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Post by Raiku (Numbuh 1059) on Apr 27, 2007 2:36:18 GMT
Prologue:
... ... ... ...
Hello, let me introduce myself... I am Rowan,
but sometimes, calls me, the Pokémon Prof.
In this fanfic, Nigel Uno is going on his 1st
ever adventure in this inhabited world of Pocket Monsters (or Pokemon for short.)
And Nigel's rival, Chad Dickson, was in it, too!
Also, my assistant is Rachel (Numbuh 362).
Also starring...
Hoagie Gilligan
Kuki Sanban
Wally Beetles
Abby Lincoln
Matt (Numbuh 101)
Fanny Fulbright
Takumi Takashi (Numbuh 1059 (Glitchboy))
and
RhypeRiolu (Numbuh 49807, Glitchboy's Colleague)
*Note: NUMBUH 49807 is made up by me.*
So, are you really ready for adventure?
Nigel's journey awaits!
Let's go!
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NOTE: Mr. Warburton
owns Codename: Kids Next Door and
Nintendo/Game Freak/Creatures owns Pokemon (Video game)
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Post by Raiku (Numbuh 1059) on Apr 28, 2007 1:12:03 GMT
Chapter 1: The Adventure Begins!
Nigel's phone rang!
It was from Rowan!
"I have something to tell you! Come to my lab immediately!" said Rowan.
So he went to Sandgem Town to visit his lab.
Suddenly, Chad appeared at Route 201, along with 2 Starlys!
Chad said, "Well, that KNDoofus had no Pokemon! What are you gonna do, Ni-jynx?"
Just then, Nigel spotted a briefcase!
It contained 2 pokemon! (It was used to be 3, but Chad stole 1.
"Hmmm... Turtwig, Chimchar, or Piplup?" he thought.
Since Chad chose Chimchar, Nigel took Turtwig.
So, the battle started as Nigel commanded Turtwig with Tackle.
Turtwig and Chimchar defeated the 2 wild starlys.
After the battle... Prof. Rowan came alongside Numb...er... Rachel McKenzie.
"Come to my lab!" said Prof. Rowan.
So, Nigel and Chad went to Sandgem Town's Pokemon Laboratory
in Sinnoh.
"I see you took our pokemon from the briefcase that I forgot to
bring back." said Rowan.
Nigel explained, "Why? Are you going to do something?"
Chad replied, "Well, If it's stealing I think that KNDork is gonna
be punished!"
"Nonsense!" Prof. Rowan replied, "Maybe... If you want your
pokemon, take it, it's yours now, Mr. Uno and Mr. Dickson.
Plus, Prof. Oak called, He wants you and Chad to run an errand
for me."
So Rowan handed 2 pokedexes to Nigel and Chad.
"If you want to have a big adventure, I want you to complete
your pokedex. Go on! Go find some interesting pokemon!" said
Rowan.
"Yep. Since you have your pokedex, If you want to own other
pokemon, you have to catch them." said Rachel.
"First, I'll show you."
So a wild BIDOOF appeared.
Rachel sent out Piplup.
Piplup used Bubble.
Bidoof's HP was like 44%.
"OK! This is a pokeball, It's a device to catch pokemon."
said Rachel as she throws the ball.
"C'mon!"
A few seconds later, Bidoof was caught!
"So now, As a free offer, I'll give you 10 pokeballs for each of you."
said Matt as he handed out 10 pokeballs for Nigel and 10 for Chad.
"Hey Matt, Where should get those fancy Watches?" said Nigel.
"You mean the Poketch?" answered Matt, "In Jubilife City!"
"But, you need 3 coupons to get one!"
"OK! Let's go Chad! Uh... Chad? Where are you?" said Nigel. "I believe Chad Dickson left" said a Man with a Black cap and
a red shirt and jeans. "He is at Jubilife TV, Silly! But soon, Chad has to leave to Oreburgh City for his 1st gym battle."
"Who are you, stranger?" said Rowan. "Well, Allow ME to introduce myself." said the man.
"I'm Takumi Takashi!" said Takumi. "But you can call me either Glitchboy, or Numbuh 1059."
"1059?" said Nigel. "You're the new operative?"
"Yes, I was assigned to Operation S.I.N.N.O.H.: Seeking Interesting
New Nature Of Heroes."
"Uhhh.... That means it's about seeking a new hero's new adventure." said Matt. "Yes! Hey! I saw you on Operation Z.E.R.O.!"
said Glitchboy. "I saw that movie last night on Jubilife TV!"
"Since when did Op. ZERO came in Sinnoh?" said Nigel. "Uhhh... LAST NIGHT! It was a premiere after Sinnoh Now."
