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Post by thetoughgirl on Jan 12, 2007 2:06:24 GMT
ohhhhhh write more!!!!
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Jan 12, 2007 3:46:13 GMT
no action was ok I liked it a lot and I also loved that part with #3 and #4^^
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Post by numbah290 on Jan 13, 2007 6:41:02 GMT
YAY write more please
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Post by numbuh100000000000 on Jan 13, 2007 21:05:29 GMT
THERE ALREADY IS A NUMBUH SIX! BRADLEY THE SKUNK! DUH! YOU ARE DUMB!
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Post by wallynkukiness on Jan 13, 2007 21:09:30 GMT
THERE ALREADY IS A NUMBUH SIX! BRADLEY THE SKUNK! DUH! YOU ARE DUMB! Ummm maybe you didn't read the rules but I'm pretty sure that's considered flaming
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Post by numbah290 on Jan 13, 2007 21:11:22 GMT
and besides she already told us at the begining of the story that it wasn't a Bradley story and she was using six cause it was easier for her acronym, she even put it in caps so chill out
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Post by lois4dead4 on Jan 14, 2007 18:00:51 GMT
Thanks for you're comments guys and numbuh 1000000000000? I EXPLANED SO GO CHECK BEFORE YOU WRITE STUPID STUFF! Anyway Chapter 6! Roxy took her place at the back of the ship as she and her friends headed up to moonbase. "What are they doing here?" She thought "How did they get here?" Roxy may have been sceming and clever she had no idea what she could possibly do now. Her train of thoughts was interupted by a messy landing that knocked the entire knd out of their seats. "Damege report Numbuh 5!" Said Numbuh 1 "I'm not sure numbuh 1, there seems to be some sort of weak forcefield around the base, but we broke through it somehow, at least we've arrived." Roxy's eyes flashed. Walking out of the ship, all was quiet. "Ah well, they've gone we better head ba- oh.. no.." Said Roxy noticing a boy and a girl walk up to them. Both wearing hats covering up their ears. "Hi i'm glad you've come to help." the boy said "You're new recruit could come in handy so if sh'd just come with us." Roxy turned tail and ran. The girl looked furious becoming airborned she sent flamming green fire balls down the coridoor only to have numbuh 4 attack her and yell "STOP IT! NUMBUH 6 RUN!" The boy however was already in hot pursuit of Roxy. She barely heard Numbuh 1 yell "KND BATTLE STATIONS!" She sprinted into an elevator and punched the button. It wouldn't budge. She was trapped in a dead end. "We destroyed all the lifts, im afriand your trapped Roxy." Roxy spun round to see the boy in her path. "Don't let them curse me again Hirio!" She begged "please let me go!" "Roxy i'm trying to help you! Theres a warrant for your arrest I hope you know!" "WHAT?" "That right! Leaving a dimension ileagally." "THats ileagal???" "Yes! didn't you know?" "I WOULDN'T BE HERE IF I DIDN'T KNOW!" She thundered She tried to push past Hirio but he wouldn't let her through "Listen Roxy, If you come with me I can get you out of here." "I can get home on my own power." "Roxy, that may be true but then you'd stil have that spell on you then would you." Roxy shut up at that. "And these little human kids, I supposed you've cursed them?" "No!" "I suppose you've become attached to them?" "No No Never!" " You have!" "Well maybe they are the only kids I've ever met that accept me, sure im a freak who can fly, shoot fire and cast spells. But they just thought that was cool, even at home people think im weird but thats becasue of the stupid stupid spell!" "Who are you Numbuh 6?" Both spun round to see numbuh 3 standing in the hallway clutching her teddy bear launcher. "I'm Roxy Guitar." said Roxy pulling off her bandana to reveal two pointed ears.
Kinda corny this chapter I know but thats just my writing style. Please Read and Review!!!!!! l
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Post by numbah290 on Jan 14, 2007 21:13:52 GMT
awesome chapter dude, bring us more!!!!!
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Post by lois4dead4 on Jan 20, 2007 22:15:04 GMT
sorry i havent updated in forever, i've been busy
Chapter 7!
