Post by sjedmondson on Jul 1, 2007 14:58:41 GMT
So don't flame me to a crisp. But I like constructive criticism. 
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They moved silently down the corridor. Two of them. They were smartly dressed adults, the man moved silently on the wheels protruding out of his boots. His eyes were dimly lit, the second of the two, the woman, looked at him. Her face looked like an ironing pan with yogurt cup lids where her eyes should be. They were also dimly lit behind those lids. They both stopped in front of a box. Behind this box they could see a green, over-sized sweater sticking out. And they could also detect the sound of muffled laughter. The two adults looked at each-other. Nodded. With one swift movement the woman sent the box flying across the room into the wall. The girl still crouched, with her eyes closed completely oblivious to what had happened. She stopped giggling and slowly turned around, opening one eye. She then stood, looking at the floor. In a miffed tone she said:
"Aww man! They found me! I thought I would at least beat Numbuh 1’s time at hide-and-seek!"
The two robots looked at each-other, puzzled. They predicted the girl would run, screaming. She was only a little girl after all. They turned back to face the little girl. Who was now holding a long plank of wood, that had been customized by someone with extensive knowledge of 2x4 technology, it had several bits of metal holding it in place, a long rubber band across it, at the end of the plank something which resembled half a cat flap and (presumably the girls addition) a poorly drawn flower and the word "Kuki" with a smiling sunshine next to it. All along the top of the plank "loaded" where several rainbow monkeys. Before the robots could react to the presence of such a surprise the girl, Kuki pulled on the trigger. Immediately the device whirred and the cat flap opened and a rainbow monkey was blasted into the face of the man. He toppled over backwards, lifting his hands to try and remove the Rainbow monkey but the Monkeys "Soopa hugging action" meant it fastened tight to the robots face. As he squirmed on the floor, unable to move due to the fact his legs didn’t bend. The female’s hand shot forwards, in an attempt to grab the girl. Kuki did a back-flip, avoiding the swipe, all the time laughing. The robot held out her hand, there was a whirr and it fell off.
"Didn’t that hurt?" Kuki asked, amazed and overall oblivious to the fact that the empty socket where the hand used to be started glowing. Kuki’s eyes looked down to the socket.
"Wow that’s.." she was cut off as energy shot out, blasting Kuki against the wall. She was charred all over and groaned from where she bruised her back against the wall. Slowly, she pulled herself to her feet.
"Alrighty, Miss Meany. Now you are going to get it!" She held up her Rainbow monkey gun again, but as it was charred so badly it disintegrated into ash before her. The robot advanced on her.
"Err got-to-go!" Kuki quickly mumbled then ran off, screaming for help. The robot gave chase down the wooden corridors.
Meanwhile the male robot was clawing away at the rainbow monkey and managed to remove it by cutting its arms off throwing it across the room. He sat up and came face-to-face with two people. One of which was a red sweater wearing, bald leader of the team. The primary target. Next to him was a dark-skinned girl who was leaning against the wall, S.P.A.N.K.L.E.R. in hand. They were Numbuhs 1 and 5 of Sector V.
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They moved silently down the corridor. Two of them. They were smartly dressed adults, the man moved silently on the wheels protruding out of his boots. His eyes were dimly lit, the second of the two, the woman, looked at him. Her face looked like an ironing pan with yogurt cup lids where her eyes should be. They were also dimly lit behind those lids. They both stopped in front of a box. Behind this box they could see a green, over-sized sweater sticking out. And they could also detect the sound of muffled laughter. The two adults looked at each-other. Nodded. With one swift movement the woman sent the box flying across the room into the wall. The girl still crouched, with her eyes closed completely oblivious to what had happened. She stopped giggling and slowly turned around, opening one eye. She then stood, looking at the floor. In a miffed tone she said:
"Aww man! They found me! I thought I would at least beat Numbuh 1’s time at hide-and-seek!"
The two robots looked at each-other, puzzled. They predicted the girl would run, screaming. She was only a little girl after all. They turned back to face the little girl. Who was now holding a long plank of wood, that had been customized by someone with extensive knowledge of 2x4 technology, it had several bits of metal holding it in place, a long rubber band across it, at the end of the plank something which resembled half a cat flap and (presumably the girls addition) a poorly drawn flower and the word "Kuki" with a smiling sunshine next to it. All along the top of the plank "loaded" where several rainbow monkeys. Before the robots could react to the presence of such a surprise the girl, Kuki pulled on the trigger. Immediately the device whirred and the cat flap opened and a rainbow monkey was blasted into the face of the man. He toppled over backwards, lifting his hands to try and remove the Rainbow monkey but the Monkeys "Soopa hugging action" meant it fastened tight to the robots face. As he squirmed on the floor, unable to move due to the fact his legs didn’t bend. The female’s hand shot forwards, in an attempt to grab the girl. Kuki did a back-flip, avoiding the swipe, all the time laughing. The robot held out her hand, there was a whirr and it fell off.
"Didn’t that hurt?" Kuki asked, amazed and overall oblivious to the fact that the empty socket where the hand used to be started glowing. Kuki’s eyes looked down to the socket.
"Wow that’s.." she was cut off as energy shot out, blasting Kuki against the wall. She was charred all over and groaned from where she bruised her back against the wall. Slowly, she pulled herself to her feet.
"Alrighty, Miss Meany. Now you are going to get it!" She held up her Rainbow monkey gun again, but as it was charred so badly it disintegrated into ash before her. The robot advanced on her.
"Err got-to-go!" Kuki quickly mumbled then ran off, screaming for help. The robot gave chase down the wooden corridors.
Meanwhile the male robot was clawing away at the rainbow monkey and managed to remove it by cutting its arms off throwing it across the room. He sat up and came face-to-face with two people. One of which was a red sweater wearing, bald leader of the team. The primary target. Next to him was a dark-skinned girl who was leaning against the wall, S.P.A.N.K.L.E.R. in hand. They were Numbuhs 1 and 5 of Sector V.
![artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] Avatar](http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/1335/tommyavatarmo3.gif){kind=avatar}
