My Poem

[chrissy12345]

At Last

At last it had happened,
It had happened at last,
At last it had happened,
And it happened so fast.

I opened the window,
And in flew my soul,
I opened the window,
And my soul had big holes.

Someone had done it,
They had done it at last,
They had done it so well,
That no hours had past.

They put me through my misery,
That caused me such pain,
They had done it for me,
So i didn't die in vain.


My friends said it was sad so what do you think?

[number9]

Yeah, it's sad. =/ But really good! ^______^ I like it! =D

[chrissy12345]

thank you! im usually more cheery though.

[numberunknown]

*claps hands* yay! i am a freak, so very cheerful, but my poetry is like... heartbreaking

your poem rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[chrissy12345]

Thank you *giggles* im a freak too *giggles again but weirder*

[xala]

wow mewmew, you are deep! Great poem! *looks at ur sig and avatar* wow 1/5 too!

[chrissy12345]

Thanks numbuh 1000 002! ur 1/5 too i see! ooh nice mice! i edited it because it said "It happened so fast." but then it said "That hours had past." so it is different now.