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Post by Chief34(Numbuh 40000) on Dec 19, 2006 4:17:47 GMT
Keep up the good work!
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Post by victor on Dec 20, 2006 3:18:09 GMT
Chapter 11 The Passing of the Mameluke Sword
The Star Nigel Crew was now asleep. It was a long day and needed a long rest. Everyone was on their bedrooms sleeping. Nigel was snoring and thinking of the day he left Earth to pursue his dream.
*Start Dream Sequence*
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The KND,TND,and the Adults Next Door fused to become a single Government that was full of promises. This Government now called Robin Government under the rule of Omega Rachel. World Problems soon ended and the problematic villians were exiled to the dark corners of the Milky Way. Ancient jobs like Swordsmithing returned to supply the new Robin Marines with swords of their choice. The Robin Star Navy was formed thanks to shipwrights from the Birdka that brought their advanced shipwright techniques to make new warships. This New Order was brought thanks to the Delightful Invasion and unified the Earth. Cultures, Customs and Past will all remain the same. With the Technology from the Delightful Forces, the Goverment was growing into a powerful force.
Nigel was at the ruined Sector V Treehouse; Looking at the burned wood, broken glass. He was in the Briefing Room.
"l'll take long to rebuild this." Abby AKA Numbuh 5 said. "Those freaks will pay."
Nigel sighted and went to his Bedroom. He suffered a great depression, nothing had interest to him right now. It was all sheer boredom. Looking up the window. He saw a new Robin-Class Warships being tested. It fired its Plasma Cannon at the sky. This exicited Nigel more. Space Exploration. Excitement returned to his face. He now had a goal. Becoming a Galactical Mercenary like the KND Operative Victor Xi Finch AKA Omega 90.
Nigel then runs back to the Briefing Room, he arrives and takes a breath.
"Guys!! I had an idea." Nigel said as Numbuh's 2-5 stopped cleaning.
He told them about his idea of leaving Earth and become Mercenaries. He told them about Grand Adventures, new planets, new friends, new enemies and dreams.
The rest of Sector V agreed to the idea. Nigel went in to his room and contacted Rachel.Few minutes later, Rachel agreed to give him a ship, weapons and the neccesary stuff in just three days.
3 days later.......... 8:06 P.M
At the new spaceport, Mrs.Uno was crying, Monty Uno was glad that Nigel was now looking for his destiny and a dream.
"Come on Numbuh 1!! We have to go." Numbuh 3 yelled as she carried a wooden crate to the ship, the Grand Phoenix.
"Well. I guess its time." Nigel said.
"Take care. Promise that you'll come back alive." Monty told Nigel. "Wait. Here, take them. They'll be of good use." Monty gave him his most valuable treasures, his Mameluke Swords.
"Dad." Nigel shed a tear.
"Take care of them, and they'll take care of you." Monty said. Nigel salutes and heads to the ship.
The Plasma Engines start as Monty and Mrs. Uno leave the area. The Grand Phoenix launches and heads to explore the infinite sea of stars.
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*End Dream Sequence*
"Dad." Nigel talked on his sleep.
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Post by Chief34(Numbuh 40000) on Dec 20, 2006 21:32:48 GMT
Cool
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Post by victor on Dec 20, 2006 22:59:46 GMT
Chapter 12 Planet Kitu
The next day. The crew headed to their next stop. Planet Kitu, a place were mercenaries from all the Galaxy come here to supply, eat and rest. The Nigel Crew were now on the city exploring it for their own good. Most Mercs knew them by the face. Yelling came out from the strong Mercs, claiming because of them , they lost good profits. Nigel and his team ignore them and proceed with their course. The Cities are big and look like a huge metropolis, full of Mercernaries, famous and infamous, good and bad. A certain team of Mercs, two vulpines, light yellow and a blue furred vixen wearing a pink jumpsuit, a short, green frog wearing a yellow jumpsuit and a yellow baseball cap with an "S" on it, the last member was a blue falcon, with green eyes, yellow beak and wored a red jumpsuit. These guys were known as the Star Fox Team of Lylat.
There was someone following Star Nigel. These people were really part of the Delightful Assault Commandoes. They follow Nigel and his team. Nigel sat down while the rest explored the park. The mysterious people come near Nigel.
"Are you Nigel Uno of Earth?" The Anthropomorphic Hawk asked.
"Yes. Why?" Nigel asked
The guys then take off their robes revealing their green uniforms with the Delightful Coat of Arms. The Troops take out a Submachine Gun. Pistol Grip in the middle with a long magazine of 34 Pistol Plasma Bullets. This was the new Leo Submachine Gun.
"Prepare to die Mr.Uno." The Trooper said.
"You first." Nigel said as he standed up, punched the trooper ad grabbed his weapon. Nigel then runs to find his team.
"Shoot him." The Hawk Trooper said an his troops opened fire at Nigel, a bullet case left the gun and a plasmanized projectile left the barrel. Nigel took cover in a tree to avoid those shots with his name on them.
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Post by King Bowser Kuppa on Dec 21, 2006 2:39:43 GMT
The chapter was good!
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Post by victor on Dec 22, 2006 0:34:20 GMT
Chapter 13 La Cara Oscura De La Via Lactea (The Dark Face Of The Milky Way.)
"These guys can't give up." Nigel told himself as the Plasma Bullets flew. Hitting random directions. The Delightful Commandoes keep on firing.
"Advance." The Hawk Trooper said. Nigel then came out of the tree, aimed and opened fire, the Plasma Bullets inside the gun were ignited by a Electro-Plasma Current that ignited the liquid Guunka Propellant, the plasmanized projectile flew and the next one did, ejecting the Titanium Plasma Bullet Case.
