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Post by makuta on Jan 18, 2005 0:08:14 GMT
Chapter 1
Fear The Piggy!
Numbuh 3 skipped along happily ahead of the rest of the team to Piggy’s Pizza Palace. There were no missions, and though Numbuh 1 was a workaholic, he was happy to go somewhere other than the beach, this time. As they came nearer to the building, the aroma of fresh pizza became stronger, which made Numbuh 2’s mouth water. Numbuh 5 planned to use her tickets to get lots of candy. Numbuh 4 wanted to be the king of arcade games, and Numbuh 1 would watch for anything suspicious.
Then, they entered. The place was surprisingly empty, and to their horror, the only other kids there were the Delightful Children From Down The Lane. “What are you creeps doin’ here?!”, screamed Numbuh 4. “And where are all the other kids?”, gasped Numbuh 3.
Four of the goody-goodies glared at their enemies, while the chubby girl with the funny-looking braids continued to gorge on pizza. They growled, “For your information, Father left us here because he had to go to an important meeting. When we arrived, the other kids left. What are YOU doing here?”. “It makes perfect sense that the other kids left, you bullies!”, yelled Numbuh 1, “And what we’re doing here is none of your business.” All the kids continued their ranting, except the chubby girl, who was still eating pizza, and Lenny, who noticed something strange behind the curtains on the stage.
Suddenly, the Delightful was struck with fear. He sweat and shivered at the sight of it. The braid girl noticed that Lenny didn’t look so good, so she handed him a piece of pizza and said, “Hergh, mawbu dish wol mac you pheel petter.” Lenny looked down at the girl with a puzzled face. She swallowed her pizza and repeated her sentence, “I said, here. Maybe this will make you feel better.” Lenny wouldn’t accept the pizza, so she gave him a worried look, then ate the slice in only two bites. He stuttered and pointed to the curtains, but noticed that the person in the pig costume wasn’t there any more.
Everyone, including the Kids Next Door stopped and looked at Lenny. “What’s wrong, Lenny?”, chimed the other Delightfuls. “Ya, Lenny.”, teased Numbuh 4, “Afraid that we’re gonna kick your butt?!” Numbuh 2 covered Numbuh 4’s mouth. “Shoosh, I wanna hear this!”, he said. Lenny shivered some more and tried to explain what he saw, but then, he saw the shadow of the pig costume, getting bigger and bigger. “Look, everyone, there’s really no time to explain… WE HAVE TO HIDE!!!”, he stuttered. The other kids tried to find out what he was talking about, but then he got too scared and hid in the Play Tubes. Everyone else feared that it was something horrible that was out to get them, so they followed him to the hiding spot.
Then, the terrified Delightful explained, “It’s the pig, the…..” , but then, Numbuh 3 interrupted, “Awww…. But he’s just a cute little piggy! What could he do?” Lenny continued his explanation, “Listen, it’s not the pig we should be afraid of, it’s the person inside the pig costume. Now, you people may not like this, but we’re all going to have to work together to escape!” Everyone gasped and looked at each other. The pizza lover stopped eating pizza. “No way am I gonna work with you weirdo’s!”, said Numbuh 4 to the Delightful Children From Down The Lane with his teeth clenched. The two teams frowned at each other and agreed with Numbuh 4. “I’m sorry,” said Lenny, “but It’s the only way.”
Why is Lenny so afraid?
Why does that girl love pizza so much?
Why do I keep asking these questions? 
Stay tuned for the next chapter to find out and stuff! 
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Post by boxieroxie on Jan 20, 2005 21:35:39 GMT
Would make it alot easier to read if you put some paragraphs into it.
Good so far I love to read more when you get second chapter up.
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Post by makuta on Jan 21, 2005 0:18:38 GMT
Gee, thanks! ;D (I've been waiting all week for someone to post.  ) I took your advice and put my story into paragraphs. Unfortunatly, it won't let me indent the begining of every paragraph, so don't blame me if it looks funny.  The next chapter should be up on Friday, Saturday, or Sunday. And, it has a suprise ending that's really funny, so keep reading, folks! This is my first fanfic!  |
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Post by nathalie on Jan 21, 2005 0:27:11 GMT
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!
Its so cute! And it centers around my 2 favorite dc! ;D
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Post by makuta on Jan 21, 2005 1:09:10 GMT
Yay! Another post!!! (throws confetti in the air and jumps of the couch) Actually, Nathalie, I kind of made this story for you. You see, I started writing it right after looking at your signature (that was my inspiration!) Keep reading, people!
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Post by nathalie on Jan 21, 2005 1:11:31 GMT
really? aw, you shouldnt have!
