60/362 Thread III

[fangirl4315]

Oh, that one. Well, that's still actiony, because of the operation thingy and stuff. I also like it. You know, I used to invent crazy stories while playing the CN game Operation Graduates. Like, what was Sector V talking about while fighting off the ammo the DCFDTL sent. If Patton and Rachel had their own ship, I wonder what story I had invented.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

I've always wondered what happened on the mission during the online flash game myself, sounds like an interesting project I should consider revisiting one day.

You know to be honest, I'm not entirely sure what could have happened on a mission like that. Perhaps maybe they're defeating a whole pile of ships, and then one ship starts to head towards Patton's. Rachel notices this, and takes the hit for him, crashing into the nearby forest. After they win the battle, Patton rushes down to find Rachel. Although rather bruised up, she is alive and well, but will need medical attention.

[fangirl4315]

Oh yeah. Nice concept. Poor Rachel though. Hmm... I wonder what animal Patton transformed into in op. GRADUATES.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

That's a good question. I remember doing a topic discussion about that once in the second 60/362 thread. My answer was that originally, I thought Patton would turn into a Bob-Cat. But then I thought it would be funnier for him to be turned into something that he thinks is degrating to his position, and that's where I came up with the idea of turning him into a cute little puppy dog.

[fangirl4315]

Awww... puppy dog! So adorable! You're right; it would be funny if he was a puppy dog.

Just read the latest chappie of your story, and I must say, INTENSELY AWESOME! Gotta wait for the next chapter.

BTW, I might update Op. LAST later.

Oh yeah, do you have a YM or an MSN? Just curious.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

I agree. Patton would look adorable as a puppy dog. Especially if he had a cute bark, and would chase stake if someone threw it at him.

Thanks. Chapter nine might take awhile to write, due to the fact that it's a pretty long chapter. But regardless, you can expect it sometime this week.

Oh goodie! Something to look forward to when I get home!

I'm afraid I don't own a YM, or MSN account.

BTW, if you're here later Jam, do you mind if I ask you about something that happens in the last part of teh story? I sort of need a second opinion on this part.

[fangirl4315]

Yeah, Patton as a cute puppy dog; Rachel would probably keep him if he was in that state for a few hours.

Okay. But I'll wait. I bet it'll be another great chapter.

Yeah. I just hope this internet would be fixed or I might not be able to post the new chapters, but I'll try tonight.

Oh, okay. But do you have an email address?

Sure. I'll be on later. And I'll be glad to help you.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

Thanks. I actually remember concepting a story in which Patton got turned into a puppy, and Rachel took him home to keep as a pet. I too have no doubt that he would be a cute puppy dog.

Now for the last section of chapter twelve, Rachel begins to tell Patton that she was being selfish for trying to make sure that the clone didn't take him away from her. Yet at the same time she felt sorry for the clone for later events that happen in chapters ten and eleven.

Should I change this, or is it fine the way it is?

[fangirl4315]

Aww... if you made a story about that, I'd be reading it.

Hmm... sounds alright. Again, I'm not in the lots-of-ideas-zone right now, but what you planned is cool. But maybe there's something else needed to be added.

Oh yeah, what'll happen to Sector V in your story?

Edit: Chapter 12 of Op. LAST is up.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

I just might. You never know.

Thanks. There is a little bit more going on, as the first half of the chapter involves Rachel making her apology to all KND operatives at the convention center, and the second half involves her and Patton coming to ammends about what happened during the final showdown.

As for Sector V, they'll be told of the clone in the next chapter. In being told this information, they're able to forgive Rachel for what they thought were her actions. They also appear breifly at the beginning of chapter twelve.

[fangirl4315]

Okay!

Hmm... alright. I sure think that the operatives would accept her apology, and so will Patton.

Ooh! I can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna check out what happens.

BTW, what do you think of the new chappie of Op. LAST?

[Prettywitchiusaka]

I have no doubt that they will. Rachel isn't a vain or mean person, so I really can't see the KND operatives being mad at her once she explains that the clone was sending them on all those dangerous missions, not her.

I'm sure that Patton will forgive her as well. I mean after all, we are talking about the woman he loves more than his own life.

I've got to say that chapter twelve of LAST was really cute. I loved the scene where Hoagie's bike got jealous of Penny and started to chase her around. I also liked the little scene where you set up Fanny's jealousy of Penny. Poor little Fanny, hopefully she'll realize that they're just friends and not quite yet lovers. Speaking of which, I wonder when Patton's going to ask Rachel to the dance? Anyway, good chapter overall.

BTW, do you want to end this thread at 64 pages, or do you want to go to 70 pages Jam?

[fangirl4315]

Really? It's cute? Thanks! Yeah, I had to put the trike. Can't make it a KND fic without exact characters. And Fanny will realize it, when someone tells her, that is. But, she'll be trying to win Hoagie back. Watch out for Chapter 22, it's where she'll do it. Well, about Patton asking, there is no exact scene for that, but Fanny will approve that he did ask her.

Hmm... I'd say 70. For an exact.

[Prettywitchiusaka]

True enough. I also see that the story will have around twenty two chapters judging from that being the point where Fanny learns her mistake. Oh good, it's nice to see that Fanny approves of Patton's love for Rachel.

Alright then, 70 pages for this thread it is.

[fangirl4315]

She does approve. And the story will be up to 30 chapters, like how I made it before.

Yay! 70. BTW, who'll start the new thread? You or me or Deli?