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Post by GoldenFlither on Jul 6, 2007 2:17:09 GMT
I know this is done often, but I love random. So I decided to give it a try. Here's the link to my most recent so-called story: www.fanfiction.net/s/3316946/1/Tell me what you think. Be as critical as you like. I'm going to consider adding more characters.
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Post by camper on Jul 6, 2007 8:01:05 GMT
Though there is a thread has a same "Know Your Stars" but that's ok, it's yours.
Let's see, (Commenting)...
EDIT :
Numbuh 1 have a crush on 86 is not possible, it's just weird, but 362 is the sound.
Numbuh 3, wow, now she really get her mad.
Numbuh 4, whoops, really Numbuh 4 is dumb. Hee hee, good one. I wish if you would do a Father one and let's see what happens.
Numbuh 86 can be sweet a little bit for a start, but still, I prefer Numbuh 3 to lose her temper.
Numbuh 362 did lose her temper again as much as 86, nice.
Hmm, regarding when you interview the Delightfuls, I wonder if you could add in additional sentences such as "At the audience, Father shouted, "What?! You sneak to get a midnight snack while I'm sleeping!" ", it's up to you, but we'll see how, especially I read some "Know Your Stars" fictions feature the Avatar characters.
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Post by faircod1965 on Jul 6, 2007 10:09:10 GMT
I also noticed that the announcer was thinking that Numbuh four's name was David Hasselhoff (Numbuh four's name is Wally), and having a teddy bear named Roosevelt.
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Post by camper on Jul 6, 2007 12:19:19 GMT
The Announcer guy loves to lie at anyone, he know 4's name is Wally, but hey, the announcer just like to pick on somebody most of the time. And let's see how is he going to look like when he talks with Father.
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cherrycutie1and5
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Post by cherrycutie1and5 on Jul 6, 2007 14:39:30 GMT
I'm gonna be truthful, I kinda think it's funny...really
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Post by GoldenFlither on Jul 7, 2007 17:48:22 GMT
Numbuh 1 have a crush on 86 is not possible, it's just weird, but 362 is the sound. Of course it's not possible. Or is it? Like you said: the announcer likes to lie. I'm working on Father now, actually. ^^ Well, we all know Numbuh 86 isn't the nicest person in the world. Haha! Can you send me a link to that one? I want to read Sokka's reaction.
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Post by camper on Jul 7, 2007 18:32:56 GMT
I got the Avatar versions from another forum, so it's not possible, submission in FanFiction should be able to, I think, if you can find one.
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