A Super Kuki Story!

[flirtykuki101]

Thank you! I'll have the next Chapter up soon!

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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!

[flirtykuki101]

Chapter 5 is here guys! Sorry for the long wait ^^;

Chapter 5: Heading to the Zoo

The next morning, Kuki slowly unwrapped the bandage her dad put on her last night. as she unwrapped it she thought to herself, "Why would anyone want to hurt me?" She sighed sadly when she couldn't think of a reason, she got dressed and floated downstairs where her parents were ready to leave.

"Hey, Kuki did you sleep well last night?" Kani asked her, Kuki smiled slightly and nodded her head,

"Yes, I slept well, and my hand is all better." She said removing her pink glove to show her parents her hand. Genkei looked at it and said,

"Yes, I see. your healing power made that nasty burn disappear." Kuki slid her glove back on as Kani told her,

"Kuki we are also coming along on your trip to the zoo. as everybody else's parents including your friend Nigel's class too. Your teacher called to tell us." Kuki smiled and excited as ever said,

"Really?! Yaaay! I can't wait! Let's go." She said dragging her parents by the arms out the door. Once they got to the school Kani, and Genkei went to talk to the other adults, leaving Kuki to find her friends, Once she found them she ran up to them,

"Hi Guys! I'm so excited for the trip today!" The four kids nodded their heads, Abby said,

"Yeah, Today is gonna be SO cool!" They all started talking about the trip until it was time to board the school buses. Once everybody was on the bus, The buses began head toward the town Zoo, Everybody sang songs during the trip. Kuki was still sad over her attack and was unusually quiet, Kuki sighed as she gazed out the window. She suddenly felt a strange feeling that something bad was about to happen. She looked further ahead using her super vision and she could see that part of the bridge the buses were headed for was missing! Kuki gasped and jumped out of her seat, Much to everyone's confusion Kuki ran up to the Bus driver and tugged his shirt and said,

"Mr. Bus driver, Mr. Bus driver! you have to stop this bus!!" Ms Jodison, Kani and Genkei glared at her as the rest of the kids looked at her confused,

"Kuki! What's gotten into you?!" Genkei asked her. Kani added,

"Kuki get back in your seat right now." Ms Jodison also added,

"Kuki listen to your parents and get back in your seat!" Kuki tried to explain,

"But the bridge! It's gone!" And by the time everybody noticed it was too late, The bus driver tried to put on the brakes but it was no use, the bus fell off the edge. Everybody screamed in panic as the bus started to fall. Kani whispered to Kuki,

"Kuki, use your Powers to bring these buses to safety." Kuki looked unsure,

"But daddy! What should I do?" She said in a panic. Genkei Thought of something

"I know, Kuki Remember that Super Power you've been working on? Teleportation?" Kuki nodded her head, "Well use Teleportation to safely bring these buses to the other side of the bridge. Kuki shook her head,

"But I still don't know how to do that well enough." Kani said,

"Just try Kuki, You can do it." Kuki sighed and nodded her head. She took a deep breath and started to concentrate on the two buses falling. it was hard to concentrate with everyone screaming, but Kuki tried to anyway. Suddenly the two buses stopped falling as if they were both frozen in time and just about popped on to the other side of the bridge. Everyone stopped screaming when they realized they were safe. Ms Jodison asked everyone on the bus,

"Is Everybody okay?"Every one nodded their heads, wondering how did they get here. Kani, And Genkei Turned to their daughter,

"Kuki sweetie, You did it. You saved everyone's lives." Genkei said touching her shoulder. Kuki didn't say anything as she surprised herself that she saved everyone's lives. Kani waved his hand in front of her,

"Kuki? Dear are you okay?" Kuki then snapped out of her daze and smiled,

"Yes, I'm okay. I Did it. I used my super powers to help everyone." She said feeling pround of herself. Genkei smiled

"Yes, you sure did. We're very proud of you Kuki." Kuki hugged her parents and went back to sit next to her friends, Abby asked Kuki,

"Kuki did you see that?" Nigel added,

"I thought for sure we were done for!" Wally said crossing his arms,

"Well I wasn't scared." But hoagie said still shaking in fear,

"Yes you we're Wally! You were Crying!" Wally Blushed and elbowed him

"I was not! I had something in my eye!" Kuki giggled, that's when Nigel asked her,

"Hey Kuki, What were you doing over there while the bus was falling? I saw you were Closing your eyes and standing really still." Everybody looked at her as Kuki tried desperatley to come up with an explaination

"Oh T-That I was um Really Scared That's all." She said fiddling with her pink cape. Everybody looked at her seriously and then smiled at her,

"It's okay Kuki. I was scared too." Nigel said putting a hand on her shoulder. Kuki smiled as Both Buses started back on the road heading for the Town Zoo.

Well That's chapter Five! The next Chapter is Going to be So Crazy! I'll give you a little hint...The Next Chapter involves a kidnapping. The next chapter is SOOO Gonna rock! But tell me if you like this chapter okay? ;D I'll Give you all hugs if you do!! ;D ;D

[YazzyFrazzi]

Kidnapping! oO!

