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Oct 24, 2006 18:22:07 GMT
Post by number7 on Oct 24, 2006 18:22:07 GMT
I.ntelectual T.error Part1 Chapter 1 ........................................................ ’’Number 58 hurry!’’ number 58 tried to run but there was no point. IT got her. IT grabbed her long brown hair and pulled it ’’Number 60 go!’’ but it was pointles her to say that. Number 60 wasn’t going anywhere he was dead. ‚’’Number 60?!! NOOOOOOOOOO! Get of me you you.....’’ she fell softly on the grownd, she felt no pain... She was going the same place where number 60. ‚’’Number 5!’’ 1 came out holding a white paper in his hand ‚’’Whats wrong?’’ 5 asked ‚’’I got a report what sayes all of sector H are....dead’’ 5 looked at him ‚’’What?! I can’t belive it! What happend??’’ 1 looked down on his feet ‚’’IT got them!’’ He’s face was white ‚’’IT? YOU MEAN THE ‚’’IT’’??’’ 1 noded ‚’’It can’t be, we locked IT up.. IT can’t be back!’’ 5 ‚s face was whiter than ever ‚’’But it can! IT is stronger than ever and...’’ This was the time for bad news 5 knew it ‚’’...IT has a famly now.’’ 5 looked at him ‚’’IT layed eggs?’’ 1 noded very slowly ‚’’10000000000 eggs.. they hatshed last night a hour before all members of sector H died! They were under the treehouse!’’5 sat down ‚’’They had no chance to get out!’’ It was like a nightmare.... 5 didn’t understand why did IT wan’t kill she never found it out but this is the best time for it! ‚’’Hey whats going on?’’3 was standing at the door. She had dressed into her new Raiblow monkey lovely time dress. ’’Number 3! IT is back and has killed whole sector H!’’ 3 looked at her and fainted. Now 4 was at the door. He looked at 3’s body. ‚’’What the heck happend??’’ 3 opend her eyes and 4 helped her up ‚’’Are you OK?’’ 4 asked ‚’’I think so’’ 3 was white all over ‚’’OK what happend??’’ 4 looked at number 1 then 5. ‚’’Number 4 It is back!’’ 4 looked at 1 ‚’’Who?’’ He looked dumly at theyr faces ‚’’IT...IT...I.nellectual T.error! IT Can’t you seeeeee??’’Cause 4 was still looking stupidly then 3 shouted ‚’’ HOAGIE!!!!!!’’ 4 steped back and fell ‚’’What he can’t be back! We locked him up!’’ 4 had time to forget his best friend...But when it happend he was in shocke like everibody else...He could not eat for days...none could.....But that happend.... Hoagie was gone for them...’’Whats going one’’ A girl in black steped in she was the new number 2. She had long brown hair. Her green eyes looked around the room. ‚’’IT is back!’’number 4 said ‚’’Cool let’s get to work!’’ 4 had the face like he wanted to hit her ‚’’COOOOOL! LET’S GET TO WORK???! THAT IS THE ONLY THING YOU CAN SAY!!! YOU.....YOU ANIMAL !!’’4 was really angry. He hated that girl. She took hoagies place.’’number4 come down’’ but it didn’t work he was about to hit her but 3 took his hand ‚’’Stop it Wally she didn’t know Hoagie like we did!’’ 4 looked at her and turned away ‚’Your right Kuki she is just a evil cow who took my best friends place she didn’t know him as good that we did she is just none for me!’’ 4 left the room. 2 was really angry. ‚’’Are you all right?’’ 3 asked ‚’’Yeah I am ,cause that boy left the room!’’ She had that angry look on her face. ‚’’That boy has a name too you know! Wally or Wallabee or number 4 !’’ 2 hited her ‚’’Shout up! I don’t care what your friends name is! I don’t care about you I just want to be respected like all of you but is this to hard for you?? You allways pick on me cause I took your dear best friends place! So what?! He is gone and not coming back! Live with it!’’ She turned over but it was a mistake. She got hit by 4’s hand. ‚’’Do not ever hit her! You are worse then anybody I know, your just evil you don’t care of us you care about this place you just want to be the number 2 the same number like the legendary number 2 who fighted with his life to save the world!’’ 