age of five. I am that girl, and this is my story.
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Post by makuta on Feb 22, 2006 2:16:32 GMT
[shadow=red,left,300] Chapter 1 Happy Birthday? [/shadow]
It was September the eighth, which was only one day away from my tenth birthday. I was in my room, daydreaming, when I got a very special early birthday gift. It was a letter from Father, and he wanted me to come home! I wasn't sure if this was a good thing or a bad thing. I had forgotten what he was like, and I didn't know how my siblings might have changed while I was gone. Plus, while I longed to escape the boarding school life, I also had friends there, and because of the way I was raised, kids might think I was wierd. It wasn't like I could choose, though. He told me to pack up and get ready to leave because he had sent some of his teenage ninjas to come pick me up in their jet. Jet? Teenage ninjas?! Ya. I knew at that moment I was in for a heck of a ride, and not just in the jet! They picked me up the next day and flew me home in a few minutes. A FEW MINUTES! We must have been going warp speed or something! A girl named Cree then escorted me to the front door of the mansion and showed me to Father. Man, oh man. Was he freaky or what?! He was cloaked in black from head to foot. His yellow eyes had an evil glow, and his gruff voice was spine-chilling. I could have sworn that his clothes smelled like they had just been rescued from a fire. When Cree left, he said that he needed to talk to me about something. Of course, I didn't want to be with that spooky man for too long, so I asked him where the bathroom was and went there.
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Post by makuta on Feb 22, 2006 2:27:29 GMT
[shadow=red,left,300]Chapter 2 Reunited, and it Felt So Good! [/shadow]
I didn't really have to go; I just needed to take a break and think. I closed the door, put the toilet cover down, and sat on it. While in there, I looked around. Gazing at a pretty little vase by the sink, I noticed something very peculiar. Were those? Could they be? Oh, sick! It was a jar of toenails. I didn't get much time to think because I then heard a knock and reluctantly opened the door. Five pairs of curious, azure eyes stared back at me. They were dressed just like the students at the boarding school, except for a football helmet on one of the boys. There was an akward moment of silence while we studied each other. I was a too uncomfortable to say anything, but they broke the silence for me. "Um, hello?." "Hi," I answered shyly. I noticed a ghost of a smile on each of their faces. "Are you.." they all began in unison. "Chantal," I answered. They smiled even more. "Do you recognize us?" "Well, now that you mention it, I do." Reunited, and it felt so good! So, now I knew what they looked like after a few years of growth. Though they spoke in unison, it was a very normal thing at the boarding school. They seemed pretty neat to me. I guess Father forgot to have that talk with me because I played with my siblings for hours. After we met, they showed off their disgusting jar of toenails, and then we had a pillow fight. They used a robot to throw the pillows, though. I've noticed that they use robots quite frequently. The basement is full of them! Anyway, we feasted on potato chips and watermelon after the pillow fight, and the Delightful Children took me on a tour of the mansion and the neighborhood it was in. When we reached the house next door (or down the lane! ^_^), they seemed a bit annoyed. "Is....something wrong," I asked. "This is Nigel's house," they started, "or Number One's house, if you want to call him by his codename. That up there is the Kids Next Door's treehouse-base." "Oh." I knew who the Kids Next Door were because we had studied them at my old school. I didn't know why we were against them, though. I thought they were a very neat organization, and very kind for what they did. Just about every other Delightful thought otherwise.
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Post by makuta on Feb 25, 2006 14:37:42 GMT
Suggestions, people? What should happen next? My first day at Gallagher Elementary?
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Post by caoimhechan on Feb 25, 2006 19:20:51 GMT
WOW! That was SO good! Really! Um... yeah, maybe your first day at school, and you run into the KND and the Delightfuls warn you to keep away from them or something.
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Post by makuta on Feb 25, 2006 19:45:15 GMT
Finally, a reply! Yes, that's a rainbow-rific idea, but I still have writer's block. Oh, what if Kookie, being all oblivious and all, wanted to be my friend? That or she could be sent by her team to spy on me...
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Post by caoimhechan on Feb 25, 2006 20:16:45 GMT
Yeah! Because you hinted in the last chapter that you didn't think that the KND were that bad. Maybe if you were in the same class as Kuki or whatever, you could become friends. But the rest of Sector V found out and they told Kuki to keep away from you...and the same with you and the DCFDTL. Or something! I really like where it's going so far anyway! I'll be sure to review when you update! And, yeah, writers block SUCKS.
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Post by makuta on Feb 25, 2006 21:59:37 GMT
[shadow=red,left,300] Chapter 3 Meet the Neighbors [/shadow]
We ate a huge birthday cake after hanging out in the yard for a while, which we didn't use to torture kids with. Mmm... I hadn't had a bite of healthy food all day, except for the watermelon. All six of us were very drowsy, and we fell asleep on the couch while watching Invader Jim. The chubby girl's belly made the perfect pillow. I had totally forgot about school, and the next day was Monday! I packed the school supplies I had used at my old school and hoped that they would be enough. We had a much healthier breakfast than the cake from the day before. There was cantelope, whole wheat toast with Olivia butter, milk (orange juice for me), and sausage, but I had beef in the sausage's place because I'm a pig lover. We decided to walk to school on that beautiful morning. It was partially overcast, cool, colorful, and the sprinklers added that lovely chlorine fragrance that I love to the air. We were in no hurry because we had started off on the early side, so there was plenty of time for us to soak it all in. While we were passing the crazy cat lady's house, however, I got a little nervous because I noticed that my siblings looked angry. I followed their stare and saw five other children on the opposite side of the street. One was a bald boy in a red shirt with sunglasses, another one who was way cuter (what?) was chubby and dressed like an airpilate in a blue shirt, the third one was a Japenese girl in a long sleeved, green shirt with one hand waving and a smile on her face, the fourth was a short, angry looking boy with long, blonde hair and an orange hoody, and the last was an African American girl with a red baseball cap, a blue shirt with white stripes, and a look that said, "Just keep walking, guys..." Then, I got even more nervous when they all focused on me. My siblings led me down a different street that took us away from that group, and that's when I learned that I had just seen the Kids Next Door's Sector V.
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Post by caoimhechan on Feb 25, 2006 22:08:39 GMT
Whoa! I really liked that! Very descriptive and completely awesome! Writers block wore off, huh?
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Post by makuta on Feb 25, 2006 22:14:55 GMT
Yup! And now I have it again! A relative just came over and totally threw me off.
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Post by caoimhechan on Feb 25, 2006 22:18:48 GMT
*shakes fist* Relatives...
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Post by makuta on Feb 25, 2006 22:29:10 GMT
Yawn. I'm getting off the computer, now. Good bye.
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