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Post by lois4dead4 on Jan 3, 2007 20:56:02 GMT
This is my first fic ever so please be nice and CRITISIZE not flame plz. Please note this is NOT A BRADLY FIC sorry, i need the numbuh 6 cos then it'll be easier
KND OPERATION N.U.M.B.U.H-S.I.X
Numbuh Under Massively Bigifling Unbelievably Huge
Spell Is Xtraordinary
Chapter 1. An evil plot
"So...Roxy." Said the delightful children (DC) in their creepy tone to the 10year old girl before them. "How about we make a deal."
"A Deal?" Replied Roxy. She was quite tall and had a purple bandana on her scuffy brown, shoulder length hair. "Yes... A deal. We've told about that dreadful KND, now we would like you to do a little task for us." "Whats in it for me?" The DC held up a small device. "This gadget has the energy to open up a portal and return you to your own world. You do as we say, and you can go home." "Go on?" "What we would like you to do is join a partiularly annoying sector, V, tell them you are the latest member of their team and lull them into a false sense of securaty (sorry spelling) make them believe you are a loyal teamate, then you strike." Roxy considered. These KND, they were only a bunch of humans after all, she was far superior to them even though she looked human inside she was definately of a another world."
"I'll do it." She said "A good choice." They said handing her fake KND ID. Don't fail us...Numbuh 6." "I won't." And she headed for the door. "Roxy!" "What?" "Remember don't use your... powers unless absolubly nessersery, when you attack, the element of suprise would be useful." Roxy walked out the door and towards the tree house.
Chapter 1, plz read and review! I already know chapter 2 and I'll continue if u like!
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Post by numbah290 on Jan 3, 2007 21:21:45 GMT
Oh this sounds interesting please continue
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Post by lois4dead4 on Jan 4, 2007 15:08:54 GMT
glad u like! Chapter 2,
Sector V were happily enjoying their day off. Numbuh 5 was reading a magazine, Numbuh 4, 3 and 2 were on a 3 player melee on super smash bros melee game and numbuh 1 was reading through past mission briefs. "Go Fox!" cried numbuh 2 at his game character "Fat chance!"Said Numbuh 4 "Bowser is gonna kick the crud outta ya!" "Guys!" Said Numbuh 3 annoyed "Your just attacking each other! Arn't you going to include me?" "Well Numbuh 3." said numbuh 4 smugly "theres not a lotta point, you'd just lose first cos I'm such a pro at this game." Numbuh 4 looked back at the screen and stared in horror as the announcer said "This games winner is... Pikachu!" (numbuh 3s character) "You CHEATER!" Yelled Numbuh 4 at numbuh 3 who was giggling. "Guys, do ya mind keepin it down? Numbuh 5 trying to read here!" "Is this the right treehouse?" All of sector V turned round to see Roxy standing in the doorway. "Hey! Who are you?" Demanded Numbuh 1 "This is sector V isn't?" "Yes but... how did you get in?" "I just came from moonbase, I've been reasigned to sector V. I've got this KND ID to proove it." NUmbuh 2 took it and ran it through a scanner. "It's genuine Numbuh 1." He said Roxy had to bend her head to hide her evil smile. "Well then, welcome to the KND we better introduce ourselves." Numbuh 1 cleared his throat. "I am Nigel Uno, Numbuh 1, I lead this sector." "I'm Numbuh 2 Hoagie Gilligan, 2x4 specialist." "I'm Kuki! But i'm also numbuh 3!" "Numbuh 4. real name wallabee but don't call me that either wally or numbuh 4." "I'm Numbuh 5, Abigale lincoln." Roxy gave a false smile, this was going to be so easy! They weren't suspious at all! "And you are?" Said Numbuh 1. "My real name isn't important, just call me numbuh 6."
Suddenly an alarm went off. "Looks like we've got a mission!" said nUmbuh1 "Awww, but it's our day off!" Moaned Numbuh 3 "It must be a very important job then!" Said Numbuh 1 "To the skyclaw." All of the KND ran out of the room. Roxy stood still. "A mission?"
