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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2010 3:47:46 GMT
Benjamen 'Ben' and Montgomery 'Monty' are friends as kids but there father is evil this is basically there story.
"Hey Ben, what should we do now?"
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Post by Fernkit on Aug 12, 2010 3:52:13 GMT
Monty Uno is the beloved and cherished son of his evil Father, affecionitly known as Pappy. Benidict Uno is his younger brother, and is despised by his own father. Together, the two work in one of Pappy's numerous Tapioca factories.
" I dunno Monty. Pappy will be awful sore if we go off duty again"
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2010 3:59:04 GMT
The factories were horrible and they worked day to night, except for them. They would then go make dinner with there grandmother who lived with them.
"Come on where is your sense of adventure. Did you leave it back at home?"
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Post by Fernkit on Aug 12, 2010 4:03:12 GMT
There Grandmother was a cranky old women who lived by 19th Century standards. She would often whack Ben on the head with a cane when she was angry.
"No, I didn't. I'm not afraid of anything!"
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2010 4:11:47 GMT
Ben hated it and believed that everybody liked Monty better. His grandmothers sisters died about 2 years earlier.
"Come on then Ben. Or are you chicken?" Monty climbs up a tree and rests on his back staring up at the leaves. He blinks and hears kids in the factories working there butts off.
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Post by Fernkit on Aug 12, 2010 4:25:21 GMT
Monty was loved by most, however one of his grandmother's sisters liked Ben the best. She told Ben all about the greatest cake recipie in the whole world.
"Coming! Wait for meeeeeee!" Ben whines as he climbs up the tree as well. They both look at the factories for a while. Finally, Ben turns to Monty with a glint in his eyes. " Wanna put out one of the humongeous coal fires? "
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2010 4:30:44 GMT
The recipe made his mouth water and he wished he could make one just as good as that. He then decided that he would try cooking when he got older.
"Hmmm brilliant idea you had yet Ben. I say either we need a lot of salt or a bunch of water." He gestures his hands around a lot while talking. His mind reeling on the plans to be made.
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Post by Fernkit on Aug 12, 2010 4:38:07 GMT
The one thing Monty was afraid of, however, was growing up to be exactly like his Pappy. That was the last thing in the world he wanted.
*Salt should be easy enough to get. There's a ton in Pappy's storage room" Ben pointed out, feeling strangly confident.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2010 4:42:38 GMT
Ben liked being in charge, and liked bossing around his brother for this moment. It rarely happened to him. Monty felt glad that he made his brother confident. It eased the thought of him being evil.
"Great we know where to get the salt. Now we need something that goes high enough to drop on top of it." He narrowed his eyes a bit concentrating a bit. He bit his nail and- "Where does pappy keep his piloting stuff?"
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Post by Fernkit on Aug 12, 2010 4:49:04 GMT
"In the back of the coutyard, behind that old tree stump* Ben said, pleased that his orders were followed. He loved being in charge;most people thought he was a weakling or coward. One day, he thought, he would be a powerful leader that evreyone respected.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2010 4:59:08 GMT
Monty wondered when his brother got this confidence. If he used it more he would get more noticed. "Lets go before grandmother starts looking for us." The find the stufff and look hook the salt up under it to drop.
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Post by Fernkit on Aug 12, 2010 5:11:29 GMT
"Allright, in 3, 2,1.......DROP!"Both boys yelled, dropping one ga-jillion tons of salt down the l;argest of the Tapioca Factory's Chimney. They landed the plane without incident. Just as they were about to congragulate each other on a job well done, a familiar voice boomed across the clearing, sending fear into evrey Child.
"BOYS!!!!! WHERE ARE YOU! "
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2010 5:19:40 GMT
Ben's face turned a shade of white. Ben's however became hard and ready to take his punishment. "Right here," he said and stood next to the piloting equipment
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Post by Fernkit on Aug 12, 2010 5:32:47 GMT
"Now Monty.........why did you do that?" Pappy asked angrily, in a scary tone. Ben decided to speak up. He didn't want his older Brother to take the blame for something he did. In a loud voice that suprised Monty, Ben took a deep breath and said firmly. "It was my idea Pappy"
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Post by Deleted on Aug 12, 2010 5:36:43 GMT
"No it wasn't it was mine. I agreed to it and started the machine all Ben did was suggest the idea and told me where the piloting stuff is," spoke up Monty. He didn't like what was going on. Ben couldn't take the punishments lightly.
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