"Oh. So come with me! I'll be taking you and Rachel to take on this new adventure!" said Nigel. "Really?" said Glitchboy, blushing in tears... acts like Brock... "OK!"
So Nigel, Rachel and Glitchboy form the group "RIDERS," because
they ride bikes!
As the Riders get to Route 202, Numbuhs 2 and 4 arrived.
"Woah! What's that!" said Wally. "It can't be!" said Hoagie. "It IS!" said Numbuh 49807 (that numbuh came up from my Trainer Card.)
The Riders have arrived.
"Nigel Uno, Reporting for du... ty?" said Nigel with a laidback english accent.
"Cool! Off to Jubilife City, Nigel?" said Hoagie. "Uhhh... Sure!" Nigel Replied. "And we're getting us Poketches, which short for Pokemon Watches..." said Glitchboy, "And I'm gonna be a star on TV!" said Rachel, "And I'm gonna beat Roark in Oreburgh City Gym!" said Nigel excitedly.
"And Chad already beaten Roark, right?" said Wally. "Well, how did ya know about Chad Dickson?," Glitchboy replied.
And Hoagie and Wally said... "The News!"
"OK..." said Glitchboy.
So the Riders waved goodbye to Hoagie, Wally and Numbuh 49807
as they move on to Jubilife City.
What could be next? Find Out!
HINT: Kuki and Abigail are already on Jubilife TV for The talk show,
"Training 101" and Fanny is waiting at the Jubilife Pokemon Center.
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Post by King Bowser Kuppa on Apr 28, 2007 2:27:58 GMT
I like it, and make him pick Turtwig!
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Post by fox on Apr 28, 2007 6:36:52 GMT
Dude.. you're doing a good job and the fic is great but each chapter is short.
Listen, you need to make each chapter longer because then it will boring if you type short chaps. Another thing, put more details like emotions. Write more not just random stuff. If you need examples on how to write a fic, look at Alpha Lion. Anyways, you're doing a great job, just post longer chapters.
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Post by Raiku (Numbuh 1059) on Apr 28, 2007 12:18:52 GMT
OK, but I'll put the first 2 chapters together and write another one.
It will make this the REAL chapter 1.
EDIT: Now, You can see the whole chapter one now. Just look under
the prologue.
Tomorrow, I'll be working on Chapter 2.
And since KBK said I'll be taking guest stars...
I'll be on that fanfic, and of course, Numbuh 49807 (made it up
myself.)
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Post by King Bowser Kuppa on Apr 28, 2007 23:41:23 GMT
You should take guest-stars I'm a fellw PKMN fan!
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Post by Raiku (Numbuh 1059) on Apr 29, 2007 23:37:25 GMT
Chapter 2: A Starly-Eyed Surprise!
Nigel headed to Route 202 when suddenly... "LOOK! There's Starly" said Glitchboy when he spotted this Black starling bird. Numbuh 49807 followed Nigel and the Riders. "What's Wrong?" said Numbuh 49807. "I know! Let's catch this Starly!" replied Nigel excitedly But first, GO TURTWIG!"
Turtwig popped out of the Poke Ball! "Turtwig!" cried Turtwig. Nigel commanded Turtwig, "Use Tackle!" Turtwig tackled Starly 2 times! Now... It's time to Capture Starly!
"Pokeball, GOOOO!" yelled Nigel as he threw an empty pokeball. The ball hit Starly and now...
... The Starly that he wanted is about to be caught... 4 seconds later... Dong!
"I... I-I-I did it!" Nigel happily said that... "I CAUGHT A STARLY!" Glitchboy and Numbuh 49807 gave a round of applause... Rachel thanked Nigel and went back to assist the Professor.
Hoagie, Kuki, Wally and Abby came and Kuki told Nigel and Glitchboy, "Good Job! Come to the TV Studio in Jubilife City! We're Waiting!"
"Is it an Interview about how Nigel caught his Starly?" said Glitchboy. "Uh-huh," said Abby.
So all of Sector V and Glitchboy headed to the TV station and the Interview was caught.
Later, Nigel stayed with Glitchboy a little longer. "Why are you upset? Isn't this fun?" said Glitchboy. Nigel replied, "Well, I did catch a Starly, but... that Starly looked sad when I released it when Numbuhs 2, 3, 4, and 5 left."
Strange... but now, they are headed to get their Poketches. Fanny was standing by the entrance of the Pokemon Center. "Excuse me" said Nigel, "WE need to go into the Pokemon Center." "OK... but when you get out from this building, you see those 3 clowns?" said Fanny to both Nigel and Glitchboy. "You have to give the correct answer to their riddles, Got THAT?"