Kinda boring at the moment, I know, but it will get better the KND get into BIG TROUBLE in the next chapter, will Roxy save them? READ AND REVIEW AND FIND OUT
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Post by numbah290 on Jan 5, 2007 4:29:38 GMT
this is getting even more interesting, HAHA numbuh 3 beat numbuh 4
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Post by lois4dead4 on Jan 8, 2007 20:28:47 GMT
Chapter 3 3/4ness begins here! Roxy sat in the back of the Skyclaw carefully watching the rest of the kids, the only ones talking though were numbuh 3 and 4, still arguing about the video game. "I can't believe you're making such a big deal out of this Wally!" Said Numbuh 3 "Besides I won fair and square." "You didn't cheater! You distracted me on purpose!" Numbuh 4 shot back "I did not! You didn't get this mad at Numbuh 5 when she beat you." Numbuh 4 stayed silent. "Don't you like me Wally?" This attacted the attenton of everyone on the team. "Yeah don't you liiiiiiiike Numbuh 3?" Teased Numbuh 2. Numbuh4 blushed, he knew if he said he liked Kuki the other would tease him like hell. But if he said he didn't like kuki, she would be upset. He made an unwise desision. "No Kuki I DON'T like you! You're an annoying, cruddy girl!" Everyone gasped and he instantly regretted his words. Numbuh three just said "Fine." quietly and walked off sadly. An awquad half hour later sector V had landed at their destination (the video game arcade) and Numbuh 1 gave mission briefs. "KND, the DC have attacked this place and are intending to turn it into a privite school where they'll brainwash kids!" Roxy looked alarmed "The DC?" "Yes, i suppose you've heard of theeeee!!!" Numbuh 1 was cut off as a huge metal claw suddenly grabbed him. "Hello KND!" Said the DC in their new giant robot. "Prepare to be destroyed!" "Aw crud..." said numbuh 4 dodging the claw as it tried to grab the kids one by one. It got Numbuh 2. "Hellllp!! It seems you've got a grip on the situation delightful dorks!" It got Numbuh 3. It got numbuh 4 It got numbuh 5. The DC laughed evily "Prepare to be anilated KND!" "NUMBUH 6!" They yelled. Roxy watched helplessly what were the DC doing? She needed more time! "3..." Roxy looked watch them struggle helplessly "2" "I'm sorry Kuki. I do like you really." Roxy heard numbuh 4 say. She sprung into action. She had to use her powers.
Please READ AND REVIEW. I'll update soon
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Post by numbah290 on Jan 9, 2007 4:04:04 GMT
This is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you know you should post the link on the 3/4 thread, im sure others would like it
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Jan 9, 2007 5:20:47 GMT
hay I like it and maybe you sould post it on the 3/4 thrad^^
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Post by lois4dead4 on Jan 9, 2007 18:41:12 GMT
thank you for your comments! I'll post it on the PW thread see what the others think, I put it on when i UPDATE which should be soon EDIT: IS UPDATING NOW!
Chapter 4
Sector V closed their eyes and braced themselves for the horrible fate that was about to come upon them. The DC counted down "3,2... WHAT?" A jet of flame hit the machine and they went rocketing backward. The kids slowely opened their eyes to see Roxy hovering triumphently like a super herione, her fist aflame. The pulled the claw out of its socket and freed the kids. They just gaped at their new member. "Now delightful dorks!" She cried "I'm gonna teach you a lesson you'll never forget!" She swooped to the ground and picked up the ten ton machine swung it round and it went crashing out the door.
Roxy became airborne once more swooped out the door and aiming both her fists flaring orange flames spewed out and sent the DC and their machine flying over the hills.
Roxy crept back into the arcade and looked at the 5 gawping kids. She looked at her still smoking hands. "Er... Guys I can uh... explain... I think." They stared a second longer then they cheered. "THAT WAS SOOOO AWSOME!" Cried Numbuh 2 "YOU CAN FLY AND SHOOT FLAMES! YOU'RE AS COOL AS YIPPER! NO COOLER!" "Then you totally lifted that machine thats was like eleventy billion tons!" Said Numbuh 4 excitedly "With the DC inside too" "Numbuh 6 is like a super hero!" Said Numbuh 3 Numbuh 1 and 5 were still staring. "Girl? How did yo do that?" Said Numbuh 5 "Yes, please enlighten us." Said numbuh 1 "I..." Roxy stammered "You'd never believe me, its this whole bionicle thing but im still a human kid." She lied "I know its a bit weird but its theonly way I could save you." As they went back to the tree house Roxy couldn'thelp smiling as Numbuh 3, 4 and 2 kept saying how awsome and cool she was, she almost forgot about the plan, but not quite. When, they got back Numbuh 2 designed the blooprints for her room. "It'll take me about 15 months to build." He said Roxy studdied the blooprints "It'll take me 15 seconds." She grabbed a tool box and dissapeared into a cloud of dust and sure enough 15 seconds later the room was finished. The KND went through their whole gawping routine again. "Well guys"she said. "It's been a long day and im tired so im just gonna get some sleep." She went in the room smiling at the several responces of "Night numbuh 6!" "Cya tomoro numbuh 6" "Good job on the mission today numbuh 6!"
As soon asshe was sure she was completely alone she stared dialling furiously on her comunicater. The DC flashed on the small screen looking pretty miffed "Hello Numbuh 6." They said "What are you playing at???" She hissed furiously "I'd known them for like a minute, you can't expect me to get them to trust me that quick!" "We were bored." They said airily "And now they know you've got powers, the element of suprise has gone." "Don't worry DC, they like me already, the plans still underway." "Fine! But we don't want to see anymore complications!" "It was you're faul-" "Numbuh 6? Who are you talking to?" Roxy's blood ran cold, she turned off the comunicater and stuffed it in her pocket. Numbuh 3 was standing in the doorway.
