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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Aug 23, 2006 16:32:46 GMT
This is a Camp Lazlo fic i'm writing on how I think Patsy met [ and fell in love with]Lazlo.I haven't completed it yet so I'll only type up what I've written so far. You may give me feed back, comments, and ways on how to improve the story if you wish . But just one thing, NO CAMP LAZLO BASHING! Thank you.
My Heart Only belongs to You
By: prettywitchiusaka
It was a quiet night on the south side of Leaky Lake, the home of Acorn Flatts, home of the Squirrl Scouts. In the tiny cabins, all the girls slept peacefully in their own dreamlands, all except for one, Patsy Smiles. The pink haired mongoose lay silently in her bed, the moonlight dancing on her delicate face. she watched as her two cabin mates, a redhead giraffe named Nina, and a blonde alligator named Gretchen, slept peacefully without a care. Patsy envied them since she just couldn't fall asleep that night, and the problom wasn't ensomnia, far from it, the problom was that she was thinking of her one true love, Lazlo.
Lazlo was a cute, happy Brazilian Spider Monkey on the other side of Leaky Lake at a camp known as Camp Kidney. Patsy truly loved him, no he wasn't exceedingly talented or rich, but he wasn't a shmoe either. She loved his optimisim and happy-go-luckiness, she loved his cutness and his smile, but most of all, she loved that sweet innocence within him.
The pink haired mongoose then reached for her night stand and opened the top drawer, she pulled out a neatly folded hankerchif. after unfolding it, she looked at it dreamingly.
Patsy- Oh Lazlo, I'll never forget that day.
Flashback Four years ago, June 1st 2002, Acorn Flatts had recently finished construction, and was ready to have it's first campers. Inside the medium sized bus were at least thirty-nine girls, all of different species, awaiting their arrival to Acorn Flatts. Some of them shared gossip, other read magazines to weigh out their anxiety of getting there, but Patsy simply stretched her anxiety out by talking her thoughts out to her two best friends, Nina and Grtechen.
Patsy- This is so exciting! i've never been to an all girl camp before, this is gonna be the best.
Nina- Agreed Patsy, there's nothing like camping with friends, and a few good books.
Gretchen- I just hope we get there soon so I can eat.
A second later, their camp leader arose from her seat on the still moving bus, her name was Miss Jane Doe, a sweet, pure, innocent blonde haired doe who was quite ditzy. she was now 12 cm away from her seat to make an announcement.
Miss Doe- Now girls, we should be arriving in about twelve minutes, so I want you to unpack as quickly as possible, that way we can have our picnic with the Bean Scouts!
Nina- Oh great, we're gonna have boys for neighbors.
Gretchen- That does suck, but it suck even more if one of us liked one of them.
Patsy- That would suck, good thing it's not gonna happen to me.
Little did she know that her words would be proven wrong within a few hours.
To be continued...
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Post by debaserschick on Aug 24, 2006 11:58:06 GMT
Great fanfic! Can't wait for the next chapter! and Yay another CL fan!
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Post by Numbuh Googol on Aug 25, 2006 17:41:51 GMT
Ooh, nice fic! Will you be posting this on FanFiction.Net when it's done?
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Aug 25, 2006 19:42:46 GMT
Thanks for the replys, I appreciate them. To answer Numbuh Googol's question, I won't, but I'll still keep updating here. Anyway, here's the next part.
A half hour later after unpacking, the girls sat at the welcome meeting to hear they're scout mistress give her speech.
Miss Doe- Hello squirrl scouts, and welcome to the grand opening of Acorn Flatts. you all know me as Miss Doe, and I'm sure I'll get to know all of your names soon enough. but for today, I think it's important that we meet our neighbors, so without further ado, I give you Scout Master Lompus and the bean scouts!
From behind the curtian came out at least thirty- eight boy scouts in hand me down uniforms, a long necked moose[ Lumpus], and his obediant assistant, a small banana slug named Slinkman. Lompuses name was actually pronounced Lumpus, but he diddn't seem to mind at all, it was quite obvious starting to crush on the scatter brained doe.
