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Post by thesuki on Jul 2, 2007 2:47:28 GMT
It's not a rule. It just makes things easier to read. ^^
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 2, 2007 16:57:06 GMT
Fligher wrote -
One sunny summer day in the KND fan forum, A panda warrior captain, Royal Sweetness, was sailing in his Panda warrior ship, along with his crew. Steering his ship at the helm, he spotted something off the port bow(AN; on a ship, Port means left, starboard=right).
"Someone, get me my spyglass!", The proud panda warrior captain yelled. within seconds she had her gold spyglass. What she saw nearly made her drop the pure gold spyglass. She recognized the rag like sails, the rusty metal hull (AN; The ships of the bad guys look like modern day battle ships except longer and with more towers for the sails. Also the shippers' ships look like those pirate ships in movies except with no skull and cross bone flags), the putred smell of poopheads.
In the first paragraph, you were saying Royal Sweetness was male. She's a girl. And secondly, you changed from male to female in the next paragraph. Was that a mistake you made, or can I just not read? Or was it a different person, or what? I liked the begining, though ;D
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Post by queennicki on Jul 2, 2007 17:08:22 GMT
In the first paragraph, you were saying Royal Sweetness was male. She's a girl. ...OR AM I?!? LOL...naw just kidding im a girl, yeah i was a bit confused there aswell, but it was probably just a mistake. cool first chapter! MUHAHAHA! IM THA CAPTAIN!! >=) ...i'll be a good captain ;D anywho...PLEASE CONTINUE! |
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 2, 2007 19:17:18 GMT
In the first paragraph, you were saying Royal Sweetness was male. She's a girl. ...OR AM I?!? LOL...naw just kidding im a girl, yeah i was a bit confused there aswell, but it was probably just a mistake. cool first chapter! MUHAHAHA! IM THA CAPTAIN!! >=) ...i'll be a good captain ;D anywho...PLEASE CONTINUE! YES! Woo! And phew *wipes brow* |
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Post by flighter on Jul 2, 2007 20:31:03 GMT
Sorry about the mix-up with the gender thing. I already fixed it. anywho, here the second chapter.
Chapter 2: SO MANY ROZZs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The next day another panda warrior ship was sailing just offshore of Fanfiction island, where savages who call themselves "Flamers" flame peoples FanFics for no reason!
"Captain, one of the crew spotted a ship of the starboard bow. do think it's ship bashers?", asked a random panda warrior as he entered a pitch black captain's quarters. The warrior backed away as a figure stepped out of the shadows, wearing a long black coat and a sumbrerro-like hat.
"Let me get my spyglass." said Captain Suki. she got it and took a look at what the crew was worried about.
"No need to worry, It's just a 86/60 ship.", she said again. Within minutes the much larger ship was right next to the warriors' ship.
"Hello fellow shippers! just came by to drop off a load!", said the 86/60 ship captain, Code A5 in a cheery voice.
"what load?", asked Suki, clearly annoyed that the 86/60 shippers' ship was larger and made of metal.
"We just picked up several other panda warriors in a single rowboat, a little bit away from a sinking panda ship!", (AN; the ship from the first chapter did sink. sorry, but it had to be done for this chapter to work.) said code A5. "We're giving them to you because you were the closest on our NEW RADAR!" Code A5 said again.
"How did you get a radar, did you steal it?" asked suki again, trying her best not to pound Code A5's face in. (AN; I'm not being mean to Code A5 just thought i'd throw some rivalry in between shippers.)
"No," Code A5 said, still smiling "Unlike you, we invested in things."
"Just send the Panda warriors over!", yelled Suki as she stormed off.
Later.....
"Flamers! we're under attack!", yelled a warrior, as he ran up towards the bow. The PWs got too cocky and got too clase to Fanfic Island and the Flamers spotted them and began throwing flame arrows of flaming!
"Don't worry! as long as you didn't write a story, you're fine!", said a random PW. As soon as he said that, only half of the crew began panicking.
Just then an arrow hit one of the panicking. The PW doubled over and cried out, "ahh! He flamed my story! I'm only a newbie and my story has been FLAMED! AHH!"
Before any one else got hit a defening BOOM was heard. a split second later something hit the beach of fanfic island which caused several Flamers and alot of sand to fly in the air!
This continued until the remaining Flamers went back into their cave of many flames.
Everyone looked back to see a large ship with a flag with an R on it. Soon the hero ship was right next to the warriors'.
Then, someone swung over to the warrior ship. A girl wearing a large hat, like barbossa's from Pirates of the Caribbean(Barbossa ROCKS). Then more swung over. All girls. They all looked the same! but that wasn't what shocked the warriors. it was the noise afterword that shocked them.
"AHHHHH! SO MANY ROZZs! RUN AWAY!" screamed a panda warrior that was dropped of by the 86/60 shippers. her name was Royal Sweetness.
Well that's it for chappie 2. Do i have you on the edge of your seat? If yes, IT ONLY GONNA GET BETTER! XD
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Post by queennicki on Jul 3, 2007 17:09:33 GMT
oooooooh dammit  i only was captain of a ship for one chapter but it sunk i cant keep anything. LOL OH NO ROOZZZZIIIIESSS!!! that was a cool chapter, please continue! |
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 3, 2007 17:13:19 GMT
YEAH! The one that's really me could be the captain, and ... I'LL HAVE A REALLY AWESOME HAT OR SOMETHING! SO EVERYONE KNOWS WHO I AM!
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Post by flighter on Jul 3, 2007 18:57:13 GMT
Okay all you people reading my TOTALLY AWSOME STORY. as you all know, Every great story needs an Evil villan. If you have ever knew the name of a spammer, flamer, or troll, give me the name and what he/she did to get himself/herself banned. then i'll choose one and have that person as the main villan. Thank you for your time. See ya the next time i post! 8)
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 3, 2007 20:47:41 GMT
Mayrock!! I wasn't around when he was the forum spammer, but Mayrock should DEFO be your main villain. He made about 16 pity threads when he got banned and stuff, made multiple accounts, spammed a lot of random crap, and was a general nuisance. I don't know his whole screen name, but Mayrock is enough.
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Post by flighter on Jul 3, 2007 21:31:57 GMT
Mayrock...I've heard that name somewhere...Anywho, That is a good suggestion Rozzie! If all the other spammers aren't as bad as the one you suggested he'll probably be the main villan!
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Post by Shwoo on Jul 4, 2007 9:33:43 GMT
Mayrock's a girl, and fluffles the troll might be a better villian, as fluffles was intending to annoy people.
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Post by flighter on Jul 4, 2007 14:35:39 GMT
good, good! Anymore suggestions? No? okay then. All suggestions are in. i'll have to choose between mayrock and fluffles.
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Post by ♥Comet..Adie♥ on Jul 4, 2007 19:36:23 GMT
Your not going to use either.
This sounds harsh,but you werent here for either of them, therefor, you shouldnt even have the chance to use them. Plus, It's against the fourm rules to bash other members. Even using them as a villian in a story about the fourm. How would you like to have someone bashing you even after you've gone?
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Post by RohaHat on Jul 4, 2007 21:12:46 GMT
Well, she was annoying. Anyway, let's make up a villain instead! Sir Spamalot or something.
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Post by flighter on Jul 5, 2007 2:57:30 GMT
That sounds good rozzie!
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i only was captain of a ship for one chapter but it sunk 