2’s nose was bleeding she stud up and left the room. Same time in sector U numer 43 and 45 were playing cards ‚’’You herd something?’’ number 43 asked ‚’’No, what about you number 42?’’ number 45 asked ‚’’Number 42?’’ he looked around ‚’’Where is she!? She was just here!’’ he pointed on a Red chair. ‚’’Eh number 43?’’ he looked around ‚’’Anybody?’’He stud up and looked around the room ‚’’NUMBER 45!’’ he turned around. Number 46 hugged him ‚’’I was looking all over for you guys number 44 is gone!’’ she looked at 45 ‚’’So are numbers 42 and 43’’ he said ‚’’EEEEEEEK whats that!’’ number 46 yelled ‚’’45 looked there ‚’’Oh no it’s IT! Run 46 I’ll keep IT away from you !’’ 46 started runing ,she herd number 45 scream... She ran outside to the jet and started it. But something else was there. ‚’’AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!’’ she screamed and hited it with a chair. But there was more than one there ‚’’HELP ME!!!!!!’’ she screamed but there were too much of them. She had allmost no chance but that was enought for her she took a gun and started shooting them. She was finning. She started the jet and flew to sector R.
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Oct 25, 2006 3:52:11 GMT
Post by victor on Oct 25, 2006 3:52:11 GMT
Good. Its very good!
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Oct 25, 2006 4:52:25 GMT
Post by number7 on Oct 25, 2006 4:52:25 GMT
THANKS Oh I can post the Chapter 2 alsow Chapter 2 ..................................................................... Number 2 was siting in her room. Lot had changed in that room ,no more airplanes or stuff like that. The room was gray, very gray just the way she liked it. It was also very emty. In that room were only a bed, a desk, a chair, a closet and a lamp. That was all. There was like she didn’t have a hobby. Just when we looked at the other KND opretives rooms we allways could know what they liked. She stud up and opend the closet. There was a mirror inside. She took it and looked deeply in it. ‚’’Why doesn’t enybody like me?’’ she asked . ‚’’Is there anything wrong with me?’’ she puted the mirror away and leied down on the bed. ‚’’I wish they liked me like they liked Hoagie.’’ Deep inside herself was a tought it grew and grew till she used that tought. She ran out. Kuki was playing with her rainbow monkey when the door opened. She allmost screamed. ‚’’WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING?? ARE YOU CRAZY?! THEYR KILL YOU FOR THIS!’’ number 2 looked at her ‚’’Oh allrigt!’’ She took the garogols of. ‚’’You can’t just be ‚’’number 2’’ he was he and you are you! So don’t even try it, you’ll be killed!’’ Number 2 smiled ‚’’Well at least I’ll try!’’ she closed number3’s rooms door and herd number 3 yell ‚’’YOU’LL BE KILLED NUMBER2 DON’T DO THIS!!!’’ Number 2 opened number 5’s rooms door. ‚’’And what are you trying?’’ number 5 asked when she came in. ‚’Eh nothing ‚’’I think the others won’t take this! So stop it right now!’’ number 2 laughted ‚’’I’m not doing anything!’’ number 5 looked at her ‚’’Riiiiiight! Well get yourself killed, I don’t mind!’’ number 2 closed the door and opened number 1’s door ‚’’I can see number 3 is right’’ he said. ‚’’About what? It fits perfecly on me!’’ Number 1 laughed at her ‚’’I quess you haven’t showed your ‚’’new look’’ to number 4.’’ She noded ‚’’How did you know?’’ number 1 looked at her ‚’’Well you have your limbs attached!’’ he was right she tought ‚’’It’s not going to work I say!’’ she left the room and looked at number 4 room ‚’’OK forget it I’m not going to do this!’’ She turned around and there he was ‚’’WHAT IS GOING ON! TAKING HIS PLACE WASN’T GOOD ENAUGH ! HUH??? YOU HAD TO LOOK LIKE HIM TOO?!!’’ he was ready to hit her allways had been but when the time was. He couln’t. ‚’’GET OUT OF HERE!’’ Number 46 was drinking hot coco. ‚’’So what happend there?’’ number 223 asked. ‚’’IT came and...and they got number 45...oh there were many of IT’s there but younger....I don’t wanna talk about it!’’ She looked down ‚’’That’s OK you don’t have to.... Wait you are from... sector U!?’’ 46 looked at him ‚’Yeah?’’ Horror was on number 223’s face ‚’’My...my little brov....my little brother was in sector U...He’s number 42.’’ Tiars fell ‚’’I am the only one left!’’ number 46 said she felt pain. Number 42 was only 7 years old and gone all ready! Why was IT doing this? Why? Number 2 sat on her bed ,what was about her what they didn’t like? She didn’t take this any more . ‚’’I’m going to fight with IT alone!’’ she said and opend the closet there was a bckbag. She took it and opened it. The bag started growing till it was a airplane. She sat in it and started it. ‚’’It’s very quiet here’’ number 46 said. 223 looked around ‚’’Your right! Number 222 whats going on? Number222? Number 221? WHAT IS GOING ON?’’ 46 looked at him ‚’’It started exactly like this in my place!’’ there was horror at both faces ‚’’Let’s get out of here!’’ 46 noded but it was to late for that.’’Number 223? NUMBER 223? NOOOOO!’’’ she started runing and his face in her mind.. that emty face! ‚’’IT IS NOT GOING TO HAPPEN! I need to get out of here!’’ She ran throw the tree house. On the ground was a little boy. He was still alive. Number 46 helped him up ‚’’We need to get out of here!’’ They boy noded. They started runing up. But IT blocked the way! ‚’’WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM US!’’ She yealled ‚’’R...E...V...ENGE! I....WA...N....T...REVENGE! WHERE. ..I...S.. ..NUMB...E...R 1?’’ 46 looked at IT ‚’’In sector V what about it?’’ IT took her hand ‚’’YOU.. ..W...I..LL.. .T...AK..E... ..M...E... .T...HE..RE.. .IF... .Y...OU... ..W.ANT.. ..TO. .L....I...V...E!’’ Number 46 had no choice ‚’’OK I’ll take you there but you have to promise you won’t hurt me or this boy!’’ IT noded ‚’’I... P....R...OM..IS..E...’’
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Oct 26, 2006 1:25:17 GMT
Post by victor on Oct 26, 2006 1:25:17 GMT
Very Good
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Oct 27, 2006 14:42:17 GMT
Post by number7 on Oct 27, 2006 14:42:17 GMT
Chapter3 ................................................. ‚’’Where is number 2?’’ number 3 asked ‚’’Do you think I care about that?’’ Said number 4 ‚’’Well....no but I haven’t seen her all day! She tryed to do everything to be honored by us and I think you pissed her off!’’ Number 4 laughed ‚’’Do you think I care , let her be pissed of but I’m not worried!’’He left the room leaving number 3 standing there. ‚’’NUMBER 86 AND 98!’’ A red haired girl and a blonde haird boy came in. ‚’’Yes mam!’’ they said ‚’’I have bad news! Sector R...is gone ,only number 46 made it.’’ A darkly looking gril came in the room. She had long black hair and dark brown eyes. She was wearing black. ‚’’NUMBER 46 IS IT YOU??? You have changed! What happent to your short white hair and your light gray eyes! THIS IS NOT NUMBER 46!’’ number 86 shouted ‚’’Oh yes I am!’’ She took off the black wigg and the contact lenses.But what number 86 saw was worse. ‚’’Now you know why I have to were this! IT did this to me...I saw him...I mean IT...face to face. IT has chanced.’’She covered the red eyes and the blood colored hair. ‚’’Number 46...I’m so sorry! Are you allright?’’ She noded ‚’’I will be if I get to sector V!’’ 86 stared at her ‚’’Why?’’ 46 lauged ‚’’I have business there!’’ 86 noded ‚’’Allright , you’ll get there! GET THE JET REDY!!’’ Number 2 flew to sector H where it all began. She steped out side. It was cold there. ‚’Oh why didn’t I take a sweter’’ she opend the door. There lied a boy. The boy had black hair. He’s eyes were wide open in fear. Number 2 took his hand it was cold. A few meters away was lying a girl. Number 2 wanted to cry! It was her half sister. Her face was white allover her moth was a lil opend and a trop of blood was on her lips. ‚’’Annie what has he done to you? Annie! Don’t be like this!’’ She colsed her sisters eyes what were filled with tears. ‚’’I’ll get my revenge I promise Hoagie Gilligan you won’t get away with this!’’ She walked around sector H. It was very quiet and cold. Number 2 looked thow all rooms finding more kids lying on the ground. Finally the last room she tought ,but it wasn’t pritty what she saw. The wall was covered with eggs. Blue gross eggs. She smiled and took somnething from her pocket. She but that thing between the eggs and ran! There was a button is her hand. She pussed it.She was laughing ‚’’DIE YOU MONTSTERS!’’ Sudenly she felt someone grab her leg ‚’EEEEEEK!’’ she yelled. She looked on the ground ‚’’Annie?’’ Annies eyes where white ‚’’Y...O....U A..R..EN’T G...O....ING A...NY...WHE...R..E!!!’’She said. Number 2 screamed ‚’’GET OFF OF ME! YOU AREN’T MY SISTER!!!’’ she hit her and started runing. The exit was near. There was nothing to stop her. It all blew up. Number 2 stud there. ‚’’Sorry sis, there was nothing I could do for you anymore!’’ A tear fell and she opened the jet’s door. ‚’’Number 1! Can you hear me?’’ Number 1 looked up on the screen ‚’’Loud and clear number 86!’’ he smiled ‚’’I’m sending number 46 there!’’Number 1 noded ‚’I understand. Carry on!’’ The door opend and a girl came in ‚’’Number 1 I need to talk to you...alone!’’ She looked at number 5 ‚’’OK OK I’m leaving allready!’’She closed the door ‚’’Number 1 I need to talk about number 2!’’ she sat down ‚’’Well what about her?’’Nigel asked ‚’’HER?! HER?! I MEAN HIM!’’ She took off her wigg and the blood stared troping on the floor. Her eyes were crying blood. ‚’’WHAT A HECK ARE YOU?’’ Number 46 closed her eyes . She looked very peacefull her hair was white again and if her eyes would have been opend we could see that they were back to normal too. But the blood started growing. ‚’’Hoagie?’’ He herd a laught ‚’’H...E...LL..O N...I...GE.......L!’’ Nigel looked at him and...blackness. Number 1 had just fainted. Number 3 was drawing a pic when the door opened it was number 5 ‚’’Hy number 3!’’ She said quietly ‚’’Hy number 5...You mis him huh?’’ Number 5 noded ‚’’I don’t understand. I hated these lame jockes but now....I miss them soo much.. They were a part of me.’’ Number 3 noded ‚’’Your soo right... we arn’t the same old teem what we used to be. We just aren’t so perfect anymore. I thing our teem is breaking.’’ She stud up and left the room leaving number 5 standing there. She opend number 1’s rooms door ‚’’Number 1?’’ she steped in ‚’’Yes number 3?’’ said a quiet voice ‚’’I wanted to say that...I...I...I quit’’she looked thowards number 1 ‚’’HEY YOUR NOT NIGEL...YOUR...YOUR....HOAGIE!’’ That evil laugh.. She herd it in her mind ‚’’YOUR SISTER DID THIS TO ME!’’Number 3 looked at him ‚’’WHAT YOU...You mean Mushi did this to you?’’ IT noded ‚’’NOW I W...I..LL G....ET MY REVENGE!!!!!!!!’’ number 3 steped back. ‚’’What do you mean by that? You want to kill me?’’ A large hand pussed her on the wall ‚’’YES! BU...T B...E..F..ORE I DO THIS I W....ANT TO ASK. WH..Y DID Y...OU WANT TO Q...U...I...T?’’ Number 3 stud up. Her back was very painful. ‚’’Cause we aren’t the teem we used to cause I’m sick of them I’m sick of being in the KND I’m sick of knowing you I’m sick of the cuilt. I’m sick of it all I want to live a normal life now with no KND memoris!’’Hoagie laughed ‚’’GOOD CHICE YOU HAVE THERE! BUT NOW IT’S TIME!’’
