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Post by numbah13 on Oct 9, 2004 2:04:24 GMT
Well, I moved my fics and stuff from my desktop to my laptop (the one w/ internet!) I wanna see what you guys think of some of my stuff. Here's the first part of a fic called Operation: G.W.A.B.S...that's as far as I've gotten. I'm gonna post up my other fix later. www.angelfire.com/vamp/numbah13/gwabs |
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Post by nathalie on Oct 9, 2004 2:09:21 GMT
cool!
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Post by numbah13 on Oct 9, 2004 2:10:15 GMT
Thanks. I just paragraphed it, so can you all refresh the page with the fic? Thanks. ^_^ So....reviews are welcome.....
Should I put up more fics?
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Post by nathalie on Oct 9, 2004 2:11:33 GMT
Should you put more fics up? Do I like lenny?
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Post by numbah13 on Oct 9, 2004 2:14:27 GMT
Lol! Sure....lemme just chosoe which one ^_^ I know, I'll put up a list of stuff I've written and I'll let you choose!
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Girl with the Broken Smile – a KND fic
Wallabee Beetles has messed up one mission too many. Convinced everyone hates him, Numbuh 4 runs away and doesn’t come back for a year – absolutely no KND contact. Now, when he’s felling a little better, Wally returns to the KND to find Lizzie leading missions, Numbuh 3 dating Numbuh 30C, Numbuh 2 drumming in his new band, The Messed Up Punks, and Numbuh 5…well, still being Numbuh 5. Numbuh 4 struggles to win Numbuh 3 back…and to make everything back the way it was.
Operation: R.I.V.A.L.R.I
Chad – aka ex-Numbuh 274 – isn’t really fitting in with the adults. Filing a decommissioning report so that he can talk to his secret crush, Numbuh 23, without getting creamed by the KND, Chad follows her back to her treehouse and KND Moonbase headquarters…thinking about the good old days. Or not. Sure, he can handle the Teen Alert Recon Team, Numbuh 35, therapy, Father, and Cree…but can he fight an all-out war between the entire Kids Next Door organization and just himself…and still be in fighting, shooting, football-playing, hot, hot, blonde condition? Hmm…
Attack of the Fangirls: Kids Next Door
Numbuh 61 and Numbuh 12 are chasing after poor Nigel and Wally mercilessly – on the demand of Andi and Emilie. Darting back and forth in the time stream, they can only evade death, suffering, and the Beatles by sticking a blinking red button on their targets – Numbuhs 1 and 4.
Deep into the Diaries of the Kids Next Door
The Delightful Children have lost one of their most prized possessions: a CD filled with every single page of every single KND Operative’s diary – operatives-in-training and ex-operatives included. Can you handle the mechanical jargon and kissing rants of Numbuh 2, ex-Numbuh 274’s dirty, dirty thoughts, Numbuh 60’s embarrassing relatives and multiple girlfriends, Numbuh 4’s musical and wrestling fantasies, and even Numbuh 86’s Rainbow Monkey-ridden stories filled with love and cheer? You can only see…
Survivuh: Random Caribbean Island
This first season of Survivuh features 7 Kids Next Door characters and 7 Teen Titans ones in two mixed tribes: Sparrow and Turner. Can Cyborg and Numbuh 2 ever agree on anything, can Chad successfully chat up Blackfire, Terra, and the host, and are Raven and Numbuh 86 actually getting along? Only you can tell!
Survivuh: The Arctic Circle
Season 2 of Survivuh has a few returning stars – Raven, Numbuh 4, Numbuh 86, and Beast Boy – and have some people from other shows to fill up the gaps: Coop, Jamie and Kiva from Megas XLR, Danny and Sam from Danny Phantom, Jenny from My Life as a Teenage Robot, and…Zim, GIR, Dib, and Gaz from Invader Zim! Can they stand the sweltering heat of the Arctic? Can 86 smuggle a S.K.E.E.B.I.K.E past the security? And will Coop try and give Jenny a paint job? Only time can tell in Survivuh – Outsmart, Outmaneuver and Outtathisworld!
Roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet…you owe me a quarter.
Yeah, long title. It’s a collection of way-out love poetry featuring weird couples like Hoagie/Cree, Chad/the blonde DC girl, and – get this – 86/Father…
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Post by nathalie on Oct 9, 2004 2:16:59 GMT
ALL OF THEM ;D by the way, where did you get that siggy picture? its cool!
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Post by numbah13 on Oct 9, 2004 2:18:50 GMT
Oh, the sig? i made it ^_^ OK...I'll post up the Diary one....
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Deep into the Diaries of the Kids Next Door
By Numbuh 13
“Give it up,” snarled Numbuh 35, one hand on the trigger of his S.P.L.A.N.K.ER, the other in his jeans pocket. “Never,” said the Delightful Children from Down the Lane in the monotonous way they spoke. “You’re not getting your dirty little hands on our most prized possession.” “Prized possession, huh?” he said. The sun was beating down on him and the DCFDTL, standing in front of his treehouse, holding a CD. “Yes,” the Delightful Children said. “And you WON’T be taking it.” No-one spoke for a few seconds. Then, out of the treehouse, Numbuh 32 and her friend Numbuh 13 walked out. “Hey 35,” 13 said. “Hey, menacing villain people. Oooh, can I borrow that?” she said, whipping the CD from the Delightful’s hands. “No – but….you can’t…” the DC protested, trying to run after Numbuh 13. They got a few feet before their unsuitable, dorky and pathetic clothes made them trip and fall down. Hard. The DC waved their fists at 13. “We know about your secret fear of butterflies!” they screamed. “Meep!” cried Numbuh 13, hurtling down the street, bowing down low in case of passing, colorful, cheerful insects.
