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Post by Celra on Sept 24, 2006 0:15:48 GMT
Please space it! @__@ its so hard to read But from what I read it seems good.
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Post by shimaiandinfinity on Sept 24, 2006 0:34:14 GMT
ok I'll delete the first post and then just put it in parts here's the first part:
ok so this is my fanfic. it's WAY LONG! AND I DO NOT OWN XIAOLIN SHOWDOWN OR ANYTHING I ONLY MADE A FANFIC.!!! XIAOLIN SHOWDOWN IS OWNED BY IT'S RIGHTFUL CREATORS!!!!!! NOT BY ME!!! OK?! and fana and blade and yugasa and the ultimate are me and my friend's fan charries OK? so here it is:
*Xiaolin theme plays in altered version* The young Xiaolin monks and the Heylin worriers have faced many difficult tasks…some alone others together they even faced time itself but let it be known that the Xiaolin monks nor the Heylin worriers would think to meet any evil greater than that…………… *starts at Jack's house* Jack: *groan* I don't what kind of robot to build I'm running out of ideas… Wuya: Running out? When did you start good ideas? Jack: I said ideas…not good id-HEY! My ideas are just as good as yours! Oh wait but you don't have any ideas do you?! Wuya: Grrrrrrrrrr! Well I- *skip to part were Fana and Silver Blade are coming back* Fana: Oh boy! Jack's gonna love all these new Shen Gong Wu! Especially the Wiki Wi Wu! Silver Blade: The Whatty-what Wu? Fana: You'll see later and are still holding that big bag?! Silver blade: Yes…and it very heavy did we have to buy every puzzle box in the store? Fana: Yes, it's essential that Wuya be found a partner as soon as possible… *they come to Jack's house* Fana: Hi Jack! Hey Wuya! Look! I got a lot of Shen Gong Wu this time! Especially the Wiki Wi Wu!
is that what you mean?
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Post by Celra on Sept 24, 2006 0:38:32 GMT
Yeah.
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Post by shimaiandinfinity on Sept 26, 2006 2:28:57 GMT
here's part 2:
Jack: The whatty-wh- Fana: what- what I know but let explain it allows the user to gather the power of island natives! Oooooo! Creepy! *everyone just stares* …or they turn anyone into a vapid "Hippity Hop" island style…*grins* Wuya: So I messed up but do you have to start using every word I say? Silver Blade: What about the way you started saying "So" in that way like for example…*plays tape* Jack:…That's my nickname you know Wuya: It is SO not…*turns off* see…oh and here we're gonna try to find you a partner…*starts looking through puzzle boxes and skip to Xiaolin monks* Kimiko: FIRE! Hiya! *breaks vases and screeches creating a silver metal trail that shines* Omi: Hyah! I am most impressed with myself I did better than I hope to have trailed my tongue on the ground! Rai: Whoa! *grunts* YAH!! …whoa, I hope you mean you did better than your tongue thought to cover the ground… Kimiko: *jumps up than down* Rai, that still doesn't make any sense… Rai: Well…I wasn't really preparrrrrrrrrrrrrrred! Oomph! *The Xiaolin warriors are all lying on the ground dizzy and Master Fung approaches* Omi: Oooo, my bones are most crushed by your heavy weight Clay! I believe that you should-*gasp* Master Fung! I…you…It was all Raimundo's fault! Rai: Grrrrrrr!! Kimiko: Actually Omi is right it was all your fault…
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Post by kiviethecat on Dec 3, 2006 8:33:02 GMT
Do I have to remind you... She's only "Silver Blade" when she's in the cat costume! Otherwise, her name is Katie.
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Post by shimaiandinfinity on Dec 3, 2006 8:58:56 GMT
I know...I wrote it a long time ago so...well i don't anyone's reading this but I'll put up the next part...
…*back at Jack's house* Silver Blade: Oh…a puzzle box…*click, click* and my prize is…-DARN IT! Still no mask! *throws box to Fana* Fana: Joudelle flip! FIRE! Next… Silver Blade: Sorry there is no more left… Fana: *perks up* OK THEN! To the Shen Gong Wu! Jack? Wake up! *takes Shen Gong Wu* Bullfrog Bumbler! *loud noise* JACK WAKE UP! …AND YOU TOO WUYA!!!! *they both wake up startled* Jack and Wuya: AHHH! *look at each other* AHH!! What did you do that for? Now to test out the Wiki Wi Wu! WIKI WI WU! *changes Wuya* WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!!! Silver Blade: Wow, she looks a lot better in island form! Hehehehehe… Jack: *stares blankly* nothing special…hmm…my Jack-bots need work… Wuya: GRRRRRR!!! NOBODY WILL RECONGINZE ME!!! Fana: Relax, GOLDEN TIGER CLAWS!! ………Master Fung: You must remember young monks that not every visit by Jack Spicer and Wu-ya will mean they want to fight… Omi: Oh yes Master I understand that not every…*Fana and "Island" Wuya come in through Golden Tiger Claws* -gasp- prepare to battle!!! *Master Fung gives Omi a look* I mean…um what do you want?!
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