Slinkman- Alright scouts we'll be having lunch first, so if you'll kindly sit down and we can get started.
Gretchen-Ew, we have to eat lunch with these loser?
Nina- Could be worse.
Patsy & Gretchen- Whatever.
For a period of what almost seemed like forever, the bean scouts and the squirrl scouts ate quietly, staring loathingly at eachother. Patsy really wanted to crush them and show them who's boss, but soon enough, her view on one boy would change.
To be continued...
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Aug 29, 2006 14:10:03 GMT
Here's the next part for all those impatient.
One hour later, they were ready for their first game. Miss Doe's assistant, Miss Rubella Mucus[ the game's referie], stood in front of two rows. On the left side were boys, and on the right side were the girls.
Miss Mucus- Alright you little piggies listen up, our first game is ' Mudball'. The same rules of ' Dodgeball' apply, hits can only go waist high, direct blows to the face gets a five minute penalty. any line crossing and the game's automatically over, last one standing on either side wins.
Both teams patiently awaited the warthog's signal to start.
Miss Mucus- Ready, set, go!
With the sound of her loud voice going off like a bell, both sides began to attack the opposing team. The boys threw the balls like they were professionals, the girls however were a little less skilled at throwing balls, but were more professional when it came to dodging. Fortunatly, both teams could easily knock the other team down, the girls began to fall one by one until Patsy was left standing alone.
At first, she thought she may hav won, but she soon saw herself standing face to face with the last remaining boy, rather bullish looking platypus.
Platypus- One last girl huh? Why don't you give up and go home crying to your mommy?
Patsy- No way, I'm not scared of a dork like you.
This angered him alot.
Platypus- That's it missy, I'm not going easy on ya!
To be continued...
I think we all know who the platypus is, it seemed like a good shoedown to me as I was concepting it, Patsy vs. Edward, anyway, I'll write more soon before school starts.
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Post by delightfuliza on Aug 29, 2006 14:16:33 GMT
great fic! I'm a CL fan too! ^^ nice job, can't wait for the next part.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Aug 29, 2006 16:13:54 GMT
Thank you very much numbuh 617[Isa].
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Aug 31, 2006 19:37:04 GMT
Here's the next part, we're so close to the PatsyxLazlo fluffiness!
The platypus began to throw rapidly at the young mongoose, almost as if he'd never stop. At first, it seemed impossible for Patsy to stay out of harm's way, but luckily for her, being a purple belt in karate and an expert gymnast helped her from being hit by the mudballs coming towards her.
Patsy- That the best you got platypus?!
Platypus- oh I'll show you what I've got.
With an evil grin on his face, the platypus threw another ball at her. This time to avoid impact, Patsy fell to the ground and covered her head as the ball flew past her. As she went to get up, the platypus threw another ball in her direction, Nina however, noticed.
Nina- Patsy, look out!
But it was too late, by the time Patsy heard her friend's voice, the ball made contact with her face, splattering all over it. The impact was so forceful that it knocked her onto her back and onto the ground. After a minute of silence, she sat up and wiped the mud off her eyes. When she opened her eyes, she saw that the platypus was laughing at her
Platypus- [laughs] I'm sorry, it's just... you look so ridiculous.[ continues to laugh]
By this point, most of the boys chimed in with their laughter. Patsy felt so emberassed, she felt as if her entire world had crumbled upon her, completly angery at the boys and at herself, she stood up and fled into the near by meadow. Hot tears were streaming down her face, what she diddn't know was that she was being followed by a Brazilian Spider Monkey.
To be continued...
I know I make it seem like no one else is worried about Patsy, but you have to understand that I'm trying to make it a moment that's completly between Patsy and Lazlo. And no I don't know if Patsy's in karate, I made it up, she's very athletic and that's what led to that concept. Anyway, until next time, see ya.
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Post by Prettywitchiusaka on Sept 4, 2006 13:04:24 GMT
Here's the last part, prepare for the ultra PatsyxLazlo fluffiness!