Numbuh 3 just stood gaping in the door. "You're one of them?" "Yes Kuki im one of them", Roxy said, a little annoyed. "You lied to us?" "NO! I swear im still a kid and a KND operative even if im not... human." "Roxy?" said Hirio "Hirio, tell the others I've got out another portal or something." "But" "No buts!" just do it "Ok, but i am coming back for you." Hirio left and soon the rucus outside went silent. "Numbuh 3 i need you to do me a hugic favour." "What?" "Don't tell the others who i am." "Why?" She said sharply "Please kuki , I'm begging you! Listen In my world there are some nasty people, I upset one of them and they cursed me. So i had to run away to find a cure, but illeagal to leave my world without a lincence so now im a convict. The cure is somewhere on this world and I need to find it." "I don't know, this is all knda confusing" said Numbuh 3 nervously "I tell you what, I'll make you a deal. You know Numbuh4?" "What about him?" "I promise before that I've gone back to my world he will have confessed to you that he has a a crush on you." Numbuh 3 looked delighted "You've got a deal... Rox- I mean, Numbuh 6." They shook on it. "We better find the others, but... Numbuh 6?" "Yeah?" "Whats this curse?" "I can't tell you, you'd be so scared you'd probably give all your rainbow monkeys and freinds lives just so you'd never see me again." Roxy walked on ahead, that was part of the reason she was betraying them. If they found out about her curse they'd probably hate her anyway. "I'd never do that silly!" Said Numbuh 3 And that guilty feeling bit at Roxy again.
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Post by numbah290 on Jan 21, 2007 2:26:36 GMT
*gasp* that is awesome dude YaY numbuh 4's gonna tell numbuh 3 *dances*
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Jan 28, 2007 8:40:44 GMT
I FEEL THE SAME AS #290^^
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Post by lois4dead4 on Jan 28, 2007 12:21:29 GMT
hehe thanks again for all the great comments since you've been so nice Guess what Chapter 8!!!!!!! Roxy retreated to her room, absoluply exausted. She had a lot to think about. Meanwhile sector V discussed the crazy mission they'd had that day. "I KNEW IT!!" Said Numbuh 2 "I knew aliens existed!" "How do you know there aliens?" Said Numbuh 5 "Numbuh 5 thinks that the DC made some wacko robots." "Or some other villain." Said Numbuh 1 "You know, its so werid, they were all fighting and killing us one minuite, then the next they all went." said Numbuh 4 "And...They all had the same powers as numbuh 6." "No they didn't" Said numbuh 3 quickly "The fire they were shooting was green, i bet its just a coinidence." "Are you alright numbuh 3?" Said Numbuh 2 "You look really shocked." "I'm fine." She said laughing nervously. "Where did you and numbuh 6 dissapear to?" Said Numbuh1 "Yeah, Numbuh 4 was really worried!" Laughed numbuh 5 ignoring the stabbing glare Wally shot her. "Just to... destroy the robots, Numbuh 5 was right they were robots.Er.. I'm going to play with my rainbow monkeys now, bye guys." She hurried out the room. Numbuh 4 followed her, she was acting very strange. Wally walked down the treehouse and stop dead outside Roxy's door. She was talking to someone. He opened the door and said "Numbuh 6, who are you talking to?" The room was empty. "Numbuh 6?" Suddenly a hand clapped over Numbuh 4's mouth and held him tight. He struggled but it was no use. Roxy laughed coldly. "It's no use struggling Wally! Now I've found what i'm looking for nothing is going to get in my way. Plus things will be much easier if I've got a hostage!" Roxy flew out the window. Numbuh 5 was watching numbuh 2 trying to get the high score on super smash bros melee when suddenly Kuki burst in. "Guys! Numbuh 6 has kidnapped Wally!"
Der! der! der! Will wally escape the plotting Roxy? Will the DC finally destroy the KND? Will Roxy break her curse? Find out in the next dramtic instalment of Operation NUMBUH SIX!!! um... sorry about that, please read and review!
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Feb 2, 2007 5:19:17 GMT
I liked it please countinue^^
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Post by lois4dead4 on Feb 2, 2007 20:17:30 GMT
I'll try and update on saturday or sunday, thanx again for the sweet comments!
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Feb 4, 2007 2:43:37 GMT
ok^^
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