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Joey
Oct 25, 2003 10:54:18 GMT
Post by numbuheightbitstar on Oct 25, 2003 10:54:18 GMT
Hi guys, I've got a new Secret File for you. It's called "Joey" and it's about Wallabee Beatles, who is being stalked by a little girl who has fangs and can barely talk. There's also a subplot where Numbuh Three takes on a personal mission despite having a serious illness. This fanfic has been put through a quality assurance test (a list of previewers is at the bottom of the fanfic) and has already inspired some artwork, so I really think you all will like it. You can find a copy in .doc format here: www.angelfire.com/comics/nes_star/KND/Fanfics.htmlOkay, that's enough sales pitch. Read it and tell me what you think. Also feel free to post, PM, or E-Mail me any questions you may have regarding this story. Thanks for hearing me, and I honestly hope you like it.
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Joey
Oct 26, 2003 2:03:40 GMT
Post by numbuheightbitstar on Oct 26, 2003 2:03:40 GMT
Oh, another fan just sent me more art inspired by Joey (that page can be accessed via the same link as above). Go admire some of our talents already!
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Joey
Oct 26, 2003 20:34:17 GMT
Post by NumbuhInfinity on Oct 26, 2003 20:34:17 GMT
I saved. I read. I liked. It was more funny than scary after the beginning; not sure whether you intended this to be comedy or not, but if not then sorry, but I couldn't help but laugh at some parts. Though it was somewhat strange the kids keep calling each other by their codenames then their real names then back again, back and forth. Nice to read a decent KND story again.
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Joey
Oct 26, 2003 23:10:41 GMT
Post by Stardrifter 8 on Oct 26, 2003 23:10:41 GMT
Well, I liked it! Good job!
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Joey
Oct 27, 2003 2:00:12 GMT
Post by pentical on Oct 27, 2003 2:00:12 GMT
Aww that was so cute. Nice job.
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Joey
Oct 27, 2003 7:44:54 GMT
Post by jessnumbuh20 on Oct 27, 2003 7:44:54 GMT
Though it was somewhat strange the kids keep calling each other by their codenames then their real names then back again, back and forth. Well I have a take on this. I believe that when the Kids are in the safety of their tree house, Im sure they call themselves by their real names every now and then, if not then by a slip of the tongue. Also, haveing more than one reference to the character gives the author a bit more freedom I think. For example, your not limted to just "Nigel" or "He" as, but you have "Numbuh One" which in my opinion is more of an adjective than a name. His name is not "Numbuh One" thats what he is. Who he is, is "Nigel" and then if you concider their numbuhs to be adjectives and not names, then it just dosnt sound all that screwed up. Plus if you are a well educated fan the difference between the Numbuhs and Names are blind to you. You dont have to stop and think. "Four... Four.. Which one os- Oh! Thats the blonde kid!" You automaticly know that Four=Wally and Wally=Four. But thats my opinion anyway.
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Joey
Oct 27, 2003 8:29:41 GMT
Post by numbuheightbitstar on Oct 27, 2003 8:29:41 GMT
Well I have a take on this. I believe that when the Kids are in the safety of their tree house, Im sure they call themselves by their real names every now and then, if not then by a slip of the tongue. That's a way of looking at it. The way I see it, however, is that the only time they stick strictly to their Numbuhs is when they're on KND business. Any other time, they can use whichever names they want.
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Joey
Oct 27, 2003 18:32:16 GMT
Post by NumbuhInfinity on Oct 27, 2003 18:32:16 GMT
Well I have a take on this. I believe that when the Kids are in the safety of their tree house, Im sure they call themselves by their real names every now and then, if not then by a slip of the tongue. Also, haveing more than one reference to the character gives the author a bit more freedom I think. For example, your not limted to just "Nigel" or "He" as, but you have "Numbuh One" which in my opinion is more of an adjective than a name. His name is not "Numbuh One" thats what he is. Who he is, is "Nigel" and then if you concider their numbuhs to be adjectives and not names, then it just dosnt sound all that screwed up. Plus if you are a well educated fan the difference between the Numbuhs and Names are blind to you. You dont have to stop and think. "Four... Four.. Which one os- Oh! Thats the blonde kid!" You automaticly know that Four=Wally and Wally=Four. But thats my opinion anyway. Ah, well. (scratches behind his head) I guess I'm just so used to the fact the Kids almost never call each other by their real names on the show (Abby said Nigel's "real" name once, and she was teasing him) and that I call them by their codenames in my fics, 'cept in certain scenes. Edit: Said "he" instead of "she"...
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Joey
Oct 28, 2003 3:33:20 GMT
Post by numbuheightbitstar on Oct 28, 2003 3:33:20 GMT
Ah, well. (scratches behind his head) I guess I'm just so used to the fact the Kids almost never call each other by their real names on the show (Abby said Nigel's "real" name once, and he was teasing him) and that I call them by their codenames in my fics, 'cept in certain scenes. Well, Diff'rent strokes.... *Hopes this thread goes back to being about people reviewing the story* Speaking of whcih, no one commented on the "Art Inspired by Joey" section.
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Joey
Oct 28, 2003 3:46:34 GMT
Post by NumbuhInfinity on Oct 28, 2003 3:46:34 GMT
Well, Diff'rent strokes.... *Hopes this thread goes back to being about people reviewing the story* Speaking of whcih, no one commented on the "Art Inspired by Joey" section. I saw 'em and thought they were cute. You probably want more than "They're cute" (which is why I didn't say anything aboutt them at first), but I'm not good at essay-long comments on a pic.
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Joey
Oct 28, 2003 8:27:06 GMT
Post by numbuheightbitstar on Oct 28, 2003 8:27:06 GMT
I saw 'em and thought they were cute. You probably want more than "They're cute" (which is why I didn't say anything aboutt them at first), but I'm not good at essay-long comments on a pic. Comments are comments to me. If I needed them to be lengthy, I would've been miffed about the one-line reviews Joey itself has gotten. Just as long as someone says something (regardless of wether it's praise or criticism), I is happy ^__^.
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Joey
Oct 28, 2003 20:41:29 GMT
Post by jessnumbuh20 on Oct 28, 2003 20:41:29 GMT
I draw what I draw.
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