After wondering around for about three minutes, Patsy finally found a large boulder to sit on. Hot tears were still running down her cheeks and mud still covered her face, it was then that she heard a small, yet sweet sounding voice.
Excuse me, are you hurt at all?
She diddn't even look up at him, she knew it was a Bean Scout and diddn't want to have anything to do with him, she would not let herself be humiliated by a boy again. It was the same Brazilian Spider Monkey who went to check up on her. He decided to sit down beside the mongoose and comfort.
Patsy- Just leave me alone.
Monkey- Why? I just wanna know if you're alright.
Patsy- Sure you do, then you'll just throw another mudball at me! You boys are all alike.
Monkey- No I won't, I don't do that to girls very often, I just think most boys can't help themselves, to them it's fun to tease girls. Heck, I can't help myself sometimes!
Tho tears still stream down her face, Patsy couldn't hrlp but giggle at the silly boy, he was quite sweet and charming, but she still didddn't look at him.
Monkey- Hey, you still have mud on your face.
Patsy- Yeah well, I was planning to wash it off later.
Monkey- here, use my hankie.
Patsy- What? Are you sure?
Monkey- Positive.
Patsy was amazed, he was going to incredible lengths to help someone, and a complete stranger at that, scratch sweet, he was extremley sweet.
She began to wipe her face with the soft, clean hankie.
Patsy- Thank you very... much.
It was at that moment that she looked at him. Patsy was dazed now, he was a cute orange monkey with two of the sweetest eyes she had ever seen, not only was he sweet and silly, but he was really cute too. The pink haired mongoose finally managed to break the trance she was in and say something.
Patsy- You know, you're actually pretty cute.
Monkey- Really? Thanks. Say, I don't know your name, what is it?
Patsy- Patsy, Patsy Smiles.
Monkey- Patsy hey? It's a unique name, I like it!
She blushed a deep shade of pink at this comment.
Patsy- Thank you, what's your name?
Before he could answer, a rather loud, indian sounding voice was heard.
Offscreen voice- LAZLO!
Standing five yards away was a pink elephant who wore the same uniform as the monkey, obviously he was a friend of his[ the monkey].
Elephant- I came to tell you that we are going back to Camp Kidney early.
Monkey- Okay, I'll be there in a minute Raj.
Raj- Fine have it your way.
Patsy- Lazlo, so that's your name, huh?
Lazlo- Yeah, my mom thought it was a cute name. Well, see ya Patsy!
with that, he ran off to join his friend.
Patsy- Oh, wait, you forgot your hankie!
Lazlo- Just keep it.
By this point, he was so far away it almost seemed like a dream. Patsy stared at the now dirty hankie, the last few words he said to her still echoing in her head. it was at this point that she realized something, a feeling like no other, she'd fallen in love, truley fallen in love with a silly, sweet, cute little monkey named Lazlo.
Patsy- Lazlo.
a draemy trance like state began to take over her as she thought about him.
End Flashback
Patsy kept staring at the hankie, as if still recalling memories.
Patsy- oh Lazlo, that's my most fondest memory of you, I'll never forget you.
From underneath her pillow, she pulled out a small, hand made plushie of Lazlo with a string in the back. Playfully, Patsy pulled the string.
Plushie- I love you my sweet mongoose.
Patsy- And I love you my sweet monkey.
With that, she began to drift off into a peaceful slumber, hankie in one hand, and plushie on her pillow. A dreamy trance like state began to take her over like it had done that fateful day, dreaming about her one true love.
wether it took years to make him fall for her, or even if he never loved her, one thing remained clear, her heart only belonged to him. The End
Woah, never thought it go on this long, either way, Patsy's one of my fav. Camp Lazlo characters[ aside of Lazlo and Raj]. Sorry about the angery no bashing post at the begining, it;s just that some people on another fourm were really bashing the character of Lazlo, and it really erked me. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed this as much as I did writing it, I'm planing to do something for next week, so stay tooned!
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