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Post by boxieroxie on Jan 21, 2005 21:09:25 GMT
Wish I would have notice it sooner just wasnt on board so much earlier in the week.
Next time you wouldn't have to wait so long for me to see it. ;D
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Post by makuta on Jan 22, 2005 2:25:42 GMT
Chapter 2
Pizza and Piggies and Rainbow Monkeys, Oh my!
Though the Delightfuls and Kids Next Door operatives despised working with each other, they did it anyway. Being caught by an evil person in a silly pig costume would be like drinking ketchup mixed with chicken and orange juice; horrible.
Numbuh 1 handed a piece of paper and a pen to Numbuh 3, so she could make the plans. Numbuh 1, the tall Delightful boy, and the blonde Delightful boy were the lookouts, the Delightful blonde girl, Numbuh 5, and Numbuh 4 made a map of the play tubes, Lenny panicked, and the braid girl protected her pizza from Numbuh 2.
Numbuh 4 sang his rock song while the two girls worked on the map. “Gonna eat some pizza! Na, na, na, na! Gonna eat some pizza! NA, NA, NA, NA!” The braid girl suddenly forgot about Numbuh 2 and glared evilly at the stupid one.
“Hey, Kids Next Dum!”, yelled the blonde Delightful boy, “You might want to come see this!” Numbuh 2, Numbuh 1, and the tall boy gathered around the round, plastic window. Through all the old fingerprints and pizza grease, they saw the pig, waving to them from down below. Lenny, too, saw the sight and began to shiver uncontrollably. In fact, he shivered so much that the vibrations carried him to the edge of the slide. The Delightful blonde girl was the first to notice. “Lenny! Noooooooo!”, she screamed. And with that, she grabbed his feet to keep him from slipping.
But now, she, too was slipping. Soon, all the kids formed a human chain, trying to save Lenny, who was slowly sliding to his doom. The braid girl was in the back, and suddenly remembered that she had left the pizza. “My pizza!”, she gasped. She let go of Numbuh 1’s feet and picked up her beloved box of pepperoni pizza. The whole chain of kids fell down to their piggy fate, and the chubby girl tumbled after them. The pig spotted it’s prey.
“Numbuh 3, where’s the plan?!”, screamed Numbuh 1. The pig was approaching. “What plan?”, screamed the oblivious operative. “The paper I handed you!” he answered. Numbuh 3 smiled. “Oh, this paper? Here you go!” Numbuh 1 took the paper and frowned. There was no plan; Just a paper covered in pictures of Rainbow Monkeys and dancing flowers. Now, it was up to Lenny.
“What do I do? WHAT DO I DO?”, gasped Lenny. The pig was almost close enough to touch, and they still didn’t have a plan. Then, the Delightful was struck with inspiration. He tore off one of the pizza lover’s braids and used it as a sword. She screamed, but Lenny was too focused on the pig to notice.
He twirled his weapon around like mad. “Get back! Don’t make me hurt you!”, he threatened. The piggy simply giggled and came closer. This obviously wasn’t going to work. Little did he know that his furious little sister was about to tackle him for revenge. But when she only a foot away from him, his fear gave him the strength to pick her up and throw her at the pig. “I’ll get you, Leeeennnnnyyyyyyy!”, she yelled at the top of her lungs as she flew through the air.
What does the pig want?
What will happen to the braid girl?
Why is the sky blue?
Meep!
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Post by nathalie on Jan 22, 2005 2:57:33 GMT
yay! More please! disabuse of the braid girl though!  |
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Post by boxieroxie on Jan 22, 2005 3:24:36 GMT
ohhh... Can't wait to read more.
I like your fic very much.
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Post by makuta on Jan 22, 2005 3:29:20 GMT
Woohoo! I'll write more next week! Oh, and don't worry, Nathalie, the braid girl will be okay!  (I think ) |
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Post by nathalie on Jan 22, 2005 3:37:40 GMT
why next week?
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Post by makuta on Jan 22, 2005 3:43:09 GMT
I like to make people wait so that the next chapter will seem super exiting! ;D As you wait during the week, you get more and more impatient, so when you finally get to read it, it seems even better than normal! Besides, I havn't even written the next chapter, yet!  . |
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Post by nathalie on Jan 22, 2005 3:44:44 GMT
oooooohhhhhhhh
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Post by makuta on Jan 29, 2005 1:38:27 GMT
Sorry for the delay, people. I'm going to postphone the next chapter so I can play with my friends, okay? It should be up sometime soon, though. |
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) I took your advice and put my story into paragraphs. Unfortunatly, it won't let me indent the begining of every paragraph, so don't blame me if it looks funny. 
The next chapter should be up on Friday, Saturday, or Sunday. And, it has a suprise ending that's really funny, so keep reading, folks!
(I think 