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Post by adultshooter on May 16, 2006 2:19:19 GMT
nice story ^D^
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Post by victor on May 18, 2006 1:58:56 GMT
Chapter 4: Rise from the Ashes.
Tabitha and Regan. The last two Delightful Children were planning to leave the Lyka System forever. Regan was holding a special disk he needed to hand to their source of escape. The chubby girl and the tall boy were walking on the streets at a normal afternoon. The Delightful Army was patrolling the streets with their Scorpio Rifles. Some troops were even on the rooftops. The two take a turn between Maple and Krystal Street. They were on a old, abandoned apartment building. The two enter, they go up to the stairs to the rooftop. A Mexican-American Teen, Male, 15 years of age was waiting for them. His name was Victor De Phoenix or Numbuh Alpha 98 of the KND. He belongs to a program were only the elite are chosen to take the special training. The Elite Operatives are divided into five Classes: Alpha, Beta, Gamma, Sigma and Omega.
" We have your your disk. Did you get our escape?" Regan questioned.
" Of course, I'll do anything to join Star Nigel." Alpha said. He wanted to join the soon to be legends of Star Nigel. Regan handed the disk with important information. Alpha then takes out a remote control thing and presses a few buttons.
Two Delta shaped ships ( Delta means triangular) with cresent moon wings in X-Position decloak. It was the Red Flame II used by the Delightful Army. There were two, a pink one and a green one. The pink had no weapons, but a sleek engine and shielding. The green one had two Type-H Auto-Plasma Cannons, strong shielding and two stolen Cornerian Green Fox Plasma Engines. Tabitha hops into her pink ship, Regan hops in his green fighter.
" Well, I better leave." Alpha said as his S.A.A.A.S decloaked automatically. He also hops in to the cockpit.
The Red Flames of the two Delightfus start their engines and blast off to the sky, soon they will be free. Free to go back to normal again. Alpha also starts his engine and blasts off in search of the Grand Phoenix, Star Nigel Dreadnought Battleship. Tabitha and Regan flew out of the system forever. Alpha was looking in Planet Torpo IV. The Grand Phoenix was in orbit around the planet. Alpha decides to send a transmission.
" Hey, guys! Mind if I hang out with you?" Alpha said.
"Sure, Vic. Welcome to Star Nigel. I'll open the hangar door." Numbuh 2 said. The front hangar bay opens, Alpha enters his fighter and the doors close. Alpha opens the cockpit and climbs off. He heads to the command deck.
End Mission.
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Post by nathalie on May 18, 2006 2:01:41 GMT
pretty cool
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Post by victor on May 20, 2006 19:47:39 GMT
Chapter 5: Assault on Torpo IV
The disk contained infomation about a fleet in Torpo IV. A desolate wasteland with no life. It was also a Shipyard were Kuina Corporation builded the Delightful Sun Crushers. These battleships have enough fire power to destroy a star. Numbuh 3 and Numbuh 4 were sent to do an air strike and destroy the ships in construction. The two operatives were flying their S.A.A.A.S Fighters. The location of the Factory was north. Numbuh 1 warned them that new pilots are receiving their training here, so they have to be careful. For 30 minutes they were flying. They were about to pass a radar antenna.
" Radar!" yelled Numbuh 4 " If we are spotted then the mission fails."
" Don't worry, our fighters will jam their radar" Numbuh 3 said.
The S.A.A.A.S were sending their radar jamming waves. At the factory, the radar was not working properly.
BOOOOOMMMM!!!
There was an explosion. The alarm sounded as the Red Flame II's were launching. The Delightful Pilots were waiting for this day. The first target was the North Factory, with produces Red Flame II's. Numbuh 3 and Numbuh 4 fly within range and attack every fighter in their way. Numbuh 4 then does a loop. The Red Flame was now in front. Numbuh 4 locks on him and fires. The Plasma Chain Gun spin and fire rapidly, shooting the fighter down.
" Numbuh 4, I detected a weak spot, you have to blow up those SAM Towers." Numbuh 3 said.
The SAM Towers come out of the ground and fired plasma shots at a high speed. Numbuh 4 was taking damage, his ship was losing armor. Numbuh 3 goes to the first plant and flies to the main center.
" This could get hot!" Numbuh 3 said as she flew through the tunnel. It was dark and dangerous. She presses a holographic button and a visor come out and puts in Numbuh 3's eyes. The visor was now in Night Vision Mode. She could see everything by now. Most of the guard droids were doing nothing. As she flew on high speeds, some Red Flames were following her. The Red Flames fire but Kuki makes her fighter Barrel Roll, defecting the blasts.
" Almost there." Kuki said as she was reaching the production plant. Numbuh 4 was still firing at those SAM Towers. The production plant was huge, it was assembling the Red Flame II. Numbuh 3 had to blow it up. Numbuh 2 made a protoype bomb called the "Photon-Plasma Nova Bomb". Kuki locks one to her target, the Red Flame II, she fires the bomb, flying like a missile, it hits the newly constructed fighter.
BOOOOOOOOOMMM!!!!
The explosion worked, it was a chain reaction. Fire was engulfing the undergroung factory. Numbuh 3 does a U-Turn and goes back to where she entered. She escapes the explosion and tells Numbuh 4 thgat one factory down. Two more to go.
" This Numbuh Alpha 98, I've been sent to destroy the next target. Meet me at the South Canyon." The transmission said.
Kuki and Numbuh 4 boost their fighters to the meeting point. The mission is yet not complete.
To be continued..........
Chapter 6: Destruction of Torpo IV
"What!" yelled Numbuh 3 " We are going to destroy this planet!" she yelled.
