i created one too!

[numbuhsix]

this is a play version of a fanfic. this is a 1/6-1/me fanfic that was originally a comic i made, but here goes.

knd plushies-at the beach
characters:
nigel
hoagie
kuki
wally
abby
kiki(me!)
father
lizzie

(knd are at the beach. kiki is insisting that nigel stay at the beach with her.)

kiki- where are you going?
nigel- i don't like the beach.
kiki- please stay.
nigel- oh all right.
*everyone playing at the beach, includes abby+hoagie playing in ocean, wally buried in sand, kuki making sand castle and nigel+kiki sleeping in sun*
kiki- *yawns* i'm so tired.
*suddenly, a black streak comes and swoops down and snatches kiki*
nigel- kiki!
kiki- aah!
nigel *to thing that took kiki*- come back!
*nigel is talking with rest of knd*
abby- a black streak?
hoagie- are you sure that's what happened?
nigel- something has to be done! they've made this personal by taking kiki!
hoagie, kuki, wally & abby *look at each other*- nigel and kiki sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g!
nigel- it is not like that! if you guys won't help me, i'll go by myself!
*meanwhile that thing that took kiki is lizzie, and she returns to father*
lizzie- i have retrieved her.
father- very well. *laughs evilly*
kiki- aah!
nigel *comes down*- there you are-?
lizzie- uh-oh.
kiki- ?
nigel- lizzie! but why?
lizzie- i'm sorry...
nigel- you're not my girlfriend anymore.
lizzie- boo hoo
kiki- yay
kiki*to nigel*- can i be your new girlfriend?
nigel- okay
lizzie-noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*end transmission*

hope you liked it!

[NumbuhInfinity]

... okay. I think.

[362]

uh...that's very interesting....

[numbuhsix]

i'm glad u like it

[maxk]

Um... I'm sorry to break it to you, but those weren't compliments.

[boxieroxie]

okay start but could be a lot better. Add more description and perhaps develop the plot a tad more.

[numbuhsix]

hmmm....okay.