"DAMN!!" One of the Troops said as he died. He dropped to the floor and bleed. Nigel kept on firing, discovering that the gun was close range, expanding the projectiles everywhere.
"This won't work. I need a rifle or something." Nigel told himself and started to run. He saw Numuhs 2-5. Numbuh 5 had an extra rifle with her. Nigel catches up and Numbuh 5 quickly hands him the rifle.
"I told you not to leave without it." Numbuh 5 screamed at Nigel. Nigel removed the magazine and checked the Rifle Plasma Bullets.
(Author's Note: The Guns used by the Delightful Forces and the Robin Government use Plasma Bullets, a better system for Plasma Rifles, since its cheap, effective and reliable than dangerous fusions.) He had 80 shots for his D.P.A.R (Deadly Plasma Assault Rifle), which of course was a blue rifle, using the bullpup configuration like the old models of the rifle. Nigel then puts the magazine back and gives it a sharp slap to feed the mechanism. Of course, Numbuh's 2-5 wielded the red model.
The Troops moved faster. Nigel and the others put their left eye on the scope. They aim at the troopers running towards them. The wind blows, Grass shivers. The park was now a battleground.
"FIRE AT WILL!!" Nigel ordered.
"Who's Will?" Numbuh 3 asked as she aimed.
"Just shoot." Nigel said as he pulled the trigger, a rage of Blue Plasma Rifle Bullets flew like mad, hitting the troopers very hard. Most of them yelled as their death became painful. 7 Minutes later, the Commandoes died.
"We better go." Nigel said as he and his team started to run to the exit of the park.
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Post by King Bowser Kuppa on Dec 22, 2006 1:11:23 GMT
Good chapter, maybe you could include a gun that BURNINATES people?
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Post by Chief34(Numbuh 40000) on Dec 22, 2006 2:06:05 GMT
Nice chapter update soon.
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Post by victor on Dec 22, 2006 3:45:18 GMT
Chapter 14: Leaving My Life to join a Friend!!!
Vice-Admiral Luct and his fleet were on the Omega Line and exploring the the equator of the Galaxy. He had an Idcea. He would abadon his life and join Vic on the Whirlpool Galaxy. One Dark day, the Vice-Admiral makes a startling confession:
"I'm sorry guys. I'm leaving this life and go to the Whirlpool Galaxy." The Vice-Admiral leaves the bridge and boards his Nightfire the Super Saiyan. It leaves and heads for the Whirlpool Galaxy. The Luct Fleet is now forced to wander the Galaxy, alone and unleaded. But Luct has no regrets and proves it by starting a new life with the Star Phoenix Team.
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Post by King Bowser Kuppa on Dec 22, 2006 3:47:18 GMT
Cool, awesome, it's the bomb!
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Post by victor on Dec 22, 2006 22:07:02 GMT
Chapter 15: Leaving Kita
"We better get out of here." Nigel said as he runned as fast as he could. Delightful Gunships were coming, trying to take over the planet. Plasma Beams, lots of them fell from the sky and destroyed buildings, houses, vehicles!! Most mercenaries boarded their fighters and attacked the gunships. Nigel and his crew were trying to take cover from the evi, red, Plasma Beams that came from the sky. The Sun Crushers in orbit above the planet bomb the planet with Plasma Beams. The Space Port was close, hoping that the Grand Phoenix was safe. They arrive but to their surprise, a red Plasma Beam hit the Grand Phoenix and exploded, scattering its pieces, including the Nightfires and everything the had in there.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!" Nigel yelled, he lost his only ship and love of his life. Nigel burst into tears as he saw how the Delightful Gunships attacked the space port. Nigel aims his D.P.A.R at one of the Gunships and shoots them, with rage.
"You freaks Die!! Go to hell and die!!!!!! " Nigel yelled. Numbuh 5 punches him.
"Snap out of it!!" Numbuh 5 yelled at Nigel.
"Hey!" A blue anthropomorphic vixen wearing a pink jumpsuit yelled. "We can give you a ride." Krystal said. The Star Nigel team and the rest of Star Fox board the Great Fox and leave the planet............ Nigel saw the Gunships enter the planet and attack it.
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Post by Chief34(Numbuh 40000) on Dec 22, 2006 22:26:16 GMT
Nice chapter
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Post by victor on Dec 24, 2006 0:19:41 GMT
Chapter 16:The Doom!
"We are the Delightful Starfleet!!! We are here to take control of the Solar System. Any attemps to resist are futile and will be punished by death." The voice of the real Clarissa was heard all over the Solar System.
"You are crazy! We will not..." Rachel said as she looked at the sky from her palace.
"And now, will start to kill all of the Military Leaders that resist us." The evil voice said.
"W... WHAT!!" Rachel screamed.
From space, the Grand Robin, The main flagship of the Government was on orbit. It aims it beak, which was a massive Super Plasma Cannon. It charges and sends a powerful beam at the Capital of the Government: Washington D.C. The beam hits the White House, the explosion expanded and destroyed the city and everything in its path. 7 minutes later, everything was destroyed, and the black making could be seen in space.
"HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!" Clarissa laughed like a maniac. "A new era of terror and death shall begin."
The Robin Government was now in danger..........
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Post by King Bowser Kuppa on Dec 24, 2006 2:44:34 GMT
It's good!
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Post by Chief34(Numbuh 40000) on Dec 24, 2006 2:53:03 GMT
Cool.
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