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Post by Numbuh 278 on Mar 20, 2007 1:07:15 GMT
Showering rain drowns her in everything, And thunder keeps her heart beating The sun holds a small light in her eye, but the moon takes it away Wind carries her throughout the day, and clouds block her way Warmth holds her together, while the cold keeps ice around her dying heart And she's falling just the way the earth made it to be, Broken like the waves of a raging sea - I wrote this just now.. its also on DA -> www.deviantart.com/deviation/51255412/
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Post by DR. INTOXICÅTION on Mar 20, 2007 1:34:27 GMT
Wow, that was good Kimi. Your poem sounds like something out of a HIM song.
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Post by Numbuh 278 on Mar 20, 2007 1:35:13 GMT
^______^ Thanks!
And really? ^-^ x3 thanks
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Post by numberunknown on Mar 20, 2007 22:39:40 GMT
Wow. Great poem!
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Post by Numbuh 278 on Mar 21, 2007 0:19:41 GMT
Thanks ^______^
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