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Post by flighter on Jul 7, 2007 15:21:34 GMT
Okay peeps, here's the deal. since there has been an uproar of complaints from a few members, and i'm not saying who, for using people from this forum for the main villan, i've decided to use a made up villan, or should i say villan s. Here they are: 1. Captain Spambeard 2. Captain Flamebeard 3. Captain Trollbeard 4. Captain Basherbeard So there are the villans! like em' ? I'm not going to attah a story update to this due to the fact tha I have writters block  . So until I get rid of it, feel free to make predictions, talk about the story, what you liked about it, or anything about my fic. |
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 7, 2007 15:27:58 GMT
AWESOME! You can just imagine the actual colours of the beard, too, like red flamebeard, I dunno why but I see green basherbeard, grey trollbeard, and yellow spambeard.
Anyway, if you need some inspiration, you could always PM me, I'm almost always full of random ideas.
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Post by sjedmondson on Jul 7, 2007 15:53:39 GMT
Amazing original ideas. =) Such a shame we can't nominate ourselves as Villains! Always wanted to be a pirate villain. Which by the way absolutly pwn Ninjas! Are the shipper ships after anything in particular, as in a treasure. Something to prove their ship is the best? etc. Even if its a McGruffin plot device, it might help lift your writers block.  Do the shipper ships (that makes sense right?) are they aiming for anything? |
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 7, 2007 17:15:20 GMT
"Do the shipper ships are they aiming for anything" makes no sense, but I get your drift. I think they should all be aiming for a treasure chest or something which contains the secret to their ship becoming a reality.
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Post by flighter on Jul 7, 2007 18:03:49 GMT
Okay peeps, here we go. i've been getting a few PMs for spoilers for the story. Okay here's a tinsy winsy spoiler, Code A5 will join the Suki in a 2 on 1 sword fight against Capt. BasherBeard If people will PM me for a spoiler i'll keep giving this one. If you want to PM me to ask questions or anything else about me story go right ahead. |
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 8, 2007 21:30:02 GMT
You could've at least put the spoiler in a spoiler code tag, in case people didn't want to see it. It's the random devil icon when you don't post on Quick Reply.
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Post by flighter on Jul 8, 2007 23:02:35 GMT
sorry  . I'll fix it. |
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 9, 2007 5:42:18 GMT
Thanks! Sounds good, anyway, I hope your writing block disappears into nothingness and oyou continue writing soon!
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Post by flighter on Jul 9, 2007 15:54:41 GMT
chapter 3: Flamebeard
Code A5's eyes burned from sa-water and his mouth had the taste of sand in it. His ship had crashed last night and he was washed up on FanFiction Island.
Him along with two lucky others didn't get lost at sea like the others. Instead they washed up on this island.
"Get up.", said someone in a demanding voice.
Code A5's head was throbbing, possibly because he was knocked unconsious when his ship got hit by a wave and his head hit the mast.
"I said get up you shipper filth!", demanded the person in a gruff voice.
Code A5 looked up at the person to see a tall man with a long, red, flame-like beard. He also wore a large sumbrerro.
"Who are you?", asked Code A5 in a weak voice.
"Name's Flamebeard, now GET UP!", he said again, this time pulling A5 to his feet. Then he began dragging A5 to a nearby church that was near the the water.
Once inside, A5 saw the other two tied up. He also saw that a huge mozaik took up one side of the building.
"Who do you work for?", asked one of the others.
"Me and the other don't work for nobody!", yelled Flamebeard
"Others? Who are they?" asked the other crew member.
"Spambeard told me not to tell you that," he paused for a moment, "OH DAMN IT!"
At that moment A5 saw something behind Flamebeard. It was the sillouette of something. To A5 it looked like a horizontal line gliding across the huge colored window. Then it stopped, right behind Flamebeard.
A split second later, two things happened at once; There was a loud BOOM and the huge colored window disintigrated into millions of razor sharp shards of glass.
A nanosecond later, 500 pounds of glass came raining down towards the stone floor...with Flamebeard beneath it all. The thing that scared A5 was that...Flamebeard didn't get out of the way...
It wasn't Flamebeard sudden death that shocked the crew it was what was behind the glass that shocked them.
gathered around a cannon were four screaming, savage FLAMERS!
"How did Flamers get ahold of stuff like that?!", asked on the tied up crew members.
"I don't know, but i don't want to stick around to find out!", replied A5. And with that, A5 untied the others and the ran out of Flamebeard's final resting place...
So did you like my latest chapter? OOooo it looks like shippers are losing ships! please reply peeps!
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 9, 2007 16:00:06 GMT
Awesome! So we've lost a villain captain already? D: Lol
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Post by queennicki on Jul 10, 2007 19:27:41 GMT
cool chapter! lol everyones running out of ships and stuff XD
i think we should start shipping the villians...that'll stop them...WHOS WITH ME!!! lol
please continue!
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 10, 2007 20:19:13 GMT
i think we should start shipping the villians...that'll stop them...WHOS WITH ME!!! lol Eye! Lol! Basherbeard/Spambeard 4EVA!!! |
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Post by queennicki on Jul 11, 2007 15:54:36 GMT
lol! basherbeard/spambeard for lifey! hehe jokez!
(now sum peoples Gotta do sum fanart!)
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 15, 2007 10:05:35 GMT
When and if I can be bothered. ;D
[Edit]
Oh great, flighter went and left for no good reason! And now we'll never know what happens! I'll have to live in suspense my entire life!
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. So until I get rid of it, feel free to make predictions, talk about the story, what you liked about it, or anything about my fic.
. I'll fix it.