a poem called help me!

[queennicki]

this is one of my poems that got into a book.its a sad poem but I hope you like it!

Help Me

today in school i cried
today in school they lied
friends promised not to tell
they said I would stay alive and well
but they told the bullies i couldn't read
the bullies made me beg and plead
the bullies hit me very hard
so hard they left me scarred
they kicked me and hit me with a rock
today in school i died of shock
friends stare at my body now
wishing they could have helped me somehow
their friend, a victim of bullying, they see
they can only remember my last words "help me!"

by Queen Nicki

what do you think?

[debaserschick]

I like it! ^^ Nice job!

[Roxeh]

Sad, but I like it. ^^

[number9]

I really like it; the ending is great and touching! ^_____^

[queennicki]

thank you everyone!