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Post by NumbuhInfinity on Jan 24, 2005 20:39:14 GMT
Finally completed the somewhat-2/5 fic, Operation: Hoagarth. Since it's way too big to fit it here, you're gonna have to read it at Fanfiction.net. Enjoy... I hope.  www.fanfiction.net/s/2233518/1/Summary: After a huge berating by Numbuh Five, Numbuh Two decides out with the clown, in with the all-business. Will the old, cheerful Numbuh Two ever return? Or is the stern, serious Numbuh Two here to stay forever? |
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Post by Numbuh 1024 on Jan 25, 2005 17:56:14 GMT
Nice one, but if there was more 2/5 it would have been better. But I like the idea.
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Post by pinkdenim on Jan 25, 2005 18:06:44 GMT
Marry me, Infinity! *clings*
That story rocked! I enjoyed reading it SO much! The best thing was that it was really cute without being sickeningly fluffy.
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Post by maxk on Jan 26, 2005 3:26:17 GMT
Infinity... how come your fics never seem to disappoint me?
I thought it was very amusing and kinda cute. I did discover a few typos, but they didn't take the fun out of the fic one bit. They're no biggy (Well, unless you really want to fix them). Good job! ;D
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Post by tako on Jan 29, 2005 23:48:53 GMT
I read this a while ago when I was supposed to be doing my homework, but it took me this long to review it.
Anyway, here's my review:
I loved this story. I loved the idea of Numbuh 2 trying to be serious for Numbuh 5. The 2/5-ness was really cute and you did a really good job at writing Numbuh 2's puns (I especially liked the "you could have done butter than that" line).
I have some nitpicky criticism (there were a few typos & tense changes, and I think you used the word "concerned" a bit too much), but the story overall was very well-written and humorous. I liked how the Yipper show was typical of shows that I watched when I was little (with the completely weird villains, and their outrageous schemes, and the pre-commercial suspense).
The part when the other KND members were trying to make Numbuh 2 laugh made me laugh. I also loved when Numbuh 3 was teasing Numbuh 5. Thanks for the 2/5 fic! ^^
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Post by forcedtowritethis on Jan 30, 2005 0:56:18 GMT
Very cute story!  (I'm starting to like 2/5 more and more) |
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Post by NumbuhInfinity on Jan 30, 2005 2:18:03 GMT
Thank you guys sooo much for your reviews! They mean a lot to me. I feel all fluffy inside.  Seems I missed some typos and stuff. Well, I'll probably get to them some other time. ^^;; Numbuh1024: Yeah, I would put more 2/5, but I didn't/couldn't. If I tried to put in 2/5ness every chance I get, it would disrupt the flow of the story. Couldn't have that happen. |
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Post by theorygirl on Mar 7, 2005 5:07:59 GMT
I love love loved it! You really named the characters spot-on!
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Seems I missed some typos and stuff. Well, I'll probably get to them some other time. ^^;;