Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Mar 21, 2007 22:03:22 GMT
I'd been meaning to post a Monty-Uno-and-Hoagie-Sr. fic for a while now, so here it is!
A few things to note - I do use flashback quite a bit. I know it's a cliched plot device, but I felt it worked best here that we actually see the events happening to Hoagie Sr. and Monty for ourselves rather than just hear someone explain them.
And as for romance...not planning on it. Not unless it's between two people already together on the show.
And as for the fic itself, this is kind of a "first look" thing. Basically, you can critique this all you want, and any necessary changes will be made before it is posted on FF.net, where the "final copy" will be posted. Kinda like how I post Time Warp on the 5/H thread before posting it on this board.
Enjoy!
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Kids Next Door Mission
Operation:
D.A.D.S.
Discoveries
Await
Duo's
Sons
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Chapter One.
"Boys and girls, we have a new student today!"
Everyone in the classroom looked at the front of the class to see who had just joined the fourth grade at Gallagher Elementary.
"Everyone," the teacher continued, "This is Hogarth P. Gilligan."
"Actually, I like to be called Hoagie." the boy pointed out.
"Right then, Hoagie. Go find yourself a seat."
Hoagie walked down the closest aisle, looking for an empty seat through his yellow-lensed goggles.
"Psst." a voice whispered from Hoagie's left.
He looked in that direction to see a boy with scruffy, dark brown hair and square sunglasses. He motioned towards an empty desk to Hoagie's right.
"Thanks!" Hoagie told the boy.
"No problem." the boy said, in a British accent, "My name's Monty, by the way. Monty Uno."
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It was Saturday afternoon, and, once again, Hoagie P. Gilligan, Jr., also known as Numbuh Two of Sector V of the Kids Next Door, had to clean the garage. He was rummaging through yet another box of miscellaneous junk when he was interrupted by a familiar voice.
"Numbuh Two?"
Hoagie turned to the direction of the driveway, where his friend and sector leader, Nigel Uno, or Numbuh One, was standing.
"Oh, hey Numbuh One!" Hoagie happily greeted him.
"Shouldn't you be at the treehouse, working on those repairs to the M.O.S.Q.U.I.T.T.O.H.?"
"I would, but Mom wants me and Tommy to finish cleaning the garage."
"Looks like it's just you cleaning."
"No, Tommy's in here. He's probably buried under something...Tommy, where are you?"
"Over here!" shouted Tommy, as his hand rose up from a pile of discarded 2x4 machinery. His hand hit a tower of boxes, which teetered back and forth before it finally leaned over Hoagie.
"AAAAAAHHHHHH!" he shrieked, as the boxes collapsed and fell on him, before he had a chance to run out of the way.
"Hoagie?!" Tommy exclaimed, crawling out of the pile and towards the mess. Nigel rushed over, and the two tossed away the boxes and assorted junk piled on Hoagie. Eventually, he got up, with a little help from Tommy and Nigel, and brushed himself off.
"Geez, watch it next time, Tommy..." he muttered, unaware there was a old, beat-up photograph stuck in the strap of his goggles.
"Um, Numbuh Two..." Nigel pointed out, "You've got something stuck...there!" He pulled the photo away, then glanced at it. Suddenly, Nigel's expression changed to one of disbelief.
"Something wrong, Numbuh One?" Hoagie asked. Nigel didn't respond.
"Lemme see!" Tommy exclaimed, then grabbed the photo from Nigel's hand.
"What is it?" Hoagie asked.
"It's...it's Dad as a kid! And there's some other kid standing next to him..."
"That's my dad." Nigel stated, "Numbuh Zero."
"WHAT?!" Hoagie shouted, then grabbed the photo from Tommy. Sure enough, the photo depicted two ten-year-old boys. One was wearing the same pilot's cap and goggles Hoagie was wearing, and the other wore square-shaped sunglasses, and had a giant "0" on him.
"Numbuh One, you didn't tell me our dads knew each other!" Hoagie exclaimed.
"I...I didn't..." Nigel stammered, "He did mention some of his teammates in the Book of KND...but I'm not sure if any of them were your dad."
"Where DID you put that book, anyway?"
"I sent it to the Moonbase for safekeeping."
"Think they'll let me flip through it?"
"I don't see why not..."
"Then let's go!" Hoagie said, heading outside.
"Wait!" Tommy called to his brother, "If you're going on a mission, you might need assistance from...the TOMMY!"
"I'm just going to the Moon, Tommy. You stay here and finish cleaning."
"B-but I wanna come with you! He's my dad, too!"
Hoagie sighed, and looked at Nigel for support.
"I'm not sure they'll let civilians in the Moonbase..." Nigel began.
"But I used to be in the Kids Next Door!" Tommy whined, "And I saved you guys from being animals!"
"Oh, all right," Nigel groaned, "I'll see what I can do when we get there."