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Oct 28, 2006 1:12:10 GMT
Post by victor on Oct 28, 2006 1:12:10 GMT
Kool...............
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Oct 31, 2006 3:27:42 GMT
Post by numbah74 on Oct 31, 2006 3:27:42 GMT
why is victor only commenting? come on people! Give her some credit! Anyways great fanfic number 7!
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Oct 31, 2006 6:26:23 GMT
Post by victor on Oct 31, 2006 6:26:23 GMT
Yeah! Come on people, someone review my fics. Pwease?
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Nov 6, 2006 6:16:30 GMT
Post by number7 on Nov 6, 2006 6:16:30 GMT
Thanks for the few commets Oky here is Chapter4 .................................................. Number 2 flew to sector U. She steped out the jet It was quiet just like in sector H.She looked around. None in site. She steped inside and looked around. There was number 45. ‚’’Number 45?’’He moved alil then opened his eyes. ‚’’Hello anybody in here?’’ Number 2 took his hand ‚’’I’m here! What happen?’’ There was terror in number 45’s eyes ‚’’I tryed to save her....Then they went after her leving me lying here. Is she Ok...Is number 46 OK???’’ Number 2 noded ‚’’I herd she was in the moonbase for a while but that was a hour ago.’’ Number 45 smiled ‚’’Common I’ll help you in my jet.’’ He stud up.’’OK let’s go’’ He started going ‚’’Number 45! Go without me. And wait in the jet if I’m not back in 15 min fly away!’’ He noded and ran in the jet. She turned around and started to look around. There next the couch was lying number 42. And next to him number 43 and 4 meters from there number 44. ‚’’Where are you?’’ said number 2 quietly. She opened the kichen door and allmost fainted. ‚’’Number 45!’’ The boy was clued on the wall. He was sleeping. ‚’’You can’t be here...If you are here then...’’ She herd the jet fly away. ‚’’Damb it!’’ She helped number 45 of the wall ‚’’Number 45?’’ He opend his eyes ‚’’Huh?’’ He looked at number 2 ‚’’Hoagie?’’ Number 2 cave him a slap in the face ‚’’ Wake up I’m number 2!’’ He closed his eyes. ‚’’Sorry I’m a lil dizzy right now. There was a fight between me and IT junior. IT Jr. Won!’’ Number 2 noded. I understand...but now we need to get out of here!’’she helped him up and they started walking throw the house. ‚’’LOOK THEY ARE LEAVING!’’ said a voice ‚’’NONE LEAVES FROM SECTOR U!!’’ The kids woke up and started coming thowards number 2 and 45 ‚’’EEEEEK WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON??’’ Number 45 screamed like a lil girl ‚’’They are under IT’s control!.’’ Said number 2 slowly. She hit one in the face. It fell on the ground but stud up again. ‚’WHERE IS THE EXIT?’’ number 2 asked ‚’’There!’’ Number 45 pointed on the wall ‚’’Secret door!’’ they started runing thowards it. Number 45 pussed a button and the door opened. Then he closed it when they were in the other side. ‚’’OK we need an airplane.’’ Number 45 noded and took the cover of ‚’’Let’s go!’’ He poineted at a petfect plane.Number 2 noded. Number 4 was walking in his room ‚’’I hate this we havent had a mission for days!’’ He left his room. ‚’’CEEEZ IT’S TOOOOO QUIET HERE! HEY GUYS DO YOU HEAR ME?’’ Number 5 opend the door ‚’’Loud and clear number 4 so you don’t have to shout!’’ She sat on the couch ‚’’Hey whers everybody?’’ Number 4 looked around ‚’’It seems normal cause it has been quitet around here for months.’’ Number 5 noded’’Yeah your right everything has been quiet since...’’ the senence was finnished for her ‚’’I DIED?’’they looked at the door.There was standing number 1 but in a mutated way. He started melting and taking a new shape. ‚’’I WANT MY REVENGE!!!’’ Number 5 Stud up ‚’’From us? What did we do to you?’’ In front of her was good old Hoagie but in a different version. It touched her cheeck ‚’’Number 5, can’t you understand... I’m dead like ,but you are all alive. But I promise I’ll wake you up afer you die.’’ He touched her cheeck but what she didn’t know was that it was a deth touche. She took the last brath and fell. She was dead...’’EEEEEEK WHAT DID YOU DO?’’ Number 4 shouted ‚’’I killed her. And now dear best friend it’s time to die for you too!’’ Number 4 steped back ‚’’ARE YOU CRAZY I DON’T WANT TO DIE!!!!’’Hoagie laughed ‚’’ I think you have no choice!’’ Number 4 looked behind he was right but not about the dying ‚’’Yes I have!’’ number 4 shouted and jumped out the winow. For he’s luck he had a rocket packbag on. He bussed the button and flew up ‚’’See ya...old friend!’’ He left leaving IT standing there. Haogie took number 5 on his hands ‚’’Let’s go my dear, I’ll get him anyway!’’ Number 2 and number 45 were flying above sector R ‚’’Why do you want to meet IT anyway? Usually we don’t want to meet him!’’ Number 2 smiled ‚’’I have my reasons!’’ They landed. ‚’’Now I’ll go for a lil tour You wait here get it!’’ number 45 noded and number 2 jumped out. She opened the door. It was like the other sectors. On the floor were bodies and it was too quiet. ‚’’HOAGIE ARE YOU HERE! COME AND SHOW YOURSELF!’’ But no anserw. ‚’’I quess none is here... She was about to leave when she herd a cry ‚’’Who’s there?’’number 2 looked in the closet. There was a young boy ‚’’He didn’t keep his promise!’’ Number 2 looked at him ‚’’ Who?’’ Number 2 asked ’’HOAGIE P. GILLIGAN JR’’ The boy shouted ‚’’What did he promise to you?’’ Number 2 asked. She looked at the boy. The boy was frighten. ‚’’He promised he wont hurt us if we...’’ the boy started to say ’’If what?’’ Number 2 needed to know. ‚’’If we get him to sector V!’’ The boy said and at the same moment he stoped breathing. Number 2 got up. She started walking thowards the exit. There wasn’t anything for her here what she needed. ‚’’Back so soon?’’ Number 45 said Number 2 noded. ‚’’Yeah I found what I was looking for..I found anserws...Now we need to get to sector V as quick as possible!’’ Number 45 noded and started the plane ‚’’Sector V here we come!’’ ‚’’I WANT TO SEE NUMBER 86 WRIGHT AWAY!!!’’ Number 33 noded ‚’’Number 86 there is someone here to see you!’’ The room was filled with someones yelling ‚’’HOW CAN YOU EVEN THINK OF DISTURBING ME?!’’ But number 33 was gome ‚’’How do you but up with this?’’ Number 4 asked ‚’’Naaaah getting used to it... Now that lef door!’’ Number 4 noded and opened the door. Number 86 sat there behind the table looking at number 4 ‚’’Come in! Now whats the trouble?’’ Number 4 sat and said ‚’’My sector has been under attack!’’ Number 86 noded ‚’’I know!’’ Number 4 stud up ‚’’WHAT? HOW? WHO ARE YOU?’’ Number 86 pussed a buttuon ‚’’I WANT NUMBER 4 DECAMISSIONED AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!’’ Number 4 steped back ‚’’WHAT IS IT DONE TO YOU???’’ Number 86 laughed ‚’’When number 46 came she had with her a IT jr and now... ‚’’ She showed her eye... it was red as blood. ‚’’cause I have red hair none nodeses! And who would want to be with her?! She has lots of power and good to take over!’’ But number 4 didn’t wait till IT jr finnishes it’s talk he ran out and got his rocket. One push of a button and he was gone. He flew up in the sky up up where the birds fly.
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Nov 19, 2006 20:52:36 GMT
Post by victor on Nov 19, 2006 20:52:36 GMT
Its getting good you know!!!!
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Nov 25, 2006 18:55:10 GMT
Post by numbah888 on Nov 25, 2006 18:55:10 GMT
I love it! It's so dramatic! I especially like your charactar. You made her up, didn't you? It's really great.
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