Numbuh 13 slid the CD into her computer back in her room. It whirred in its holder for a few moments before a window on her CP appeared and said, “The Delightful Children’s Very Very Secret CD Thingy with Every Single Page Of Every Single Kids next Door Operative’s Diary Ever. Really.” Numbuh 13 rolled her eyes. “They were never really good at acro….acroniph….oh, acrowhatsists.” She popped open the first file in the list. “Numbuh 60,” she said. “Ooh boy. This is gonna be good.”
NUMBUH 60
Dear Diary:
It was just another normal day for me…I trained a few cadets – one was this annoying kid who kept POKING me – and then I went back to my room. I have a date tonight – with some girl called Tanisha, I think. It’s hard to keep track, you know. It’s also really hard to look good when you’re in Antarctica…you always have to wrap up in jackets and stuff, and there is NO occasion to wear a tank top without freezing to death. I’m glad I don’t have another date with that other operative – what’s her name? Oh well, she was Numbuh 148. My 2x4 phone started ringing and so I answered it – but I left it on speaker. Argh. So anyway, another girl, Jamie, was on the other line. She says, in the most turning-on voice imaginable, ‘Heyy Numbuh 60! *giggles* So we’re still on for Friday?’ So I said yeah, we were, and she hung up. I turned back to Numbuh 148, and she’s standing up, arms crossed, glaring at me like I’d done something wrong. I stood up too. ‘What’s you DEAL?’ she demands. I shrug. ‘Huh?’ (Okay, not the most intelligent reply.) ‘Playah!’ she goes, and walks out on me. I just don’t get it! What’s wrong with dating 2 girls at once? Or 3? Or 21? No, really.
Well, I gotta go and meet Tanisha now. Cya.
~60
Numbuh 13 was laughing her head off. “Playah!” she said in glee, falling off her chair in a laughing fit. There was a soft knock at the door and then the door was slammed open. Numbuh 15, in huge, metal-clad combat boots, came clonking into the room. “What are ya laughin at?” he demanded, staring at the screen. “Look what IIII found!” she said in a sing-song voice. The diaries of every KND operative!” “Every operative, huh?” said 15, sliding onto the couch in front of the computer screen. “Hey…what about Numbuh 86?” “Oh, check it out,” she said, climbing onto the couch next to him.
NUMBUH 86
Dear Diary,
Decommissioning makes me sick. I always have to lug these screaming teenagers into waiting spaceships and believe me, it ISN’T pretty. What IS pretty, though, is the brand-new Nacho-Making Happy Smiley Fluffy Chunky Orange-Red-Citrus-Chartreuse Fast Food Rainbow Monkey! I can’t WAIT to add it to my collection (now I have over 3,078,732 Rainbow Monkeys and counting!)
For some reason, I was yelling at Numbuh 41 to clear out the Kids Next Door Archive of all the useless stuff we keep, and I found an old tape of last year’s commissioning ceremony. I remember that one. Some girl clutching a standard pink Rainbow Monkey had just stuck her finger into the Code Module and asked the machine if she could have the Numbuh…what was it? Oh yes. 12-434343-one-eighty-two-and-1/16. (How does she remember it all the time? That has gotta be the longest Numbuh since 90-kajillion-fifty-teen.) And you want to know what else? She pointed at me and said, “When I’m promoted in the Kids Next Door I wanna be just like Numbuh 86!” Awww! So sweet! A Rainbow Monkey moment to remember.
Then again, of course, she shook her head and said, “Did I say 86? I meant Numbuh 362. How come I messed it up?” Oh well, there’s always next year.
~86
Numbuh 15 scrolled through the long list of operatives. “Hey, they even have decommissioned ones in here,” he said, pointing at several numbuhs on the list. His eyes scanned the latest page of ex-Numbuh 274, Chad’s, diary. He grinned. “Oh 13!” he said. “Call up you friend Numbuh 411 at the research base. I have something she’ll wanna hear.” Numbuh 13 dutifully punched in the numbers on her cell.
EX-NUMBUH 274
Dear Diary…
Sometimes I scare myself. Being a teenager really isn’t all it’s cracked up to be. For instance, I had to man the soft serve station at the ice cream store for a summer job or something, I don’t really know. Anyway – one of the cutest, best-looking Kids Next Door operatives who ever walked this earth comes into the store. Numbuh 411, head of the Atlantis-based research center. Man, she sure looked hot from my point of view. So she comes up to me and hands me a sugar cone and goes, “One strawberry soft serve please. Extra sprinkles.” Mmm, I’d like to give HER soft serve. Aah! Dirty thoughts! DIRTY THOUGHTS! Gotta stop that.
I gave her her scoop and then said, “If you want, maybe you could drop by the football game tomorrow? I could get you some free ice-cream,” and she replied, “If you aren’t planning to destroy me and the entire Kids next Door…I’ll think about it.” Then she whooshes out the door in her jet pack and up into the sky. Using a football game to disrupt the KND? Oh yeah. I forgot about that. Heh heh. Maybe she’ll turn up anyway. Maybe. I have to stop hitting on Kids Next Doro operatives. I’m not a kid anymore…but I’m not all teenager. Sigh. Oh crud, here comes Cree! Gotta go!
~Chad
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Post by nathalie on Oct 9, 2004 2:22:48 GMT
THATS GREAT!!!!!! hey can i be in the story please?
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Post by numbah13 on Oct 9, 2004 2:25:04 GMT
Sure! I'll try and squeeze ya in!
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Post by nathalie on Oct 9, 2004 2:29:46 GMT
THANKS!!! ;D remeber, my numbuh is 335
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