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Post by scorch on Jul 6, 2007 11:51:04 GMT
This story, which i am rewriting, tells the origins of The Delightfuls based on the movie explanation, and also gives a story to how nigel lost his hair. The main story, is about a Delightfulised Sector Y, who had a diferent reaction to the Delightfuliser, based slightly on X-men. www.fanfiction.net/s/3181730/1/
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Post by scorch on Jul 13, 2007 18:20:08 GMT
I'm considering discontinuing the story, as people just read it, and can't be assed to take a minute to submit feedback. Why doe people think i post links, if it's not for feedback.
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Post by kairi21 on Jul 14, 2007 3:06:52 GMT
I have read it and dropped ya a review. Try not to lose hope. I'm sure people are just busy. I've written one myself and so far only one person has left a review... but I gotta keep goin' for that one person ne? (Do feel free to drop by the thread if you have time BTW. It's the KND BATTLE ROYALE one. ^__^)
Just a little bit of patience. Also, don't stop writing, we only improve if we keep writing ne? ^__~
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Post by scorch on Jul 14, 2007 9:58:25 GMT
thanks for the review. Chapter 2 should be up sooner or later.
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