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Post by flirtykuki101 on Aug 26, 2005 18:29:24 GMT
it's called
Grandpa's little girl
Today is the fifth year anniversary of kuki's grandpa's death. kuki's grandpa was a great doctor, he cared for sick children and he often helped children who were injured in fires and other accidents. well kuki's grandpa was killed by a stray bullet trying to help injured children who were shot in a drive-by. any way kuki was exremely close to her grandpa and misses him badly. with the help of numbah 2's new time machine' can kuki go back in time save her granpa's life and stop the whole shoot out from ever happening in the first place.
can you tell me what you guys think? i'd love to hear your opinons.
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Post by Shwoo on Aug 27, 2005 2:19:25 GMT
That's great.
Though it sounds very close to my idea, in which Sector V get killed, and Tommy goes back in time ten years to try and stop it from happening, because he never got over his brother's death.
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Post by number823 on Aug 27, 2005 2:26:17 GMT
Isn't a drive-by a bit too much for the KND spirit? How about a drive-by Poxing?
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Post by flirtykuki101 on Aug 29, 2005 23:51:57 GMT
you know i read it over and her grandpa dying from a drive by does sound weird so can someone give me another way of him getting killed please? i'll be forever happy if you do.
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Post by numbuhdoublezero on Sept 8, 2005 18:38:14 GMT
Cool idea.
Even thou I already read a fic similar to this one.
It was Cree, who died and Abby and Numbuh 3 (Abby wanted Kuki to help her) went back in time to preven the death. The time machine was made by Numbuh 2.
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Post by flirtykuki101 on Sept 8, 2005 21:06:10 GMT
thanx , i still need an idea about a better way of kuki's grandpa dying. so can some one help me out please.
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Post by alfredofroylan on Sept 13, 2005 0:50:11 GMT
It depends of kind of doctor he is. If the doctor is specialist in burns and fire accidents maybe he could have died in a fire in the hospital while he tried to save several children and he is trapped by the fire, the little Kukis was outside screaming and watching how the fire destroys the hospital with her grandpa inside. If you want to add more drama you can put some fire related villain like Father as the culprit of the fire.
See Ya !!!
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Post by flirtykuki101 on Sept 14, 2005 23:52:15 GMT
okay i have two more ideas: a mother, daughter talk
this takes place after snowing, after numbah 4 says love is gross and all, numbah 3 goes home really upset, she getting angry at her family for no reason, so numbah 3's mother goes and talks to her about love and boys. plus she learns something about her parents that she never knew before.
okay the second one is: show me the light
we all know kuki as a happy girl,but she was'nt always that way. see when she was about 1years old, she was always so angry and mean to others and she would do really bad things to people, also she never smiled no matter what her parents did. and when her parents took her to the doctor, they discovered that her happy emotion was really low and that's what was making her so angry and mean , they got help for her problem and thought it was gone forever. but when her angry, dark side starts to resurfaces it's up to sectorV and kuki's family to show her the light and get her to smile again.
okay the second story is totally crazy but what do you guys think?
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Post by kndgal on Sept 16, 2005 0:56:14 GMT
i like them
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Post by flirtykuki101 on Sept 16, 2005 11:08:32 GMT
thank you very much.
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Post by 28 on Sept 17, 2005 15:22:33 GMT
If Numbuh 3 went back in time, it would REALLY be a twist if she made it so Numbuh 1 wouldn't have been born or something by killing his grandpa by accident.
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