As the boys left the garage, anxious about what they would find out, none of them realized just what was in store for them, and what long-hidden information would come to light.
A few things to note - I do use flashback quite a bit. I know it's a cliched plot device, but I felt it worked best here that we actually see the events happening to Hoagie Sr. and Monty for ourselves rather than just hear someone explain them.
And as for romance...not planning on it. Not unless it's between two people already together on the show.
And as for the fic itself, this is kind of a "first look" thing. Basically, you can critique this all you want, and any necessary changes will be made before it is posted on FF.net, where the "final copy" will be posted. Kinda like how I post Time Warp on the 5/H thread before posting it on this board.
Enjoy!
---
Now Loading...
Kids Next Door Mission
Operation:
D.A.D.S.
Discoveries
Await
Duo's
Sons
---
Chapter One.
"Boys and girls, we have a new student today!"
Everyone in the classroom looked at the front of the class to see who had just joined the fourth grade at Gallagher Elementary.
"Everyone," the teacher continued, "This is Hogarth P. Gilligan."
"Actually, I like to be called Hoagie." the boy pointed out.
"Right then, Hoagie. Go find yourself a seat."
Hoagie walked down the closest aisle, looking for an empty seat through his yellow-lensed goggles.
"Psst." a voice whispered from Hoagie's left.
He looked in that direction to see a boy with scruffy, dark brown hair and square sunglasses. He motioned towards an empty desk to Hoagie's right.
"Thanks!" Hoagie told the boy.
"No problem." the boy said, in a British accent, "My name's Monty, by the way. Monty Uno."
---
It was Saturday afternoon, and, once again, Hoagie P. Gilligan, Jr., also known as Numbuh Two of Sector V of the Kids Next Door, had to clean the garage. He was rummaging through yet another box of miscellaneous junk when he was interrupted by a familiar voice.
"Numbuh Two?"
Hoagie turned to the direction of the driveway, where his friend and sector leader, Nigel Uno, or Numbuh One, was standing.
"Oh, hey Numbuh One!" Hoagie happily greeted him.
"Shouldn't you be at the treehouse, working on those repairs to the M.O.S.Q.U.I.T.T.O.H.?"
"I would, but Mom wants me and Tommy to finish cleaning the garage."
"Looks like it's just you cleaning."
"No, Tommy's in here. He's probably buried under something...Tommy, where are you?"
"Over here!" shouted Tommy, as his hand rose up from a pile of discarded 2x4 machinery. His hand hit a tower of boxes, which teetered back and forth before it finally leaned over Hoagie.
"AAAAAAHHHHHH!" he shrieked, as the boxes collapsed and fell on him, before he had a chance to run out of the way.
"Hoagie?!" Tommy exclaimed, crawling out of the pile and towards the mess. Nigel rushed over, and the two tossed away the boxes and assorted junk piled on Hoagie. Eventually, he got up, with a little help from Tommy and Nigel, and brushed himself off.
"Geez, watch it next time, Tommy..." he muttered, unaware there was a old, beat-up photograph stuck in the strap of his goggles.
"Um, Numbuh Two..." Nigel pointed out, "You've got something stuck...there!" He pulled the photo away, then glanced at it. Suddenly, Nigel's expression changed to one of disbelief.
"Something wrong, Numbuh One?" Hoagie asked. Nigel didn't respond.
"Lemme see!" Tommy exclaimed, then grabbed the photo from Nigel's hand.
"What is it?" Hoagie asked.
"It's...it's Dad as a kid! And there's some other kid standing next to him..."
"That's my dad." Nigel stated, "Numbuh Zero."
"WHAT?!" Hoagie shouted, then grabbed the photo from Tommy. Sure enough, the photo depicted two ten-year-old boys. One was wearing the same pilot's cap and goggles Hoagie was wearing, and the other wore square-shaped sunglasses, and had a giant "0" on him.
"Numbuh One, you didn't tell me our dads knew each other!" Hoagie exclaimed.
"I...I didn't..." Nigel stammered, "He did mention some of his teammates in the Book of KND...but I'm not sure if any of them were your dad."
"Where DID you put that book, anyway?"
"I sent it to the Moonbase for safekeeping."
"Think they'll let me flip through it?"
"I don't see why not..."
"Then let's go!" Hoagie said, heading outside.
"Wait!" Tommy called to his brother, "If you're going on a mission, you might need assistance from...the TOMMY!"
"I'm just going to the Moon, Tommy. You stay here and finish cleaning."
"B-but I wanna come with you! He's my dad, too!"
Hoagie sighed, and looked at Nigel for support.
"I'm not sure they'll let civilians in the Moonbase..." Nigel began.
"But I used to be in the Kids Next Door!" Tommy whined, "And I saved you guys from being animals!"
"Oh, all right," Nigel groaned, "I'll see what I can do when we get there."
As the boys left the garage, anxious about what they would find out, none of them realized just what was in store for them, and what long-hidden information would come to light.