"We have no choice. Besides, if we don't hurry up the Solar System will be invaded." Alpha said. It was the only method to destroy this production plant. It was agreed. The three S.A.A.A.S fly to the North Factory, were the core is located at. Numbuh 3 and 4 were gong to destroy the Anti-Air Turrets. Why was this happening. Why here? It was the only was that the Delightful Army dosen't start a mass invasion. Flying to their target, Red Flame Fighters were attcking, only to be blown up by Numbuh 4's Seeker Cluster Missiles. Most of the fighters and bases were blown up by Alpha 98. After a long flight they arrive to their final target. The turrets start to fire their plasma bolts at high speeds. Numbuh 3 dived and fired away. Numbuh 4 was taking care of those fighters.
"I'm going in!" Alpha said. It was a long tunnel to the core, Alpha then steers to the left. The energy readings were high enough during the flight, he was flying to close to the core of the planet. Thge plan was this: Alpha is supposed to fly there, fire a Planet Killer Bomb and escape before the planet becomes space dust. Some Red Flame Fighter came at high speeds firng their Type-K Auto-Plasma Cannons at Alpha's fighter. The temperature rises as it gets hotter. The Red Flames explode. Red Flames can take temperatures up to 5000 Degrees, KND S.A.A.A.S could take up to 60,000,000 Degrees. Alpha was getting closer and closer to the core. The core was glowing with all its power and might.
" Got to hell, you suckers" Alpha evilly as the targeting computer locked on and confired firng range, with an evil grin, Alpha then presses the Fire Button as the fying bomb hits the core.
" Planetary Destruction will happen in 6 minutes, evacute now!" The S.A.A.A.S Computer said. Alpha U-Turns and speeds up at maximum velocity.
" Kuki, Wallabe! Mission accomplished! Lets get out of here!" Alpha yelled at the communicator in his fighter. The three fighters get out of the planet.
BOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!
The biggest explosion happened, the planet was destroyed, nothing was left of the production plants. Star Nigel decided to take a break for 2 days. After the break, 5 weeks later, there was nothing left of the Delightful Goverment. Planets were free, all of the Delightful Army bases, destroyed, their soldiers and officers... dead, dead bodies were left there to rot. The end is near.
"NIGEL UNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!" Clarissa yelled as she was informed of these events. The end is near, as she hears a S.A.A.A.S lands, the cockpit windshield opens , revealing to be Nigel with a saber, ready to end this once and for all.
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Post by nathalie on May 27, 2006 19:27:11 GMT
plenty of action. cool
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Post by victor on Jun 1, 2006 1:39:44 GMT
Finale
Nigel takes out his saber and enters the mansion. He was going to put an end once and for all! Clarissa was there, lying and crying on the ground!
" Its all over! You jerks ruined my future, my family. Father will be proud of us if he was still alive." Clarissa said tearfully. You cannot escape the reality, no matter how horrible it looks. You can't turn back, turn the other way is life is trying to face you!
"Good- Bye, Clarissa!" Nigel said as he swung his saber at Clarissa's neck.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!"
SLASH!
She was decapitated, her head was no longer in her body. Clarissa died a cowards death. Nigel then takes the body outside the mansion, takes out a match and lights it, burning the body, he then goes for the head and throws it. It was all over...... The Delightful Children, no more. The Lyka Goverment was proud of the mercenaries job. There was a celebration in Planet Rayquaza, food, drinks and other things in the new Lyka Governing Palace.
" Comrades, Representavies of the Planets of Lyka, we are here to celebrate the heroic deeds did for us. A toast for Star Nigel!" A human said, his name was Kor Mokato, the new President of Rayquaza. After the toast, Star Nigel decided to stay for a few days, signing autographs, and other things related to those. At the Rayquaza Space Port, the Grand Phoenix, Star Nigel's Dreadnought Battleship was filled with gold bars to pay the debt for the service.
" What are you gonna do with your share?" Numbuh 5 asked the others.
" I promised Lizzie to take her on the most expensive restaurant."
Nigel said
" With the money, I should buy the parts for your airboards, expect them in a few days" Alpha said
"Wee! Airboards!" Numbuh 3 yelled
"My parents have to pay up the taxes to the KND Goverment or they'll take the house." Numbuh 4 said
After the conversation, Nigel and the other went aboard and to the command deck. The Grand Phoenix started its plasma engines and left for space.
"Numbuh 2, take us home."
"Aye Aye, Numbuh 1"
The Grand Phoenix was out of the Lyka Region, it was heading for Earth. What new adventures await our heroes? We'll find out later..................
Mission Accomplished
The End.
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Post by nathalie on Jun 1, 2006 2:08:06 GMT
woah... interesting...
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Post by victor on Jun 1, 2006 2:09:38 GMT
Looks horrible on the other side. Clarissa did die a cowards death. Yelling "NOOOOOOO!!!" were her final words.
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Post by nathalie on Jun 1, 2006 2:16:12 GMT
yes, I read that part!
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Post by victor on Jun 1, 2006 2:17:19 GMT
SLASH! The saber went
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Post by nathalie on Jun 1, 2006 2:32:30 GMT
uh...huh...
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Post by victor on Jun 1, 2006 2:33:17 GMT
Well, we have to think of how to make Imperial Invasion into a good fic.
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Post by nathalie on Jun 1, 2006 2:37:08 GMT
hmmm.......
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Post by victor on Jun 1, 2006 2:37:34 GMT
Any good ideas?
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Post by osumashi on Jul 31, 2006 1:01:01 GMT
I'm sorry for taking so long, but I'm finally here to review your story, Santoryu.
It was rather interesting, and with some work it could be made into more than an outline. A lot more detail will be needed to flesh everything out first.
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