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Wooooooooooooooooooooooooow.

[numbuheightbitstar]

Well, I decided that, since you've been so good about commenting on Quest of the Avatar, and I've been commenting on other people's stories, I thought I'd take a look at Super Kuki.

After having read the first chapter, to be honest you started off a lot better than most newbie authors I've seen. The biggest problem I see with this chapter is the paragraphing. What I mean is, things like this:

flirtykuki101 said:

"Daddy, can we go back home? I don't wanna go to school anymore." Kani smiled and bent down to look at her,

"Why don't you want to go to school Kuki tell me?" Kuki looked away and twiddled her fingers,

"Because everybody's going to think I'm weird because I have super Powers..." Kani chuckled a little,

It should look like this:

flirtykuki101 said:

"Daddy, can we go back home? I don't wanna go to school anymore."

Kani smiled and bent down to look at her, "Why don't you want to go to school Kuki tell me?"

Kuki looked away and twiddled her fingers, "Because everybody's going to think I'm weird because I have super Powers..."

See the difference?

Hope this helped!

[flirtykuki101]

Oh, I see now. Thanks for you're help! I'm going to write this story even better. Thanks James! you're the best!

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Is there gonna be an update? *pouts* Please...?

[flirtykuki101]

Whoopsies! I'll update Right Now, I can't believe I forgot to...^^;

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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! ^^

[flirtykuki101]

Okay Here's Chapter Five, Sorry about the SUPER long Delay....

Chapter six: Someone Stole our parents!!!

The two buses finally arrived at the zoo, Ms Jodison got up to the front of the bus,

"Okay Everyone we've arrived at the zoo, Please get out of the bus in an orderly fashion." She instructed her class. The Group of five year old children blinked at her for a second and then shouted,

"YaaaaY!" And with that they ran out of the bus, Pushing their teacher to the side, The parents just smiled and got out of the bus with the children. Once the two buses of kids we're emptied, Ms. Jodison told the two groups,

"Okay Everyone first we are going to visit, The dolphin exibit." she said excitedly. Kuki squealed with excitement,

"Oh I LOVE dolphins, They're SOOOO Cute!" She cried happily. Wally rolled his eyes,

"Sharks are much better than some girly dolphins" he said grumpily. Kuki glared at him and argued,

"They are not! and dolphins are not girly!" She shouted, Wally Argued back and,

"they are too!"

"Are Not!"

"Are Too"

"Are Not!!" Abby, Nigel and Hoagie watched as Kuki and Wally argued, Abby Thought they would argue forever until Ms Jodison Got between the two arguing kids,

"That's Enough you two! No Arguing. Now apologize to each other right now." She ordered. Kuki and Wally grumbled, not really wanting to apologize to each other, Until Kuki looked at her parents, who were giving her a serious look, Kuki then turned to Wally,

"Sorry Wally..." She apologized. Wally looked at her and muttered to himself, But after getting glares from his own parents he said to her,

"Sorry...Uh..Kuki" He apologized, Ms. Jodison smiled and said,

"There Now don't you two feel better?" She asked. The two kids stayed quiet. The rest of the kids and parents who were staring at them started to walk off to where the dolphins were swimming, The Dolphin Trainer in the Zoo, Called out to them

"Hello Everyone! Who wants to be the first to Feed the dolphins?" He asked the large group of kids. The kids all raised their hands eagerly. The Dolphin Trainer looked at all the kids,

"Hmmm? Now who should I pick?" He thought out loud Then he saw Kuki and pointed "Aha! How about you?" He pointed to Kuki.

"Me?" She asked a little surprised, She was sure he'd pick someone else from some reason. The dolphin trainer nodded his head

"Yeah you! Come on!" Kuki slowly walked to the trainer. The trainer Handed Kuki a small fish and said,

"Now The dolphins are very friendly animals. but be gentle okay?"
Kuki nodded and held the fish over the water,

"Come on out Dolphins, Come on Don't be shy" And just about instantly as she said that, Two dolphins swam up to her, one jumped up to take the fish out of her hand, the other dolphin sqeaked Wanting attention from Kuki too. Kuki giggled and pet the dolphins head,

"Hi There Cute dolphins? I'm glad you two decided to come out." Just then two more dolphins came to Kuki wanting attention from her, She giggled as fed and pet them some more. The Dolphin Trainer was amazed

"Wow, I've never seen any of them so friendly before." he said to the crowd "Give this young lady around of applause." Evberyone claped for Kuki as she walked back to where her parents were, They grinned at her as Kani Whispered in her ear,

"Kuki You never told us you had the power to talk to animals..." Kuki giggled and walked to her friends were,

"That was so Cool Kuki!" Abby said to her.
"Yeah that was cool" Hoagie agreed. Kuki Then turned to Wally and asked,