"YES, MA'AM!" they replied.
"Welcome to the Pokemon Center" said Nurse Joy. "We rest fainted and tired pokemon. Should we put your pokemon to rest?" "Yeah, Can you heal my Starly and my Turtwig?" said Nigel.
"And my Shinx?" said Glitchboy. "Certainly. Please wait..." the Nurse replied.
So now, Nigel and Glitchboy had to get the answers from those 3 clowns.
"Hi! I'm the Poketch Co. Campaign Clown!" said the Clown. Here's the Question, "Which level can traded pokemon obey after getting the 4th gym badge?"
A. Lv30
B. Lv50
or C. Lv70
Nigel answered A. WRONG!, but Glitchboy answered B, and... "That's correct! Here's Coupon #1." said the Clown as he gave the Coupon to Glitchboy. "OK! Next Question is for Nigel.
Which KND operative was your leader during basic training?"
Nigel answered, "Numbuh 100." ....and "That my friend is correct, you get the 1st coupon!"
"All right" shouted Nigel. Now they are looking for the 2nd clown. He's next to GTS.
"OK! 2nd question's for both of you!" said the 2nd clown.
"I'm a Pokemon, I have wings, I came from the Hoenn region. Who am I?"
Nigel and Glitchboy answered, "Beautifly?"
"That's Right!" Now, look for the final clown next to the Poketch company!
Now they're headed to the 3rd and final clown! "Final Question, Who is the Gym Leader who is
the son of the Oreburgh City Gym Leader?" so both Nigel and Glitchboy guessed, "uhhh.... Roark?"
... NO! One more chance or no coupon! HINT: It starts with B and he was in Canalave City.
"Oh, is it Byron?" said Glitchboy. "How did you know, you're correct, both of you gets coupon #3!" said the clown. Now show the president of the company that clown 2 was mentioning about. So Nigel and Glitchboy went to the President of the Poketch Company.
"Let's see... 1, 2, 3! You got it! Here you go, guys!" said the President as he gave the guys
each a Poketch. It has a Clock, A calculator, and more!
By the time they got out, their pokemon were healed! "Thanks and Take Care!" said the Nurse.
Now they are headed to Oreburgh City.
"Look, there's the cave." said Nigel. So he and GB went to the cave. It's dark... suddenly a lot of Geodude appeared! "Let's go, team! We are sooo wasting time!" said GB.
Later, GB and Nigel went to the gym where Chad showed up. Chad told the guys, "Hey! If you want to have the Coal Badge, you have to find Roark, first! None of your lousy Kids Next Dolts have to do with Rock-Types!"
So Nigel and GB went to 49807, "Please, call me RhypeRiolu or should I say, Rhyphy!" said 49807 a.k.a. Rhyphy. "OK, Rhyphy! Where's ROARK?" asked Nigel. Then Rhyphy answered, "I think he's in the mines which is south of the city."
So... they went to the mines called out, "Roark!" 25 times. After a few minutes searching, Roark was sitting. "Hyout... er... Roark? What are you doing, Are you gonna battle us on a 2 on 2 battle?" asked GB. "Well, No, I wanted to battle Nigel Uno." answered Roark. "OK Nigel, let's go to the gym and make sure, you have to beat him seriously."
Then Nigel gasped and then said, "Wait! I have to catch 3 more pokemon! Be right back!"
So... GB and Roark are waiting for 35 minutes, until Nigel opened the door.
Nigel said excitedly, "Look! I caught An Abra, a Shinx, and a... Pikachu?" But Pikachu wasn't on Route 203, but it wandered there along with 2 Bidoofs before Pikachu was caught.
OK, so... let's battle!
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ROARK VS. NIGEL!
Roark sent out Cranidos.
"Go, Starly!" yelled Nigel!
Cranidos used Headbutt! Whoa! That's gonna leave a mark on Starly.
Starly used Tackle, But Cranidos was a rock-type and Rock-Types are Invulnerable to Normal-type moves.
So, "Starly, return!" called Nigel and he called out Turtwig.
Turtwig used Razor Leaf! Now that's damage!
Cranidos can't get up... Roark called Cranidos to get up... but... Cranidos was unable to battle.
So he withdrew Cranidos and he sent out Geodude! Geodude used defense curl.
Geodude's Defense was sharply raised! Turtwig used Razor leaf. Geodude just got some damage!
So now, Geodude used stealth rock! Now pointy rocks are inflicted on Nigel's Team.
Turwig used the same attack again! Geodude fainted. So now... Nigel was excited if he...
GOT THE COAL BADGE!!!!!!!!!!!!11111111oneone!
"Good Job, Nigel Uno, You got the badge!" said Roark.
