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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Jun 9, 2003 20:20:23 GMT
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Post by NumbuhInfinity on Jun 21, 2003 17:12:36 GMT
wwHi Numbuh8. I read your story up to chapter eight. I want to be honest with you. I usually do not like to read stories where the characters are older than what they are on the show (i.e. aging characters like the KND or the PPGs into teenagers, adults, etc.). I don't know. Most likely because I cannot imagine them in their kid forms anymore, neither would they be the same characters I've loved from the show. Because, well, they're older, they're "maturized." So I almost skipped your story completely. But since you were nice enough to do me favors in this board, I'd thought maybe I should return the favor and give your story a chance. But to be honest again, I WOULD have skipped it anyway if it wasn't for the review that said that the kids somehow turn back into their original ages. So.... I started reading. It wasn't bad at all. I don't understand some things that are happening, one of them being the fic character Numbuhs, another being exactly how the heck the original KND turned back into kids in the first place. (I have a feeling the "villian" is involved, but how is the question...) But I guess they'll all be explained eventually. I'm gonna review this at FF.net, too, but I'll be less "personal" there. Meanwhile I'll get to work on ROOKIE Chapter 3 hopefully later today. Keep up the writing, babe. EDIT: That skipping the fic thing, it's nothing personal. I do that to most other fics where the characters are aged.
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Jun 21, 2003 18:58:50 GMT
Aww.... thanks. I understand if you don't want to read it... it's getting a bit more mushy than i planned in chapter nine. ( Don't worry nothing serious... ) I'm not the best fan fic writer and i'm making most of it up as i go. I should have chapter nine up today if i can tear myself away from Harry Potter. ( hehehe...)
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Post by numbuh122 on Jul 9, 2003 21:55:50 GMT
I gotta tell ya Numbuh 8 this is my second favourite fic in the WHOLE wide world
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Jul 9, 2003 22:12:17 GMT
Seriously? Wow. You'll be happy to know I just uploaded chapter 14. ;D
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Post by numbuh122 on Jul 10, 2003 0:21:37 GMT
you DID ummmm excuse me *runs off to read chaptuh 14*
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Post by numbuh122 on Jul 10, 2003 22:27:48 GMT
That....was.....GREAT!!!!!!!! I love how 3 and 4 keep gettin suprised like that Continue it REALLY SOON
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Post by numbuh 273 on Jul 19, 2003 2:40:37 GMT
i really like this story and got to the part where you left off . :)today i didn't get a chance to go to ff.net 'cause i go there every day. :Ddarn it..... well i have to give it a 4-star, anyway...... NUMBUH 273 OUTTTTT!!!!!
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Post by Numero 19 on Jul 19, 2003 12:12:49 GMT
GR! AHHHHHH!!*gets out the strangling gloves* Ff.net is down again! Gosh, can't they do anything right? I hope its just not my computer that doesn't show ff.net......
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Post by numbuh122 on Jul 19, 2003 12:32:13 GMT
don't worry Numero 19 it was doin the same on my computer to yesterday but I'm gonna go check if ff.net is runnin now so see ya
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Post by numbuh6 on Jul 25, 2003 1:43:58 GMT
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Post by numbuh18 on Jul 25, 2003 2:13:18 GMT
I luv ure story! The part where the two boys went to the treehouse was confusing...i got the numbuh's mixed up...but that was AWESOME!!!
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Jul 26, 2003 21:16:34 GMT
You guys are way to kind. Sorry if you're confused, i usually type it, only scan it over once and send it. It all makes sence to me. You'll have to bug me if you want the next chapter. E-mail me. IM me, do whatever it takes! Otherwise, i just won't do it unless someone bugs me to. Or tells me to. Like homework.
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Post by numbuh122 on Jul 27, 2003 21:53:59 GMT
ya want someone ta bug ya? ok here I go DO THE NEXT CHAPTUH RIGHT NOW OR....umm uh heehee I'll haffta get back to ya but anywayz continue REALLY SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Jul 27, 2003 21:54:14 GMT
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