"So do you still think Dolphins are Girly?" Wally looked at her then at the dolphins who were now doing backflips in the water. "Eh, They're okay..." He muttered as they walked to the next exibit. "Oh Yeah!" Wally cried as he saw what kind of animals were being shown in this exibit, There was all types of cool snakes and lizards. All the children Ran to look at them in their tanks. Kuki was Choosing which snake or lizard to go look at when she heard some one whisper,

"Pssst! Hey Kid! You in the pink and green!" Kuki looked around,

"Huh? Hey who said that?" She asked still looking around. The voice then said

"Over here! Behind you." Kuki turned and saw that it wasa large lizard talking to her. Kuki walked up to the tank. The lizard looked at her and asked her,

"Do All humans dress so weird like you?" looking at her pink and green outfit. Kuki looked down at her own clothes,

"Um, No they don't. And my Outfit isn't weird! Your not a very nice lizard you know." She said begininig to walk away. The lizard called for her to come back

"Hey wait come back I'm sorry. I mean your not the only kid I saw today who looks weird." Kuki gave him a curious look,

"What do you mean? The kids here dress normal" She said. The lizard shook his head,

"Well not all of them, A few hours ago. Five kids with creepy blue eyes and came here looking around and all." Kuki thought,

"Five kids, with creepy blue eyes?..." She gasped as she asked, "You mean the delightful children?! Well Do you know where they went." The lizard shook his head

"No, They left after talking with a dark guy with yellow eyes." Kuki Thought about this person that the lizard was now talking about,

"A guy with yellow eyes?...Sorry but I don't know how your talking about." She said shaking her head and shrugging. The lizard then told her,

"Well, Keep an eye out for them, I think they were dangerous and you and all your friends should be careful." He warned her. Kuki looked back at her class. Then smiled at the lizard

"Thank you for your warning Mr.Lizard. I'll be careful" The lizard nodded

"It's okay, Now Go on. Your classes are leaving you behind." Looked back and saw that everyone was leaving, she then ran off with the class. While looking at the Lion Exibit and Bear exibit Kuki Continued to look around for the Delightful Children. Soon it was time for lunch. All the kids sat around tables waiting for their parents and teachers. Kuki still continued to look around for the Delightful Children. Nigel, Abby, Hoagie, and Wally watched her curiously,

"Um Kuki? What are you looking for?" Nigel asked her. Kuki turned around and said quickly,

"Oh nothing, nothing..." She said trying to convince them, but it wasn't working. Kuki sighed and said, "Okay, I'm looking for the..." She was cut off by one kid saying

"Hey look!" He shouted pointing at the sky. Everyone looked at what he was pointing at and gasped. it looked like a plane with a huge net at the bottom.

"Is this part of the Zoo?" Hoagie asked,

"I dunno..." Abby answered him both still looking at the flying plane, Nigel stared at the plane too,

"You know, it looks like it's heading for the snack bar where all the adults are..." Kuki Looked at it too and then at the group of adults buying lunch for them at the snack bar. The Plane was now over Everyone's parents including the two teachers of both classes. Kuki Gasped and Shouted to her own parents,

"Mom, Daddy Look Out!!" They all looked at her. Just then The net fired froim the ship, trapping the group of adults and reeling them up to the plane. all the children Paniced and ran around screaming. Kuki looked up at the plane and shouted,

"Hey you dumb Plane! Leave our Mommies and Daddies alone!" All the children started yelling at the plane too hoping it will let their parents go. But it didn't, it just kept reeling them in. Kuki Wanted to fly and save them, But She couldn't do that because of the promise she made to her parents about not using her powers in front of the other kids. What could she do? She felt so helpless and scared. Nigel Then saw the people Driving the plane and gasped

"Guys look! It's The Delightful Children and their dad!" He said pointing up. Kuki Saw them and said

"He's a Big Meanie!" She shouted with tears in her eyes.

"Yeah, Girl he's a Bad Guy." Abby agreed. Then The plane started to fly away. The kids continued to shout at the plane, Some kids were even trying to throw rocks and anything they could find at the plane, but it was no use. The plane then began to fly away. leaving a bunch of sad confused and frightened little kids behind. All the kids started to cry even Wally. Kuki Dropped to the floor on her knees and began to cry also. " I should've gone to save them..." She though to herself "But then everyone would think I'm weird if I did. and there's nothing more worse than people thinking your strange right?..." She looked up and asked herself with tears coming down her eyes "...Right?"

Aw Man, Everyone's Parents got kidnapped...Poor Guys. And What's Kuki and The other kids to do?! Kuki can't use her super powers and besides they're just a bunch of five year old kids, They can't take on The Delightful Children and their Dad by themselves right?...Hmmm? Or Can they?... Anyway I hope you liked this chapter, sorry if it's a little long...^^:

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I say they can. I mean the DC are as old as they are...and these little kids have SuperKuki. ^^

Brilliantly done. ^^

[flirtykuki101]

I Think Super Kuki and The others will be able to handle the DC okay, if they can come up with a plan and track them down of course...

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W00t. ^^