fhujeth
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Post by fhujeth on Nov 17, 2007 22:23:22 GMT
I want some feedback, please on how this is coming. I know there is a lot of problems with it already, but I hope to refine them all when I begin digitally redoing it... Frame one: Numbuh 86 is showing a kid in training or new operative (does it matter?) around. (they are now entering the girls bathroom) I'm still working on what she's saying... Frame Two: 86 is still explaining. This time breifly explaining things about missing soaps and how it's getting agitating they keep disappearing. In the background you see 859 (my oc) eating the soaps... Frame Three: Now realising what is going on, Numbuh 86 is shocked that the one who is doing it (is not only a girl) but actually eating them instead of stealing them... S.O.A.P.S (Stupid Operative Ate Pretty Soap) The rest of the scenes... is going to be 86 chasing 859... I hope to have a lot of action... Any comments is loved ;
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