"No one numbuh 3, it must be you're imagination." Reasured Roxy Kuki still looked uncertain. "Numbuh 6? You wouldn't ever betray us would you?" Roxy looked shocked "Of course not!" A smiled lit up Kuki's face "Good, because I think in time, we could all be really great friends." She laughed and skipped out the room. A horrible feeling gripped Roxy like a vice, she'd never felt it before and only after she was drifting off to sleep in her new bed did she realize what it was. Guilt.
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Post by numbah290 on Jan 10, 2007 1:39:24 GMT
THAT IS SO AWESOME DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Jan 10, 2007 6:07:00 GMT
VERY, VERY, VERY COOL!!! ^^
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Post by lois4dead4 on Jan 10, 2007 18:57:58 GMT
*grins happily* Nice comments make me happy, I'll update soon.
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Post by numbah290 on Jan 10, 2007 23:35:41 GMT
YaY ;D
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Post by faircod1965 on Jan 11, 2007 5:57:47 GMT
Brilliant story, fantastic.
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Post by smilesforkuki00003 on Jan 11, 2007 7:17:30 GMT
OK^^ cant wait^^
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Post by lois4dead4 on Jan 11, 2007 22:45:55 GMT
Ok chapter 3/4 er... I mean five!
Roxy awaoke form the first peaceful sleep she'd had in in months and blearily looked at her watch. 10pm it read. Leaping out of bed she quickly got dressed and pulled on her bandana. Running out of her room and down the wooden corridor she entered the TV room (you know the place where they well... watch TV in COUCH) Only numbuh 4 was sitting there. "Oh no!" She cried "Have the others gone on a mission without me?" "No" said Numbuh 4 "Numbuh 1, 2 and 5 have gone to the comic book place and left me here with you and numbuh 3." "Where is she?" "In her room playing rainbowmonkeys where hopefully she will stay." Roxy looked at numbuh 4 carfully. "Numbuh 4?" She asked "Do you have a crush on someone on this team?" Numbuh 4 stared at Roxy blushing "WHAT? Of course not! Why would you think that???" Roxy cackled "I dunno, you've just got that look about you. Come on, I know you like someone, so fess up." "Whatever." Roxy grinned "Maybe numbuh 3 will know. HEY NUMBUH 3!!!" She belowed "SHHHHHHHHHH!" Numbuh 4 hissed "Okay, okay... I'll tell you." He went VERY red "It's K... Ku.." "HI GUYS!!!!" Cried Numbuh 3 "Did you call me numbuh 6?" Numbuh 4 gasped and blushed even more. Roxy smiled triumphently "Kuki Sanban." She said "Yes?" Said Numbuh 3. Numbuh 4 shot a pleading look at Roxy "Uh... Numbuh 4 just wanted to say sorry proply about yesterday!" "Oh..." Numbuh 3 looked at numbuh 4 expectantly. Roxy was suddenly struck with a crafty idea. She quickly cast a silent spell on Wally although it was neither seen nor heard." She took a few paces back. "Kuki...I." He walked up to her and took her hand "I'm so sorry about what I said yesterday." Numbuh 3 giggled and blush "Thats okay wally." "I mean it! You're not annoying and Cruddy, you're the opposite. Your kind and happy and... well, quite pretty actually." Roxy gulped her spell was working a little to well. She tried to stop it but she couldn't take the spell off. Numbuh 3 certainly didn't seem to mind "Oh Wally!" She cried and hugged him. A huge grin spread over his face. Roxy suddenly maneged to lift the spell. Kuki was still hugging him and he had a dreamy look on his face, suddenly he snapped out of it and pushed her away blushing furiously. "Yeah, yeah, enough with the mush." He said back to his moody self. Kuki put him down and smiled blissfully. "Well, bye wally! Bye Numbuh 6." She happily skipped out the room. "What happened there???" He cried as soon as Kuki was out of earshot. "I Nearly confessed to the cruddy girl! This really weird thing happened." He stared at Roxy. "Did...you?" "Well you know numbuh 4! Sometimes these feelings just take over." Numbuh 4 went red AGAIN. "Can we please stop talking about this! And don't breathe a word to the others!" "I promise, WALLY" Said Roxy in a perfect Numbuh 3 impression. The others burst in. "Numbuh 4 wake Numbuh 3" Ordered Numbuh 1 and he started calling moonbase. Roxy edged to Numbuh 2 and 5. "Whats going on?" she whispered "Somethings strange is going down at moonbase." said Numbuh 5 "Yeah, these werid beings are attacking it!" said Hoagie "It looks like a desperate situation." Wally and kuki entered and numbuh 1 had an urgent look about him. "Its an emergancy." He said "Strange pointy eared people are attacking the moonbase and causing chaos, Numbuh 362 needs all the help she can get. KND BATTLESTATION!" Roxys hands flew to her own ears and though they were hidden by her bandana.
They too were pointed.
Sorry this had less action in it. But the next chapter will hopefully be action packed. I won't be able to update til sunday though sorry!
Comments and reviews would be much apprietated since the ones I've already got made me happy!
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