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Post by numbuh17 on Nov 15, 2003 23:20:02 GMT
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Nov 15, 2003 23:24:33 GMT
Looks great! *Is envious of your artisitc talents*
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Post by numbuh17 on Nov 15, 2003 23:27:46 GMT
You really like it? I was worried it was kinda dingy. I wanna color her too. But the thing is, she was gonna have red hair, but now 86 has red hair!!!
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Nov 15, 2003 23:30:52 GMT
Aw, go ahead. You can make is a dimmer red. When I saw it I imagined her with it. ^^
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Post by numbuh17 on Nov 15, 2003 23:33:30 GMT
Really? that's so cool! you're a psykik!
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Nov 15, 2003 23:36:33 GMT
Heh, not really. She just looked like she ought to be one.
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Post by numbuh17 on Nov 15, 2003 23:39:09 GMT
You wanna hear a bit about the fic?
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Nov 15, 2003 23:40:21 GMT
Love to!
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Post by numbuh17 on Nov 15, 2003 23:46:48 GMT
She's introduced in Opertaion NOISE (Noisy Operatives Interupt Studying Elite). Abby has stolen one of Cree's cds, and plays it in the Treehouse. All the other operatives like it, and each in turn, comes in, says its cool, and turns it up a littlle bit (or in Wallys case, a lot) Meanwhile, 2 doors down, Miranda (a teenager) is at her desk, trying to study for her Exams. Eventually she comes over and shouts at them to be quiet. They refuse, and she takes themon. They start to kick her butt, but she ducks out, and calls the police. The police come, the KND are about to ight them (By now the whole city can hear the cd) Abby turns it up once more and it explodes, leaving there faces black, end episode.
Aha, you say, but if she's a teenager?
Read on!
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Post by numbuh17 on Nov 15, 2003 23:50:30 GMT
I don't have a title for the next part. But it starts out at the DCFDTL house. They've just finished making another age ray (thank someone they had the forethought to copy the schematics). This time, they're going to use it to spy on the KND.
That's where Miranda comes in. They turn her into an 11 year old, and she convinces the KND that she's a transfer operative and gets to spying..
But the mission isn't alll it's cracked up to be, and iranda starts to remember how much better life was when she was 11.
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Post by Stardrifter 8 on Nov 16, 2003 0:08:08 GMT
Oooooo! That sounds good! Tell me when you're done, and I'll be sure to read it! ;D
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Post by numbuheightbitstar on Nov 16, 2003 0:36:36 GMT
The character looks cute, if anything. As for the story itself though.... the first part sounds like it could be an episode of the show almost. I didn't read the second part because I don't want the whole thing spoiled for me.
Woohoo! Bring back that age-changing ray!
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Post by numbuh17 on Nov 16, 2003 0:48:39 GMT
Yeah, the first part was supposed to be very episode-like, partly as an intro, mostly as practice for me so I can get a handle on the KNDs caharacters, ya know? I mean, wouldn't it be aweful if I just jumped right in without any practice?
If there's one thing I prize in my fics, its my character development.
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Post by numbuheightbitstar on Nov 16, 2003 1:01:23 GMT
Yea, I know how ya feel. My first fic was Operation: RAYGUN, and it too was nearly close to being an episode of the show (save for my tendancy to be more dramatic than comical). I also consider it the best fanfic I ever did, mostly because ever since "Best-Worst Scenario" my portrayal of the characters has always been slightly off somehow.
But ah well... lead them in, then break them in I always say.... not that I even know what that means but whatever...
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Post by numbuh17 on Nov 16, 2003 1:07:55 GMT
Good advice none the less.
Oh, by the way, I liked your fic, 'The Real Truth'! Dark, but cool!
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