NOW WHAT? Will Mr. Uno and GB get badge #2? When? Where? How? Find out!
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Post by King Bowser Kuppa on Apr 30, 2007 0:59:32 GMT
Cool chapter!And what format would you want for g-stars?
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Post by fox on Apr 30, 2007 1:17:19 GMT
Cool!
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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Apr 30, 2007 15:43:28 GMT
That's great Fan Fiction! xD
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Post by Raiku (Numbuh 1059) on May 2, 2007 1:59:21 GMT
Chapter 3: Nigel Gets Pachirisu!
On their way to Floaroma Town, Nigel and GB saw the Cutest Pokemon that Numbuh 3 could catch! "It's a squirrel!" said Glitchboy. "No... wait... It's..." replied Nigel as he sprung out his Pokedex.
The Pokedex Spoke:
"Pachirisu, An EleSquirrel Pokemon. It makes fur balls that crackle with static electricity. It stores them with berries in tree holes."
"A Pa..chi..risu?" said Nigel, but his eyes can't resist the White Squirrel Pokemon with Blue stripes and its eyes... it's cute! Just then, Chad is standing by the Pachirisu! "Chad? What are you doing?" asked Nigel. "Well, if it isn't that KNDiamond and Pearl with Nigie..." said Chad, "...and Takumi!" said Chad's partner. His name is, Chuckie Cavallaro, who has... a Staravia! "That white-a** punk!" taunted Glitchboy to Chuck. But Nigel, pushed him back. "Whaddidya want?" asked Nigel.
Chad and Chuck are ready for a 2 on 2 battle at Route 204! "We'll be at Floaroma Meadow at 19:25! So Long, Looooseerz!!!!" said Chad as he and his partner are gone. "So... Let's catch a Pachirisu! Gooooooo.... PIKACHU!" yelled Nigel as he released Pikachu!
"Pikachu!" said Pikachu!
Pikachu used Thundershock!
Now... "POKEBALL.... GOOOOOOOOO!" said Nigel.
.. .. ...
Now NIGEL CAUGHT A PACHIRISU!!!
So they headed to Route 204
Now Nigel had to battle with GB against Chad's team.
Chad sent out Chimchar!
Chuck sent out Staravia!
"Go, Turtwig!" yelled Nigel as GB yelled, "Go... Treecko!"
Turtwig and Treecko are Grass-types.
Chimchar used Flamethrower at Turtwig!
IT'S SO DARN SUPER EFFECTIVE! (Turtwig has only 3 hp left.)
Turtwig used Razor Leaf... IT'S NOT VERY EFFECTIVE...
Staravia used Gust! Treecko is really taking damage!
"C'mon, Treecko! Use uhh... Razor Leaf?" said GB.
Too late! Treecko fainted!
"Let's go, Chimchar! Use Iron Tail!" commanded Chad as
Chimchar... used Iron Tail on Turtwig!
Both yelled noooo!
So Nigel sent out Pachirisu and GB gave up and had no usable pokemon! He Blacked out! So Nigel sent out his Pikachu, too!
Nigel commanded Pikachu and Pachirisu, "USE THUNDERSHOCK!"
and They... hit directly!
"Staravia?!" Chuck said. "NOOOOO! WHY IS THIS HAPPENING!!!"
Staravia is unable to battle.
"C'mon! Use Iron Tail Once More, Chimchar!" said Chad.
"Use Iron Tail, Pachirisu!" said Nigel...
WTX? THEY GOT THE SAME ATTACKS!!!!!!!! SO NOW... Chad's Chimchar... fainted. YES! KND has defeated the teen duos!
"I'll get you when it's the last thing I do, especially for that PACHIRISU of yours!" said Chad.
"YEP. BUT IT'S SOOOO CUTE!" Chuck replied.
"CMON LET's CUT THE CUTENESS!" Chad accidently said to him when he ran out to go to... ETERNA CITY?!?!
Well... Chapter 4 is coming... so... TO BE CONTINUED!
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Post by Raiku (Numbuh 1059) on May 3, 2007 1:38:29 GMT
OK, Chapter 4 will be waiting this weekend, i hope, I try to think of Chad being the leader of Galactic Teenz, becuase the Teen ninjas joined forces with Team Galactic! And Nigel was flying solo until he got to Eterna City.
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Post by fox on May 3, 2007 1:40:46 GMT
Cool! Hey, can ya review Alpha Lion?
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Post by Raiku (Numbuh 1059) on May 5, 2007 18:56:58 GMT
OK, but 2nite, I will get chapters 4 to 7.
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Post by faircod1965 on May 5, 2007 20:42:48 GMT
This is a great story, very exciting.
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